Story: Bridled Fury (Update Part 12!)

[Crossover] God of war pony time! 

Author: ToonNinja

Description: Kratos, Ghost of Sparta, finds himself taken to a world very different from his own. Will he be able to continue his journey for vengeance, or will the former god of war finally meet his match in Equestria?

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109 Responses to Story: Bridled Fury (Update Part 12!)

  1. Anonymous says:

    Does this involve Coltos (Right, that's already enough of that) ripping off Celestia's horn and killing her with it? Because I call out of character if it doesn't.

  2. I could not stop laughing.Amazing job. ^_^

  3. Well, this promises to be… interesting.

  4. Anonymous says:

    I smell a new ship….Fluttershy X Kratos. *Headdesk*

  5. Anonymous says:

    @Anon2 Ohgoddon'tgotherepleaseAlso: It Was Bound To Happen Eventually.

  6. Anonymous says:

    It needs to be at least 20% longer.Much longer to be exact.More, please!!!

  7. I'm not a fan of GOW and kratos and gory typesBut nice work on kratos pony whoever made that lol

  8. Anonymous says:

    OH NO YOU DIDN'T!!! :D*reads eagerly*

  9. Anonymous says:

    Pinkie Pie might be the first one to get slaughtered… well he shuts her up.

  10. Anonymous says:

    I like it and I don't even played GoW.

  11. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousNah, Pinkie is indestructible, even for Kratos.

  12. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousWell wouldn't be the first we already got Kratos x Celestia X Luna ^^http://ponibooru.413chan.net/post/view/643?search=kratos

  13. ToonNinja says:

    @AnonymousI can assure you it never goes there. Sorry if that's not quite clear, although things get explained later.Also, HOLY HELL YOU PEOPLE LIKE MY WORK. I mean, uh, good to hear all the positive reviews

  14. dylanallen92 says:

    i like it and i've never played God Of War sounds like a good game though anyway i'm wondering if there will be some good fights scenes and looking forward to seeing what the Gods and Titans will do now that Kratos is in equestria and seeing how the ponies will react to the fact not all Gods are as benevolent as Celestia and Luna

  15. Silfer says:

    Who wants to see the Bloody QTE execution for Celestia? *raise hand*

  16. Anonymous says:

    Oh, Pinkie's going to throw a welcome party for Kratos, isn't she?

  17. ToonNinja says:

    There will be fights, and there will be dead things. Not promising anything for Celestia, though; she's one-half of the Equestrian pantheon, and I don't think Kratos would derail the sun a second time. Of course, that probably won't keep him from trying.

  18. Anonymous says:

    @SilferPress X to BOW DOWN TO YOUR GODDESS.ALL HAIL CELESTIA! (jk)

  19. Anonymous says:

    @SilferPress X to BOW DOWN TO YOUR GODDESS.ALL HAIL CELESTIA! (jk)

  20. Jeqstream says:

    Oh god. Brilliant. Lolling forever XD

  21. Anonymous says:

    Kratos wouldn't start shit. Bitches don't mess with Fluttershy. Not to mention that Kratos has the capacity for compassion. I hope the author remembers that.

  22. ////"How do I know you're not a spy?""A spy? A spy from whom?"////Damn, Fluttershy has got some spy skills here.

  23. Anonymous says:

    I don't think Kratos should have been affected by the stare, he should have contested it with one of his own.

  24. Talk about a hilarious concept; Kratos, god of bloodshed, in a world of seemingly girly-girl horses.Not only is it ironic, it's been pulled off excellently.

  25. Anonymous says:

    Great story i love both GoW and MLP i want to see some fights though great work 10/10

  26. ToonNinja says:

    @AnonymousNopony messes with Fluttershy and lives. And yeah, even the most heartless bastard has potential for good. Just look at the HItler Bunker videos.

  27. Anonymous says:

    I state that it shall forever be Fluttershy X Rarity Spa buddies, and Fluttershy X Kratos Lunch buddies.

  28. Anonymous says:

    I know! If kratos hurts anypony in ponyville, something snaps in her brain wich triggers her inner spartan…Fluttershy will say: THIS IS EQUESTRIAAAAAAAA!!!!

  29. Anonymous says:

    This shit is too funny.

  30. TiredAnon says:

    Ah, that was a fun little story. Characterization of Kratos is a bit off, but it kinda has to be unless you want Grimdark.Looking forward to chapter 5.

  31. Anonymous says:

    The lack of bloodshed is unnerving me. I hope there will be copious amounts of limb-tearing and eye-gouging action in future instalments.

  32. zanziabr says:

    To last anon:I think the title BRIDLED fury would have been a big enough hint that this story would pretty toned down compared to the GOW universe…..Plus these are ponies learning about magic and friendship, how could anyone possibly-CUPCAKES-Oh god….. that was evil…. I cant believe someone actually -ROCKET TO INASNITY-NO…. NO MORE PLEASE-EQUESTRIA AFTER DARK-FOR GODS SAKE CANDLEJACK GET ME OUT OF HE-

  33. Anonymous says:

    Manure's about to get real!!

  34. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousApparently the violence is about to pick up soon, I can already feel it. I hope its something like Kratos killing Celestia the same way he did with Poseidon in GoW 3.

  35. Anonymous says:

    looking forward to chapter 5 keep up the good work mate 10/10

  36. Anonymous says:

    WHY NO CELESTIA BREAKING.RARARARGH

  37. Anonymous says:

    Y U SO WEAK KRATOS

  38. Thesyn says:

    lol at celestia kicking his ass like he deserves, tho i do o so love kratos and all his games. and lol at pinkies quick time reference XD

  39. Anonymous says:

    'Press 'X' not to die.' Best. Line. Ever.

  40. Thesyn says:

    actually i would really like to see kratos kill celestia and then twilight go on a rampage at her teacher and best friend dying and slaughter kratos and all the olympian gods lol

  41. Anonymous says:

    I'd like to see Kratos take on the Ursa Major. Not Minor. Major.Or make him fight the Hydra.

  42. shmoogy says:

    i went back and started replaying the god of war series the other day then wishing i could fight celestia..oh well

  43. Zanzibar says:

    Grrrrr….Lucky for Celestia that she didnt have to send kratos to the sun…..There would hav been HELL to pay. Something Kratos knows quite well how to deliver, having been to hell and back around 2 or 3 times.I love the story so far, but really I think the best they can do is teach Kratos to at least not kill EVERYONE on his way to olympus….. The kind of crap hes been through is simply not something you forgive, especially being the god of war and all.im also kinda hoping he puts Celestia in her place before he leaves, mostly cuz im pretty biased to any 'high and mighty' characters, and even ZEUS fears him for crying out loud!

  44. chase says:

    If Kratos kills Fluttershy i will rip his sack out through his eyesockets

  45. ToonNinja says:

    @ThesynThat's… not quite what I had in mind.@AnonymousPretty sure he already killed a hydra. Ursa Major would be interesting…@chaseI'm the AUTHOR, and I'd tear out Kratos' intestine through his ears. He won't lay a hoof on her.

  46. Hycind says:

    @ZanzibarI think GoW 3 makes 4 times, and he ripped Hades' soul out through his forehead. I think Kratos can find some way to maneuver himself out of the sun, or somehow throw Zeus into it. God help Celestia after Kratos find her, I imagine him ripping off all of her limbs and shoving pointy sticks into the wounds. I hope he does something to seriously maim her before he goes back to Earth.

  47. Thesyn says:

    @Hycindhonestly i dont think he could take her. he might take zues, sure. he controls the weather and shit. she controls the FUCKING SUN. bit of a power difference there

  48. Thesyn says:

    @Hycindhonestly i dont think he could take her. he might take zues, sure. he controls the weather and shit. she controls the FUCKING SUN. bit of a power difference there

  49. Thesyn says:

    @ToonNinja*shrug* twilight killing everything would be awesome. but i cant help but laugh at some of this seeing as ive played evrey GoW game ever made and seeing him portrayed like this is just awesome XD keep up the good work man!

  50. Thesyn says:

    @ToonNinja*shrug* twilight killing everything would be awesome. but i cant help but laugh at some of this seeing as ive played evrey GoW game ever made and seeing him portrayed like this is just awesome XD keep up the good work man!

  51. Anonymous says:

    When Kratos finds out what that bridle does he is going to be epically pissed.

  52. Anonymous says:

    When Kratos finds out what that bridle does he is going to be epically pissed.

  53. Anonymous says:

    @chaseBad idea. Kratos would just climb out of hell again and come after you. Every nerve in your body would scream in agony for hours until you drown in your own blood. So yeah, maybe you need a better plan… just in case…

  54. Anonymous says:

    @chaseBad idea. Kratos would just climb out of hell again and come after you. Every nerve in your body would scream in agony for hours until you drown in your own blood. So yeah, maybe you need a better plan… just in case…

  55. Anonymous says:

    LOL @ the opening.Voice: Hey Kratos go touch that thing over there.Kratos: Well, OK, if you– wait a minute, are you going to try to kill me just like everyone else who tries to help me?Voice: Of course not.Kratos: Really? How do I know you're not lying?Voice: Because I just healed you right now. That must mean I'm trustworthy, right? What's the worst that could happenKratos: …weeell… I suppose just this once… *goes to touch the thing**thing explodes*Kratos: OH ZEUSDAMMIT!!!Oh, poor gullible Kratos. You wouldn't last ten minutes with GLaDOS, now, would you?

  56. Anonymous says:

    LOL @ the opening.Voice: Hey Kratos go touch that thing over there.Kratos: Well, OK, if you– wait a minute, are you going to try to kill me just like everyone else who tries to help me?Voice: Of course not.Kratos: Really? How do I know you're not lying?Voice: Because I just healed you right now. That must mean I'm trustworthy, right? What's the worst that could happenKratos: …weeell… I suppose just this once… *goes to touch the thing**thing explodes*Kratos: OH ZEUSDAMMIT!!!Oh, poor gullible Kratos. You wouldn't last ten minutes with GLaDOS, now, would you?

  57. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousNow THAT would be a crossover! This one's great too, but God of War/Portal would be AMAZING.

  58. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousNow THAT would be a crossover! This one's great too, but God of War/Portal would be AMAZING.

  59. Dedicated GoW fan here, I gotta say that this is one of the most entertaining fanfics I've read. The pure brutality and destruction that is Kratos and the entertainment that is Ponies. Awesome job!

  60. Dedicated GoW fan here, I gotta say that this is one of the most entertaining fanfics I've read. The pure brutality and destruction that is Kratos and the entertainment that is Ponies. Awesome job!

  61. Anonymous says:

    I don't understand how the author can have almost no bloodshed in the story (except for the pre-pony battle in Olympus) and then go on to have Kratos tortured by the CMC (well, based on the data they have no idea what they are doing with dangerous medical implements) for his backstory. I mean, that story is basically what caused him to be traumatized by the death of his family and go on a genocide of gods. WHh would anyone want that?Also, if that's the element of HONESTY, I hate to think about what the other elements will be like…

  62. Anonymous says:

    I don't understand how the author can have almost no bloodshed in the story (except for the pre-pony battle in Olympus) and then go on to have Kratos tortured by the CMC (well, based on the data they have no idea what they are doing with dangerous medical implements) for his backstory. I mean, that story is basically what caused him to be traumatized by the death of his family and go on a genocide of gods. WHh would anyone want that?Also, if that's the element of HONESTY, I hate to think about what the other elements will be like…

  63. ryan says:

    I feel that Pinkie needs to reference the game more."Press X to not die". Classic one, but there should be more.

  64. ryan says:

    I feel that Pinkie needs to reference the game more."Press X to not die". Classic one, but there should be more.

  65. Girom says:

    OH GOD THE LIVING LIFE OUT OF ME IS DEAD BECAUSE GOD OF WAR X PONIES. MY LIFE IS HALF COMPLETE

  66. Girom says:

    OH GOD THE LIVING LIFE OUT OF ME IS DEAD BECAUSE GOD OF WAR X PONIES. MY LIFE IS HALF COMPLETE

  67. Blue says:

    This story kind of sucks. Seeing Kratos completely dominated by the cast goes against his nature a little to much.And I think Celestia's sun is probably more like Helios' chariot than the real sun if she can move it.

  68. Blue says:

    This story kind of sucks. Seeing Kratos completely dominated by the cast goes against his nature a little to much.And I think Celestia's sun is probably more like Helios' chariot than the real sun if she can move it.

  69. Anonymous says:

    ALL MY FUCKING BITS TAKE THEMSeriously though, I'm craving for more.Best fanfic ever.

  70. Anonymous says:

    ALL MY FUCKING BITS TAKE THEMSeriously though, I'm craving for more.Best fanfic ever.

  71. Steel says:

    @ Blueit actually what makes most of the comic "click" is the fact that Kratos (a man who makes The Hulk look even tempered and diplomatic) is being bested by ponies. The whole idea is just bonkers and funny as hell.And to paraphase Ghost Busters. When a Living God tells you that the sun is a gaint flaming ball of DEATH that she can plunk you in the middle of YOU BELIVE HER.

  72. Steel says:

    @ Blueit actually what makes most of the comic "click" is the fact that Kratos (a man who makes The Hulk look even tempered and diplomatic) is being bested by ponies. The whole idea is just bonkers and funny as hell.And to paraphase Ghost Busters. When a Living God tells you that the sun is a gaint flaming ball of DEATH that she can plunk you in the middle of YOU BELIVE HER.

  73. Anonymous says:

    @ryan>implying the whole series is not referencing the game

  74. Anonymous says:

    @ryan>implying the whole series is not referencing the game

  75. Zanzibar says:

    Im really looking forward to the next few chapters, if not because its an awesome fanfic then because the authors already implied Kratos is gonna get even with Celestia(obviously not KILL… just put in her place)Oh, and there's no way in hell Kratos is gonna make it through the rest of those 'lessons' without snapping so hard even the bridle won't be able to temper him…. there's only so much humiliation a god of war can take.

  76. Zanzibar says:

    Im really looking forward to the next few chapters, if not because its an awesome fanfic then because the authors already implied Kratos is gonna get even with Celestia(obviously not KILL… just put in her place)Oh, and there's no way in hell Kratos is gonna make it through the rest of those 'lessons' without snapping so hard even the bridle won't be able to temper him…. there's only so much humiliation a god of war can take.

  77. @ZanzibarSame here. Really hard to just accept Kratos being controlled like that even if it is by a god of a different realm. Yes Kratos is a human being underneath it all but at his core he's still someone not to be trifled with. He does need to find a way out of being dominated completely. He's always been one that will see things as a means to an end, as the author has already said.

  78. @ZanzibarSame here. Really hard to just accept Kratos being controlled like that even if it is by a god of a different realm. Yes Kratos is a human being underneath it all but at his core he's still someone not to be trifled with. He does need to find a way out of being dominated completely. He's always been one that will see things as a means to an end, as the author has already said.

  79. Anonymous says:

    @A Voice in the Dark and ZanzibarI do hope Kratos is going to break with his rage soon, it's awfully strange for him to be rather submissive and even allowing three foals to mess around with him.If he continues acting like this i'll be wondering where did the real Kratos go.

  80. Anonymous says:

    @A Voice in the Dark and ZanzibarI do hope Kratos is going to break with his rage soon, it's awfully strange for him to be rather submissive and even allowing three foals to mess around with him.If he continues acting like this i'll be wondering where did the real Kratos go.

  81. Anonymous says:

    @BlueDon't worry guys, I have an idea that Kratos is gonna be a bit more domineering in later installments. This quote is from the Deviantart Comments section for part seven:"There will be action, trust me. I have plans involving… stars, shall we say, in a later chapter."If he's hinting at what I think he's hinting at, the ponies will soon learn not to screw with… Coltos.

  82. Anonymous says:

    @BlueDon't worry guys, I have an idea that Kratos is gonna be a bit more domineering in later installments. This quote is from the Deviantart Comments section for part seven:"There will be action, trust me. I have plans involving… stars, shall we say, in a later chapter."If he's hinting at what I think he's hinting at, the ponies will soon learn not to screw with… Coltos.

  83. Anonymous says:

    I love the IDEA of this story, but Kratos is just breaking character so hard that it's distracting. It's not that he's showing restraint and so on, you understand. It's that he's being such a frightened puppy about it. Seriously, being intimidated by ANGEL? Being afraid of the CMC? Panicking even. I hope this is addressed at some point. Or at least toned way down because seriously. Still, 4/5 for concept and potential. Definitely going to keep reading and see where it goes.

  84. Anonymous says:

    I love the IDEA of this story, but Kratos is just breaking character so hard that it's distracting. It's not that he's showing restraint and so on, you understand. It's that he's being such a frightened puppy about it. Seriously, being intimidated by ANGEL? Being afraid of the CMC? Panicking even. I hope this is addressed at some point. Or at least toned way down because seriously. Still, 4/5 for concept and potential. Definitely going to keep reading and see where it goes.

  85. Anonymous says:

    Yeah, we want Kratos to kill Celestia! How DARE she…stop him from killing everyone? And try to help make him a better person with extremely gentle admonishment and the help of kind and supportive ponies to show him that there's more to life than drowning in the blood of your enemies?Man, what a bitch, amirite?

  86. Anonymous says:

    Yeah, we want Kratos to kill Celestia! How DARE she…stop him from killing everyone? And try to help make him a better person with extremely gentle admonishment and the help of kind and supportive ponies to show him that there's more to life than drowning in the blood of your enemies?Man, what a bitch, amirite?

  87. Anonymous says:

    @ryan We're going to need streamers, balloons, cupcakes… OO, OO! And PUZZLES!

  88. Anonymous says:

    @ryan We're going to need streamers, balloons, cupcakes… OO, OO! And PUZZLES!

  89. Anonymous says:

    I like it so far even the whole, Kratos being the "captive" of the CMC mainly because it's kinda like the humor with the CMC that you would see in the show. I wonder what the Mane 6 would think of Kratos if they saw the events that took place in all the GoW games and wherever it left off at in III because if Gaia has fallen off the cliff then doesn't that mean he's already killed Posiden. What if Zues or Gaia targeted the Mane 6 with nightmares due to Luna being focused on keeping the nightmares away from Kratos.

  90. Anonymous says:

    I like it so far even the whole, Kratos being the "captive" of the CMC mainly because it's kinda like the humor with the CMC that you would see in the show. I wonder what the Mane 6 would think of Kratos if they saw the events that took place in all the GoW games and wherever it left off at in III because if Gaia has fallen off the cliff then doesn't that mean he's already killed Posiden. What if Zues or Gaia targeted the Mane 6 with nightmares due to Luna being focused on keeping the nightmares away from Kratos.

  91. I think the whole 'Kratos not permantently flipping his shit' deal works better if you imagine Kratos being the one from the first game, where he was an actual person, and not just a fleshy buzz-saw.From what I gather, he was a violent dude (like many spartans) but he was still a person.

  92. I think the whole 'Kratos not permantently flipping his shit' deal works better if you imagine Kratos being the one from the first game, where he was an actual person, and not just a fleshy buzz-saw.From what I gather, he was a violent dude (like many spartans) but he was still a person.

  93. lmaozorzz says:

    There better be some sort of violence involvIng kratos hurting something else, not trying to sound like a fanboy or anything but it makes me mad to think of kratos beIng treated his way with no apparent means of "release"

  94. lmaozorzz says:

    There better be some sort of violence involvIng kratos hurting something else, not trying to sound like a fanboy or anything but it makes me mad to think of kratos beIng treated his way with no apparent means of "release"

  95. ToonNinja says:

    @lmaozorzzHe'll get his violence on, trust me. I've got a fight scene in the works that I'm pretty sure will get everyone's attention. I'll give you a hint: it involves stars.

  96. Anonymous says:

    This prooves that fluttershy is op as ****

  97. Anonymous says:

    This just gets better and better. I can't even fathom the win right now.

  98. Anonymous says:

    It's fun to see Zeus with little to no power over Celestia or Luna. I can just picture him stomping his little hooves in frustration like when Rarity gets dirty.

  99. Allow me to do my best impression of GIR:FINALLY!*explodes*

  100. PinkPutty says:

    Oh man, that RATM/Andy Griffin show at the end was hilarious. I would pay money to see that.

  101. Zhuull says:

    I really like the story, but find the interactions between the Princesses and Zeus very dissatisfying and slightly out of character for them. Please don't forget that Zeus is a murdering, raping, torturing bastard and fully deserves everything Kratos wants to give him. For that matter ALL of the Olympians deserve Kratos, even Athena, never forget Arachne!

  102. ToonNinja says:

    @ZhuullI am fully aware of just how despicable and loathsome Zeus is. Don't think for a moment that I pity him. That little "That is my son" thing is just his attempt at guilt-tripping Celestia.Lemme tell you, the last few chapters or so are going to feel GOOD.

  103. Anonymous says:

    it's a fantastic story 🙂 hope kratos shows up celestia for her humiliation of him earlier in the story oh and sorry to be pedantic but Cthulhu isn't a god he is one of the great old ones who are subservient to the Other Gods (that's their name not a delineation) like Yog'Sothoth, again sorry but i am a huge H.P. Lovecraft fanboy

  104. Xuncu says:

    Heh, not bad. Not bad at all.

  105. Anonymous says:

    This is how you do a crossover people. A clash in character, ethos, style, finding common ground in the pantheons, and keeping every character in pony form.

  106. Anonymous says:

    "…That sounds suspiciously like my childhood." ROFLMAOCOPTER!

  107. ToonNinja says:

    @AnonymousNone taken. I only have a passing knowledge of Lovecraft, but I could never have forgiven myself if I missed that opportunity.

  108. Anonymous says:

    hello im new to the whole devant art thing but i love your story its so cool and i was wondering when will the next installment be sorrt for sounding moaning but i really read it :3

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