Story: Confessions and Considerations (Update Story 6 Part 5-9!)

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Author: BronyNeumo

Description: In the wake of a fun performance turned dramatic, two mares weigh their feelings for one another. In a sea of internal doubt and external crisis, might two struggling souls meet and find happiness together?

Confessions and Considerations

Additional Tags: Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Shipping, suspense, falling

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19 Responses to Story: Confessions and Considerations (Update Story 6 Part 5-9!)

  1. Anonymous says:

    Ooooooh, another ship. This should be interesting.

  2. TenchiFreak5 says:

    Favorite Image Ever = Instant Read.

  3. Just want to say this is my favorite image ever.

  4. Anonymous says:

    Labels: Author: BronyNeumo. Applejack, Cutie Mark Crusaders, ^ dat period

  5. Anonymous says:

    bookmarked for future read. Can't wait for more of this.

  6. TenchiFreak5 says:

    This was a good start (though for what I'm not exactly sure, if only because it almost seems self-contained as is). Nice characterization throughout, and ta particularly clever way of starting the story.Main problems with it were grammatical. Quotation marks in particular tended to be misplaced, but there was also some comma mistakes and some occasional spelling hiccups (of the "used the wrong spelling of the word" variety mostly).I'll keep my eye on it.

  7. KShrike says:

    I'm just going to not approve… silently.And be a grown up and NOT 1 star it.

  8. Anonymous says:

    Shipping is gross. Can you perverts PLEASE stop making MLP into a sexual perverted "furry" fandom?God, I hate that.

  9. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousNo.You have two choices. Read this, or don't read this. That's it.

  10. @AnonymousNope.aviAnd not all of it is sexual (I haven't read this one yet, so this does not apply completely but I'm just protesting your post.) sometimes we just want to see our characters fall in love in a good fic. If your protesting applies to the supposed 'sexual deviancy' of two members of the same sex falling in love, I will ignore everything you post in response to this because I don't respond to homophobes.

  11. Jacob Beck says:

    This is the best Appledash fic I've read in a while, probably ever.

  12. Brony Neumo says:

    Thanks everybody who enjoyed it!@Techifreak: This story can essentially be called self-contained, but I'm writing several sequels to it.Also, I do try, but grammar is not exactly my forte. I need an editor, but I have no ide how to get one…@Anonymous 1:39: No one is asking you to read it.

  13. Tadgh says:

    @Brony NeumoI would be glad to edit your fics for grammar/punctuation issues in the future. Feel free to send me an e-mail at gtown111@hotmail.com

  14. Brony Neumo says:

    @TadghThat you! I should have the first sequel to this done in a week or two!

  15. Tadgh says:

    @Brony NeumoI can't wait! Loved your first one.

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