Story: Luna’s Best Night Ever (Update Part 10!)

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Author: The-Symbol-Dynamic

Description: Princess Luna only wants to do her part to make the Grand Galloping Gala the best night ever for her saviors, the Elements of Harmony. She sets out on a mission, inspired by their song, to work behind the scenes and ensure everything works out perfectly for everyone.

All Parts after the break!

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22 Responses to Story: Luna’s Best Night Ever (Update Part 10!)

  1. Anonymous says:

    So TAHT'S how it all happened…

  2. Anonymous says:

    Lol, 'trolls of myth'. And I love how in this she's named Abacus 'Abby'.This was quite well written, I really enjoyed it.

  3. Anonymous says:

    "Unforeseen Consequences"why can't i stop thinking about Half-Life now?

  4. TenchiFreak5 says:

    Abacus tag?*instantly reads*

  5. Homfrog says:

    Extremely well-written, although a tad unbelievable. I found it hard to read after the realization that Luna made Blue-blood be a jerk. Still, it was endearing and cute.

  6. Thesyn says:

    that was REALLY good…maybe make this into a series? it has alot of potential for sure

  7. Anonymous says:

    Well, it was quite an entertaining read. Nothing amazing, but good, quirky idea, an adorable Luna and an abacus. The writing could use some last-minute polish, especially the summarisation at the end of Luna "helping" each of the mane cast felt a little forced. My only other concern is that, as a whole, it feels unfinished, though, despite the [COMPLETE] tag – the abrupt ending in particular makes it seem more of a first chapter than anything. Good work, nothing spectacular, but solid and fun. 4/5

  8. Anonymous says:

    Meh. I liked the story but I found it hard to read. Some of the sentences ran on a bit, and the vocabulary range left much to be desired. I'd read a sequel if this was improved on, however.

  9. Anonymous says:

    More please. 🙂

  10. Thank you all for your comments and critiques and for taking time to tell me what you think and what could use improving.With regards to the "Complete" tag, that's only because it's a stand-alone story and I planned to go through with my idea for more chapters on the condition that people actually wanted more. Since that seems to be the case I'll get to work on continuing.

  11. Anonymous says:

    More!!!!!! Please 🙂

  12. Anonymous says:

    I can't say anything more except that good fanfics such as this have kept my interest of ponies before the second season comes along the way.You sir, did a good job!

  13. Whoo! Do I get a cookie?

  14. DaB. says:

    I loved it that the abbacus has a name. A sequel would be nice indeed.

  15. Dawnsinger says:

    Uh… in what way was this updated?

  16. PewnyPL says:

    In none… The only thing I noticed is that Luna's Laughter Part 1 turned into Part 4 of the base one. And they both link to the same thing… Seth must be trolling, on authors DA nothing changed, unless he deleted that chapter for some reason

  17. WTBrony says:

    Damn it, I saw this and got all excited for an update. Way to be a tease.

  18. PewnyPL says:

    Oh look, Seth removed "Luna's Laughter" section altogether now… Talk about confusing people…

  19. Popcorn says:

    RE: End of Chapter 4 – Curiouser and curiouser, I say. Looking forward to your next part!

  20. Will you all hate me if I confess to having written a Luna X Twilight clopfic instead of finishing chapter five? I needed something to take my mind off of my frustration with the musical number that's in the next chapter and it just sorta happened on its own. On the up side, chapter five is almost done and I feel refreshed enough now to finish the damn thing so I can show it to you all. Once my editing team (see: one coffee-flavored pony who I force to put up with my shenanigans) has looked over both chapter five and The Scent of Violets they'll get put on my dA page. By the end of the weekend there'll be a new chapter ready to be submitted to ED and a saucy vignette for anypony who likes that sort of thing. If you dislike clopfiction then I apologize. I write what I feel compelled to write and I felt compelled to write something steamy. It's just how I roll. *sunglasses*

  21. Anonymous says:

    Now I can see the beginning of the second season:A re-cap on all the thigs that went wrong, and how Luna was actually responsible for everything.Well, everyone except Pinki Pie. She brought what she did on all by herself.

  22. Huh, chapter 3 does not seem to load at all, whether following the link or going from your DA page. Thst said, I guess I'm not too disappointed. This is a plot I've seen before, and far better written. A number of the running gags were amusing (which abavus came first, this or Progress?), but I did find my disbelief stretched far too thinly in the first part. Plus, it's a story about Luna not doing a whole lot.

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