Story: Moldbreaker (Update Story 2 Part 1+2+3+4!)


Author: Ryo242

Description: When Celestia ends up causing a star to fall just before Nightmare Moon’s return, the future changes upon its arrival in Equestria.

Moldbreaker Chapter 1: Arrival
Moldbreaker Chapter 2: Rumors
Moldbreaker Chapter 3: Uncontrolled
Moldbreaker Chapter 4: Prophecy
Moldbreaker Chapter 5: Apples
Moldbreaker Chapter 6: Meetings
Moldbreaker Chapter 7: Surprises
Moldbreaker Chapter 8: Darkness
Moldbreaker Chapter 9: Judgement
Moldbreaker Chapter 10: Meetings
Moldbreaker Chapter 11: Dawn

Additional Tags: Shooting Star, NoShipping, Magick, Alternate Timeline, Mystery


Description: Spike enlists the aid of a friend to gain Rarity’s attention, but the spell has unpredicted side effects.

Unwanted Attention Part 1 (New!)
Unwanted Attention Part 2 (New!)
Unwanted Attention Part 3 (New!)
Unwanted Attention Part 4 (New!)

Additional Tags: Lolshipping, Spike, Ray, Episodic, Comedy

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23 Responses to Story: Moldbreaker (Update Story 2 Part 1+2+3+4!)

  1. Nitro says:

    No shipping tag? Also first(?)

  2. Anonymous says:

    Why do so many people hate shipping?

  3. Anonymous says:

    I get an error message on chapter 2 and 3

  4. Anonymous says:

    For some reason I don't have permission for chapters two and three.

  5. Robin says:

    Aww, for some reason I can't access chapters 2 and 3. But I'm filled with questions and want them answered naaaooow! 😉

  6. Yep, 2 and 3 are derped… I keep getting the google docs sign-in page.

  7. Ryo242 says:

    I'm on it sirs! Ohmigoshohmigoshohmigosh

  8. Anonymous says:

    the first chapter was great but it wont let me access the next two it said i needed permission whats the deal

  9. Ryo242 says:

    I think it was some weird error, I hopefully got it fixed now.

  10. Anonymous says:

    Woooooo!Glad to see that this fanfic is on here now.-PG

  11. MOLDbreaker? Falling star?*remembers a particular song* I see what you did there. XDI'll be sure to check it out a bit later.

  12. Where's this going? I'm intrigued.

  13. Anonymous says:

    read 2 and 3 great chapter's how long until Ray meets Twilight i'm guessing he's going to ponyville with her i can't help but wonder how his first meeting with his mother will go since Luna created the stars and Ray was a star i think that makes her his mother could be wrong anyway good story looking forward to seeing where this goes will you be pairing Ray with anypony just wondering

  14. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousThis guy is also known as "The Non-Punctuator". Fear his power!

  15. heftig says:

    @AnonymousOh geez, punctuation please!

  16. Geoberos says:

    After so much work, glad to see Moldbreaker finally up on ED, Ryo.I feel honored to have proofread the whole story and hope they enjoy it as much as I did.Again, I loved how I was able to compare the different situations that changed, if not little, everypony's reactions while still holding faithfully close to the original.@Gallant VisionSmash Mouth I presume?

  17. Nova25 says:

    Rather an interesting story, so far…I must say that the ''NoShipping'' tag made me reconsider reading, for a moment… I don't really care that much if there's shipping or not, but to go as far as to especially put a tag ? Well… I had my doubts.

  18. Geoberos says:

    Awesome you finally got onto ED, SSGIt was a good read proofreading your workCan't wait for more chaptersNow things have been mentioned since I last read itGlad to know you've taken the route of a temporary injury; to each his or her own way of expressing 'ficsJust still a bit concerned how Rarity did put here beauty concerns ahead and a lil' less smack from AJ considering what those two been through in Fall Weather Friends.But what's done is done, continue on OwO

  19. Anonymous says:

    Oops sorry wrong fic~Geo

  20. Ryo242 says:

    @Geoberos>: I'm not SSG. Silly Geo.For all my semi-adoring fans but mostly all the adoring fans, I'm working on getting the rest of the chapters up. Yes, I like the "NoShipping" tag, because it makes you go: "So I don't have to read about Rarity getting paired up with an OC? Finally!"Though really, without Dash-anything, it's not truly a fanfic… :3

  21. Geoberos says:

    @Ryo242Sorry Sorry I had both y'all's fic up in my browser and I posted in the wrong one TnTAnyways I did leave a comment for you two comments before the SSG one.Yeah NoShipping tag for those who need not be surprised by suddenly shipping. Then again, those with shipping do have Shipping tag, so if it doesn't have that tag, so it shouldn't even have it at all?

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