Story: Karamel (Update Part 7+8!)


[Crossover][Shipping] I’m pretty sure heterosexuality doesn’t exist in Ponyville at this point.



Author: The Unnamed Pawn

Description: When the night sky fills with glamor, a lovely story awaits you. Welcome fillies and gentlecolts to the Golden Playhouse. Tonight’s story is Karamel, an unconventional romantic horror. A stallion with a certain curse has a terrifying week. Our hero in this story is Big Macintosh. He’s a quiet and hardworking colt, but one day we begin to see him have terrifying nightmares. On top of that, a torrent of sweet seduction sweeps down upon him. Will he be able to work his way out of the maze known as love?

Sorry to keep you waiting. Raise the curtains. Now enjoy the show.

Karamel Part 1
Karamel Part 2
Karamel Part 3
Karamel Part 4
Karamel Part 5
Karamel Part 6
Karamel Part 7 (New!)
Karamel Part 8 (New!)

Additional Tags: Big Mac, Atlus, Catherine, Caramel, Love

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37 Responses to Story: Karamel (Update Part 7+8!)

  1. Infusions says:

    I KNEW this would be coming at SOME point…

  2. Infusions says:

    Also, this game was just amazing… I actually just got done playing a bit just a couple minutes ago. B)

  3. Josh says:

    As soon as I saw the description, I knew I had to read this. Catherine was awesome.

  4. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousNevermind, I see it now. Derp. That game does look good.

  5. Anonymous says:

    @InfusionsDid not mean to reply to myself. Double derp.

  6. KShrike says:

    I am starting to question the sexuality of all the fanfic writers…It's getting much harder to convince others that straight men watch this show.

  7. Anonymous says:

    Sure, there's heterosexuality in Ponyville! Lunamac, Macintwi, Macdash… umm… Oh! The Cakes are heterosexual! And married to boot!

  8. Anonymous says:

    @KShrike Yes, other than, of course, the copious amounts of lesbian shipping in this fandom. It's hard, real hard.

  9. Anonymous says:

    Is this a Caramac fic or something else I'm confused

  10. Anonymous says:

    @KShrike … you are aware that bronies aren't just men, right? And that a lot of women are fans of m/m, including yours truly?Yeaaah.

  11. Anonymous says:

    NVM I answered my own question enjoy your Caramac shipping… I'll be reading elsewhere

  12. wtf is this a crossovver with

  13. Infusions says:

    @D'Artagnan RossfeldThe Atlus game released last week. "Catherine"

  14. Josh says:

    @InfusionsI also notice you rocking a Sissel picture. I think we can agree a lot in game taste just from this.

  15. Punchline says:

    Everypony in Fim is bisexual..so all shipping is correct! THE END!!!!

  16. Anonymous says:

    @InfusionsI read the reviews a few days ago. I just didn't catch the reference in the fic description until I saw another comment. Yeah, it does seem incredibly unique. I doubt I'll actually buy it though. Puzzle games rarely hold my attention for long. Maybe once it drops in price.

  17. Anonymous says:

    Well, I think we can all agree: Equestria is doomed. Completely doomed. Slim to none will ever be born to this generation at this point.But CaraMac is soooooooooooooooooo sweet!

  18. Infusions says:

    @AnonymousWell if/whenever you decide to get it, I assure you the story is very interesting.@JoshHaha, you think so? I LOVE me some Ghost Trick! B)You could always confirm that by glancing at my gaming backlog:http://www.backloggery.com/gizzahmo😉

  19. jaxxdatraxx says:

    CLIMB OR DIE!!!!!, (or run or die in this case…)

  20. Homfrog says:

    What is this, a MYST crossover?

  21. blakestar15 says:

    I thought authors made OC stallions to actually have a heterosexual story, guess I was wrong. But I'm glad the bronies accept everyone.

  22. Robin says:

    Hmm . . all right, you have my interest.(not at all familiar with the game, btw. Still quite intrigued by chapter 1)

  23. Gypsy says:

    @Homfrog why does a MYST crossover sound cool but boring

  24. Anonymous says:

    It amazes me how people can write fics for so long in which nothing happens. You're a good writer, but it took a looooong time for this story to go anywhere, and I can't even look forward to the next chapter because it will probably be full of secrets and lies and miscommunications.

  25. RedCore says:

    What is it with people that can't read tags?And poor Big Mac…

  26. Anonymous says:

    [Crossover][Shipping] I'm pretty sure heterosexuality doesn't exist in Ponyville at this point.Just like what happened in SoCal Furry Fandom. For real."We salute you, Bronies! If it weren't for you, Rainbow Dash would still be straight!"– fake Bud Light commercial on YouTube

  27. Anonymous says:

    @PunchlineCould have fooled me with all the constant gay shipping.

  28. "Vibrating", that's perfect. Never take Pinkie out drinking.This chapter feels a little more haphazard than the first, switching around to a lot of little things in quick succession. I do like the introduction of Rainbow Dash, though.Ohsi, dat ending. @_@ Even though it happened in the other crossover fic, so did not see it coming! I will continue to read and enjoy.

  29. @Present PerfectI'm afraid this is going to be how the chapters progress from this point. I couldn't think of any other way to incorporate the other customers/sheep. Also, Anon, I can understand your complaint, but you have to understand that I'm kind of constrained by the story itself at this point. After all I've still got five more chapters at least for this thing.

  30. @The Unamed PawnI know I'm (kinda) your rival with this Catherine Crossover, but… You're doing quite good. Damn Good…But my question to you is – are you going to up the Grimdark-ness? 'Cuz I was planning on making mine a lot darker than it already is.

  31. @gillnavisinghI was actually going to try and avoid grimdark as much as possible. For instance you'll notice that while the Caramel specter was trying to "kill" Big Mac, its teeth were smeared with cake rather than blood. Plus I plan to avoid real-life death altogether. I just can't bring myself to actually kill in the my little pony universe. So in closing, I'm sure mine will end up being much less dark than yours. Also, thank you for the compliment.

  32. @The Unamed PawnWell, I guess this means we have two dinstinctly different audiences then!I look forward to reading part 3 of yours – and I'd like to invite to read the new second part of mine. (Direct link in the first part – until Seth updates the page)

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