Story: Number 12/Traveler (Update Story 2, Chapter 8!)

[Crossover][Sci-Fi] Number 12 is a popular Dr. Whoof fic from Squeak on /co/, and she/he just updated it with a second part called "Traveler"!  You can find both below!

Author: Squeak

Description: A blue box has fallen out of the sky, and crashed right into Twilight's Library! A strange brown stallion, calling himself the Doctor stumbles out. Soon after, strange stone Pegasus are everywhere, one of resident weather ponies has vanished, and Twilight is tossed in the middle! The Doctor and Twilight have to find out what's going on, before it's too late!

Number 12
Number 12 Part 2

And part 2: Traveler! 

Description: The Doctor and Twilight leap into the future, though it may be a far darker place than they envision. In the mean time somehow the Doctor keeps crashing around Ponyville, something to do with Fluttershy, but what?

Traveler Chapter 1
Traveler Chapter 2: Away from Home
Traveler Chapter 3: Out of the Shadows
Traveler Chapter 4: Resistance
Traveler Chapter 5: Unstoppable Force
Traveler Chapter 6: Immovable Object 
Traveler Chapter 7: Unforseen Variables
Traveler Chapter 8: Unlikely Meetings (New!)

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154 Responses to Story: Number 12/Traveler (Update Story 2, Chapter 8!)

  1. Squeak says:

    Thanks Blog Pony! To Be Completed. Either tomorrow, or the 5th. Sunday if my cold gets the best of me. In the mean time. Enjoy!Comments appreciated!

  2. Squeak says:

    Glad to hear it! It should be done soon!

  3. madmax says:

    I was waiting for this!

  4. Anonymous says:

    I'm enjoying this story, but the grammar-nazi in me is getting twitchy every time it sees the weeping _angles_ (as opposed to ANGELS). It makes me sad for geometry. 😦

  5. Squeak says:

    Sorry, I just noticed. That's embarrassing. Thanks for the heads up! It should be up to snuff now! Glad you're enjoying it!

  6. Anonymous says:

    Wow. Just wow.I think I'm becoming a fan of your writing, Squeak.

  7. Squeak says:

    Wow, thanks! MFW I can't post a face when I have fans.*EEeeeehhh*

  8. Anonymous says:

    -spoilers- ?When I saw that those god-forsaken stone angels where in this story…Nope.jpg?

  9. Dragonkind says:

    This is great! You need somepony to go over your story and fix the remaining grammar and spelling mistakes, but the story itself is excellent. Keep at it!

  10. Anonymous says:

    I would just like to add that, while several other people had encouraged me to watch Dr. Who over the past six months,this is what convinced me to finally do it. I finished the episode "Blink" tonight, and the combination of the show and this story made both of them far more entertaining. Keep up the good work, and I expect/hope for more in the future.

  11. Squeak says:

    @Anonymous I got someone into Doctor Who! That is so awesome! Thank you! Glad you liked it! Welcome to the world of the Whovians. *EEEEEEHH* Knowing that tickles me so much. Thanks for reading!

  12. Anonymous says:

    Jesus, this may be one of the best stories I've ever read–and that includes published ones, mind you. Your work is brilliant, and I found the characters especially well done, this (referring to Number 12) honestly seems like it could've been an episode of either show. Although short, Traveler also has me hooked, and I eagerly await the next installment.

  13. RommyWolf says:

    I really liked this fic, because it's a True Crossover. It manages to capture the feel of both a Doctor Who episode, and that of an episode of MLP:FiM at the same time.

  14. madmax says:

    squeak seriously, marry me now!I will be waiting for you in Notre Dame Cathedral in Paris.also bring a shobel with you

  15. Squeak says:

    @Anonymous Oh Wow!! Thanks! That has to be one of the best compliments I've gotten! Thank you! I shall work diligently to keep it up! @RommyWolf Thank you! I try to keep it consistent, it's hard, but wish me luck!@MaxieBut I'd already gotten tickets to Venice! Darn, oh well, Paris it is I'll be there! Shobel in hand!

  16. These are wonderful! I really enjoyed reading these, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

  17. Darkhawk1 says:

    When you say "Theme Music," at the start of the story, do you mean the MLP theme, or the Doctor's theme? And if the latter, which one?

  18. Squeak says:

    @Darkhawk1Whichever one pops into your head, is the correct one! It's up to the reader.

  19. Sandman says:

    My fellow ponies, I bring you a Doctor Whooves/Twilight pic that I found on ponychan.http://www.ponychan.net/chan/pony/src/129909150560.png

  20. Elijah says:

    @SandmanHa! I love that one! Madmax did it for me a little while back. I'm quite happy it seems to be popping up in places other than 4chan! That's a pleasant surprise.

  21. Sandman says:

    @ElijahReally? Cool, Madmax does damn good work.I did not know who drew it and thought it fit with this story well enough to post.I do not think that there is a unit of time small enough to measure the time between I saw this and when I saved it. Definitely one of my favorite images.

  22. Squeak says:

    @Elijah Actually I thought I was the one that requested it I thought. She did it in an effort to cheer me up a little while ago. I adore that image.

  23. Anonymous says:

    am i the only person who read all of the doctors lines in david tennants voice?

  24. Anonymous says:

    I love this story! <3The only thing I don't like is the severe lack of Rainbow Dash.

  25. Sandman says:

    And here come the reapers.@Anonymous You are not alone, I do the same thing.

  26. Steglad says:

    Squeak, you managed to capture the Doctor's mannerism and you've made him credible as a pony. Your story is captivating, well written and I really can't wait to see how you continue and conclude the story. Keep up the awesome work!

  27. Anonymous says:

    Squeak, your work is awesome.

  28. Darkhawk1 says:

    Hey, it already caused a paradox… after all, Twilight met two of 'em in the shop! Get it, a paradox, pair o' doc's, doctor whoof…Oh crap, I feel awful about that horrible, horrible pun…

  29. Anonymous says:

    Very nice stuff. As a brony AND a Doctor Who enthusiast, I gotta say you really nailed the characters, no question.Any hope of seeing Dalekorns in a future installment?

  30. Squeak says:

    @AnonymousHa! Glad you like it! Hopefully I plan to remedy that in future installments! @Steglad, thank you! I'll work hard to keep it up! I'm ecstatic to hear I'm doing well! @Anonymous, thanks! But, I can always be about 20% cooler. @Darkhawk1 careful, I may have to steal that one! @Anonymous, thank you! And yes, you might see Darlekorns in the future! Perhaps some Cyberponies too!

  31. locojom says:

    I cant believe this is what make me go and start watching Dr Who =POh and yes great story =3

  32. Sandman says:

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  33. Sandman says:

    Also an avid follower of MLP:FiM and Doctor Who, I have to agree with Steglad in that you have captured the characters beautifully.The telepathy with Twilight was a good scene and looking into the mind of a being as old as the Doctor and all that he experienced would be akin to looking into a star. He isn't known as the Destroyer of Worlds or the Oncoming Storm for nothing.I have to be honest though, I think I may have done a bit of a mental happy dance at how the Doctor snapped Twilight out of her trance.

  34. Squeak says:

    @locojomHa! Wow! My fic got someone else into Doctor Who!! That always tickles me so much. I hope you enjoy the new world of being a Whovian! We have cookies, bow ties and extremely long scarfs in the corner. Glad you enjoy my fic! @SandmanThank you! I try to keep everything in character as much as possible. And yes, the Doc is mostly patterned after the 10th, but I try to toss in a bit of the 11th and maybe even a little of the 4th while I'm at it. Glad you liked the the Doctor snapped her out of it! I did it as a little bit of an homage to that art Madmax did. Though it may pop up again. I'm about to head into the future, and who knows what'll happen to the pair of them there! Wish me luck!

  35. uSea says:

    @SqueakGood luck!I'll enjoy seeing where you take us next.

  36. Brian says:

    Add one more to that list of people you've gotten into Doctor Who. Right as I type this I'm downloading the latest season on iTunes. (I hadn't meant to get the whole blasted thing, just an episode or two, but I accidently pressed the wrong button! Ha!)Anywho, can't wait to see where this goes next!

  37. Nikita says:

    I have a sudden urge to watch every episode of Doctor Who.

  38. Brian says:

    I would just like to say that I just watched my first episode of Doctor Who, and I wouldn't have done it without this fic. Thanks!

  39. Squeak says:

    @Brain And another one! Wow, it always makes me squee a bit when I covert a brony into a Whovian. I hope you enjoy the Wonderful World of Who! Glad you enjoyed the fic! @NikitaYeah, that'll happen.

  40. Anonymous says:

    So when can we expect the next part? Cant wait!

  41. You can add yet another to the list of people that became a fan of doctor who and its all because of how well written your fic was.

  42. Anonymous says:

    One of the best fanfics I've read in a long, long time. The Doctor was perfect and the story brilliantly Who.

  43. Windchaser says:

    Awesome update Squeak! Top notch!

  44. RommyWolf says:

    Wow, did not see the development in "Away from Home" coming. Nice twist!

  45. Nikita says:

    The best Dr. Whoof yet :DI bet 20 bits that the whole soup was started by Vashta Nerada.

  46. Sandman says:

    @Nikita I'll put 20 on Vashta Nerada as well. Those suckers would terrify anyone, and rightly so.

  47. Squeak says:

    Wow, I've worked up a little backlog of comments over my hiatus! Sorry, I really do dearly appreciate every comment you guys take the time to give me!@ThisHomeBoy24As I've said before, it will never cease to tickle me when that happens. You're welcome! We're both 20% cooler now. Enjoy being a whoovian! Thanks so much for reading!@AnonymousThank you so much! That's quite a good review! I'm so happy about the continually positive response! I shall try to maintain it!@WindchaserThank you! Glad you enjoyed it! I'm setting up for something big!@RommyWolfThank you! Glad you enjoyed the twist! There are more to come! @Nikita/SandmanThank you! Glad you're enjoying where the story's going! We shall see if you're correct!The next part of the story is in the works now! It shouldn't take me nearly as long to finish the next chapter. So keep an eye out! There's things to come, and travels to be had!

  48. Reg says:

    I don't know what it is about Doctor Whoof fics, but they're excellent. This is excellent. I tend to be very picky about the fanfic I read, and this is just. IT IS SO AWESOME. I've been checking here daily for updates!

  49. madmax says:

    for some reason I was expecting that twilight absorbed some of the time lords powers.everything went better than expected :Dyou are great squeak! ❤

  50. Brian says:

    @Madmax: I'm getting that feeling as well, actually. Either way, this series is awesome, and Squeak is awesome!

  51. Squeak says:

    @Reg, Wow! Thank you! I'm glad I'm up to awesomeness standards! I shall continue to try and remain there, and stay in the circle of fics you take the time to read! Thanks for taking the time to check this one out! @Madmax/BrianThe story's not over yet, Maxie! You both may yet be right…muahahahaha! Thank you! I'll try to keep it up!

  52. Sandman says:

    I think Twilight still has a remnant of her connection with The Doctor, that kind of experience doesn't leave one unmarked. She had power to begin with, but that fragment gives her the knowledge (or at least the intuition) of how to use it.Again, this story exceeds all expectations and I set the bar quite high for Doctor Who fics. Wasn't expecting Twilight taking over, so kudos for surprising me.Vashta Nerada are definitely the scariest of the DW creatures to me. Their name literally means: The Shadows That Melt The Flesh, and the fact that they aren't every shadow but they could be any shadow would scare the hell out of me and unbelievably paranoid. Course, anyone not aware of them would just think you're schizto, there's something you can't see that's out to get you. Princess' deterioration explained.

  53. Really good update, can't wait to see the next.

  54. Anonymous says:

    As a fan of the 10th doctor, you pulled his mannerisms off amazingly. I always believed that it'd be quite hard to pull off the complexity that is Doctor Who but you didn't just accomplish that, but you did it with style. The Doctor as well as Pinkie and Twilight were characterized amazingly and the stories are different but similar enough to the show that it feels comfortable and familiar as if I were watching the real show. Thank you for giving me more 10th doctor goodness.

  55. Anonymous says:

    OK, time for me is an issue, and I don't like to stop reading half way through a story. So tell me, how long does this take a fast reader to read?

  56. Anonymous says:

    @Anonymous I'm a fast reader, it took me around 20-30 minutes to finish Number 12, and Traveler's chapter's are pretty sort. So not long at all.

  57. When might we see an update?

  58. Squeak says:

    @ThisHomeBoy24Oh, in about an hour or so.

  59. Squeak says:

    @AnonymousThanks so much!! I'm glad I did a good job with the Doc. I'm also quite a fan, and I love that people think I'm doing a good job with him. I'll try to keep it up! GENERAL STORY NEWSIf you'd like to keep track of my progress, and get updates on how things are going. I now have a Devaintart account:http://squeak-anon.deviantart.com/

  60. Anonymous says:

    CLIFFHANGERS!! :X:( Why… Why so many Cliffhangers?

  61. Nikita says:

    Ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh!!!

  62. Anonymous says:

    Le Resistance finally.Now we will see what really happened.

  63. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousWell it wouldn't be a good Who story without cliffhangers 😛

  64. Brian says:

    "Must every universe have an eighties!?"Greatest. Line. Ever.

  65. Brian says:

    And now that I've actually finished reading the new chapter…It was awesome!

  66. madmax says:

    the doctor surely loves peanuts 😀

  67. Hephestus says:

    Great story Squeak! It was your series that inspired me to write my Doctor Whooves fic, well, you and Victorian Hellsly! I'm enjoying the use of Timey-Wimey in the second story(s), can't wait to see how it all ties together!

  68. Read the update on your DA account last night, and once again it was amazing. Can't wait to see the next part.

  69. Anonymous says:

    OH CLIFFHANGERS, WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?

  70. Anonymous says:

    I enjoy Doctor Who, and I enjoy My Little Pony, so this whole series is like some sort of enjoyment multiplier! If you'd asked me what I would think of a crossover story before I read this I'd probably have rolled my eyes. This whole thing is way better than it has any right to be! Good job

  71. Anonymous says:

    I love it when the Doctor just throws a wrench in everything. 😛

  72. Anonymous says:

    Good for nothing Le Resistance… Not telling what happened before the chapter ended

  73. Brian says:

    THIS LATEST CHAPTER IS FANTASTIC!

  74. Beese says:

    SO AWESOME!Really good job, Wonderful and filled with Ze Magics

  75. cabbit says:

    Got to love a good Doctor Whoof story! And so close to the new season start too! Need more, great job!!

  76. Once again amazing update that left me wanting more. Can't wait to see the next Squeak.

  77. Asalis says:

    I have been a fan of Doctor Who for a long while. Now suddenly after being given a link to your story i suddenly have the urge to discover what My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is thanks to you. 😀

  78. Benschachar says:

    Out of curiosity, might there be more than one doctor in this story, the doctor who visited equestria by accident and the parallel Doctor Whoof who is native to the MLPFiM universe and originally lived in Gallopfrey or whatever the ponyverse equivalent of Gallifrey is.

  79. Interesting. Can't wait for the next part.

  80. kriss1989 says:

    Your Deviant Art account hasn't had an update listed in a while. Is everything ok?

  81. Anonymous says:

    Okay, you've hooked me. This is good stuff. I look forward to the next installment.

  82. Anonymous says:

    A disturbing idea occurred to me, did Twilighttwo stole Raimbow wings?

  83. Kkat says:

    Just read Number 12, and it was amazing. Love the name thing, and I stomped in laughter when The Doctor questioned why ponies name everything after horses. (Gallopfray!) Twilight and Pinkie Pie make great Doctor's companions.

  84. Anonymous says:

    Can't wait for an update! Keep up the good work!

  85. Asalis says:

    Thanks to you I have become a bronie… can't say that I can complain. I like the show now. A lot.

  86. Anonymous says:

    Thank you, I have recently been searching for information about this topic for ages and yours is the best I have discovered so far.

  87. Brian says:

    Spoiler for latest chapter!!!Those things Twilight and the Doctor both found…first thing to come to my mind were Daleks. Am I right?

  88. Escher says:

    That was my inference too, Brian.Hmm, pinkie spent a lot of time in the inside and then went missing. Well, I'm sure it's nothing important, certainly won't be a plot point.Actually I have a really bad feeling that I know exactly what happened to pinkie but I won't say anything because it might be a huge spoiler.

  89. Anonymous says:

    OH MY GAWD!…I have a feeling I know what's going on now. I'll be squirming in my seat until the next chapter to see if I'm right…

  90. Squeak says:

    Wow, so many new comments. How wonderful! @Hephestus, I inspired you to write something? That's so cool! I'll have to look it up! Thanks for reading, I'm glad you like the way I'm writing this!@Asalis I've made someone else a brony….again..yep, I can die happy. 20% Cooler, I hope you enjoy the show!@Benschachar I'll never tell…..@kriss1989 Everything's fine, I've just been busy with the storybook project, and the recent remix war. I'm almost done with both though, so the next chapter should be out MUCH sooner.@Anonymous Hope you enjoy it!@Anonymous Read and find out! (It's in this chapter@KkatThank you! I'm very glad you liked it, I love it when people enjoy the bits of humor I insert. It was great fun having Pinkie and Twilight in the Tardis for the first time.@Anonymous Thank you! There are some great Whoof fics out there, that is a very high complement! I'm glad you enjoyed it! @BrianSorry, if I told you I'd have to kill you.@Escher Oh yes…certainly not a plot point…nothing planned there….nope…not me…..ignore the pony behind the curtain.@Anonymous Hope you enjoy it when it comes out! Things are coming to a crescendo .What are the metal cylinders?What happened to the Doctor, and for that matter, Pinkie Pie?How will they stop the reaper 50 years in the past?What is the future Doctor crashing around ponyville for? What's any of this got to do with Fluttershy?Find out next time on,Traveler.In anycase, the next chapter should be out a lot sooner this time! Sorry for the wait! You guys are awesome!

  91. Anonymous says:

    You are a marvelous writer Squeak, i enjoyed the reading a lot and i require, if it is no rude to ask for, more of your creations.Stay awesome forever. 😀

  92. Beese says:

    At 1st and saw a new chapter I was all:Dand when I read it I was all:DGreat work, also (Probably because I read it at 5 in the morning) I couldn't stop laughing when I saw your little comment at the end.Also a question, how far have you written in the next chapter? Not started? 1? 10 Pages?Just wonderin'

  93. Meliadhor says:

    Heh, I was in the middle of sewing on the last patch on my Raggedy Mare plushie & being generally unhappy as there were no updates thus far aaand BOOM! I looked at EquestriaDaily and there's an update! Yay! Your fanfic is so good I ended up designing a plushie inspired by it! Keep up the good work!

  94. Squeak says:

    @Anonymous Aw, thank you! It's not rude at all! I'm always happy to provide my stuff to people who enjoy it! Thank you for reading!@BesseSuch a complex range of emotion!! JK, Thank you, I'm glad you liked it, liking things is cool. As for how far into the next chapter I am, I'd say about two pages. Its'a biggun though, probably going to end up around 12 or so.@MeliadhorThat.Is.SO.AWESOME! I want to see that plushie! Ask Seth to post it on the blog, or take a pic and send it too me at: Storybookprojects@gmail.com. I'd just love to get a look at that thing! Thank you, glad you enjoyed the story that much! The next chapter should be out soon!

  95. Meliadhor says:

    Glad you like the idea, the newest update on the Raggedy Mare looks pretty much like this: http://meliadhor.deviantart.com/art/Raggedy-Mare-WIP-2-210146308 I hope it's OK to link deviantArt stuff here, my email is currently giving me the 'maintenance & stuff' error message. DERPY, I TRUSTED YOUUUU!

  96. Squeak says:

    @MeliadhorIt's perfectly okay! Also, I personally could not ask for a better 100th comment, I never expected it to come with a Plushie! So awesome.

  97. Zurkoslat says:

    Awesome story as always and I find myself anticipating the next release. Also thanks for this stories awesomeness for it introduced me to Doctor Who and I am proud to call myself a Whovian now because of it.Keep up the good work!

  98. BrawlerGamma says:

    The concept of Rainbow Dash without wings make me physically ill but, no, really? No, she, no that's just, no, no, no, that's just, how can, so evil and sadistic bitch!God dammit some of this is really pissing me off but I'll be damned if it isn't awesome. I love it.No, that's, how can anyone, THAT sadistic?Must… the next part soon…Also why the hell are you so good at emulating the Doctor? That's so badass.

  99. BrawlerGamma says:

    The concept of Rainbow Dash without wings make me physically ill but, no, really? No, she, no that's just, no, no, no, that's just, how can, so evil and sadistic bitch!God dammit some of this is really pissing me off but I'll be damned if it isn't awesome. I love it.No, that's, how can anyone, THAT sadistic?Must… the next part soon…Also why the hell are you so good at emulating the Doctor? That's so badass.

  100. (This is just in reference to Number 12.)This needs a beta read, and the dialogue was a little tetchy in places, especially near the beginning, but what a cool story! I got chills in the scene where Derpy tells them where the letter came from. It was exciting and well-plotted, bravo.I need to see where the heck these Weeping Angels come from. Time for Dr. Who!

  101. Anonymous says:

    The Doctor's reaction to Canterlot and Camelot was perfect. Perfect!…And the rest of the story was great too!

  102. … Omg this is awesome…

  103. Chanticleer says:

    "Something insignificant" That may be one of the best lines I have read in a truly long time.Truly impressive story.

  104. Anonymous says:

    @Squeak Heh, you got me interested in doctor who again. Before the current doctor, the plot was easier to follow. But, I'll try my best to keep up. Now, all I can say is, MORE.

  105. Robin_Fox says:

    Amazing. Complex plot, excellent characterization, and incredible dialog. You really captured the feel of a Doctor Who episode here. Great work, keep it up.

  106. Anonymous says:

    Hmm, I wonder if Twilight gets to meet Twilighttwo…

  107. Cole says:

    This is one of the few fanfics that has absorbed me and given me the desire to read more.

  108. Simplydone says:

    @RommyWolfYes and it does it without betraying the spirit of either series it is just that awesome. I've loved Dr. Who ever since I was a kid. MLP not so much but it's got good characters, some interesting stories, and some wonderful easter eggs for the geek in me.

  109. BlackWidower says:

    I've said it before and I'll say it again, this must be completed…it's required by law!

  110. Amazing story so far, I'm fairly certain this was the only Doctor Whoof story I've read on Equestria Daily and it's still something that I enjoy completely. I love the thought of Rarity going along with the doctor, She actually fits quite well not that I think about it.Having the Doctor in my own fic, I intend to look back to your work to get a better feel of his mannerisms. It's one thing to have him spout a few lines he's known for, ponyfied or not, but it's another to go off of his mannerisms and way of thinking to simply have him say anything you wish with the exact tone you'd expect.All in all, Thanks for the good read!

  111. Ponies!!! says:

    Your writing makes me scared to read any other Doctor Whoof fanfics on Equestria Daily. I want this to be the official way the Doctor comes in to Equestria, because your characterization and dialogue is astoundingly accurate.

  112. Anonymous says:

    This has been a fantastic read. It has kept me quite busy. This is rather good, hope to see more of this out and about.

  113. Treble says:

    I just finished Chapter 5 and am definitely looking forward to more. Good stuff.

  114. SlyWit says:

    I finished the first part of 12. I gotta say I enjoyed it. Great sense of humor, and a fantastic job of replicating the feel of a Dr. Who episode with a backdrop of purple and pink prancing ponies. Who'd have thought such an odd combination would work so well?

  115. SlyWit says:

    I finished the first part of 12. I gotta say I enjoyed it. Great sense of humor, and a fantastic job of replicating the feel of a Dr. Who episode with a backdrop of purple and pink prancing ponies. Who'd have thought such an odd combination would work so well?

  116. Anonymous says:

    Any sort of timetable on an update? This has been silent for a long time. Whoof withdrawal. 😦

  117. Anonymous says:

    Any sort of timetable on an update? This has been silent for a long time. Whoof withdrawal. 😦

  118. Anonymous says:

    Just read everything posted here so far. While the grammar/spelling can be minor problem, you characterized everyone perfectly. I must say, this is the best Whoof fic I've read. Keep up the great work 😀

  119. Anonymous says:

    Just read everything posted here so far. While the grammar/spelling can be minor problem, you characterized everyone perfectly. I must say, this is the best Whoof fic I've read. Keep up the great work 😀

  120. Squeak says:

    @AnonymousWow, so many wonderful new comments. I'll reply to you each in turn later.In anycase, the new chapter should be out by the end of the week with any luck! In the mean time hold tight! -Squeak

  121. Squeak says:

    @AnonymousWow, so many wonderful new comments. I'll reply to you each in turn later.In anycase, the new chapter should be out by the end of the week with any luck! In the mean time hold tight! -Squeak

  122. Anonymous says:

    Excellent stories! Can't wait for the next chapter Squeak!

  123. Anonymous says:

    Excellent stories! Can't wait for the next chapter Squeak!

  124. Anonymous says:

    An update? Hallelujah!

  125. Anonymous says:

    An update? Hallelujah!

  126. Anonymous says:

    Thanks for keeping this going. This is definitely my favorite fan-fic on the site. Looking forward to the next chapter.

  127. Anonymous says:

    Thanks for keeping this going. This is definitely my favorite fan-fic on the site. Looking forward to the next chapter.

  128. KidNeo says:

    YES! It updated! :D*One read later*And it's still a great read. Keep up the good work, Squeak!

  129. KidNeo says:

    YES! It updated! :D*One read later*And it's still a great read. Keep up the good work, Squeak!

  130. Anonymous says:

    So fucking awesome!

  131. Anonymous says:

    So fucking awesome!

  132. Ponies!!! says:

    Hmm, I dont know if this was intentional, but if Twilight met up with Twilighttwo and nothing happened, does that mean that Twilighttwo isn't actually Twilight's future? No paradoxes happened, and we learned before that this universe isn't used to being manipulated through timestreams. This means one of many things: either you forgot that a paradox would result, the universe has gotten used to the Doctor in it by now, Twilighttwo is a copy of Twilight and not a direct future, or the initial paradox was something else entirely that was a lot more complicated than I initially thought. Anyway, still a great chapter, and I'm looking forward to more of this in the future.

  133. Ponies!!! says:

    Hmm, I dont know if this was intentional, but if Twilight met up with Twilighttwo and nothing happened, does that mean that Twilighttwo isn't actually Twilight's future? No paradoxes happened, and we learned before that this universe isn't used to being manipulated through timestreams. This means one of many things: either you forgot that a paradox would result, the universe has gotten used to the Doctor in it by now, Twilighttwo is a copy of Twilight and not a direct future, or the initial paradox was something else entirely that was a lot more complicated than I initially thought. Anyway, still a great chapter, and I'm looking forward to more of this in the future.

  134. Anonymous says:

    @Ponies!!!"People assume that time is a strict progression of cause to effect, but actually—from a non-linear, non-subjective viewpoint—it's more like a big ball of wibbly-wobbly…timey-wimey…stuff." — The Tenth DoctorStill, you raise a good point.

  135. Anonymous says:

    @Ponies!!!"People assume that time is a strict progression of cause to effect, but actually—from a non-linear, non-subjective viewpoint—it's more like a big ball of wibbly-wobbly…timey-wimey…stuff." — The Tenth DoctorStill, you raise a good point.

  136. Anonymous says:

    @Ponies!!! There's also the implications of Twilight knowing exactly how her past self escapes from her and not planning accordingly. "Now, then, Dalek. Exterminate them. Wait, I've heard this part before, haven't I? Oh, crap this is the part where the doctor crashes a train into my factory, isn't it? Damn, I've known that for over 40 years, why didn't I plan on that?" See Time Crash for probably the best example of this sort of thing.That could have also made for a funny scene like this, "I'm not you. You're a twisted abhorrence." "Oh no? Think of a number. Any number." (Both at the exact same time) "7. 13. 45. Applejack. Canterlot, Manehatten, Hooftah. Okie-dokie-loki-ramma-lamma-ding-dong."

  137. Kfire says:

    Day 1: read the first story.Day 2: read the second story.Day3 : watched the whole first season of Dr. Who.Anyhoof, You are awesome Squeak

  138. Anonymous says:

    did anyone else play the Doctor Who theme music when it said *theme music*?

  139. Bugsydor says:

    How many months since this last updated? I thought that this fic was dead, but now I am all /)(^3^)(\.

  140. Anonymous says:

    There's going to be quite a few answers next chapter…

  141. Nintyuk says:

    GAHH THIS IS WHY I HATE INCOMPLETE STORY'S!I get caught up in a wonderful narrative that's doing its job in making me exited to read more, only to reach the end of the road with a under construction sign blocking my path. All the momentum ending in a big unsatisfied heap.Please update and finish this story soon, my patience is being spread thin by all of these other story's that have me in the same bind.

  142. Anonymous says:

    I was putting reading this off for a while, now I'm ecstatic that I read it. I have to say, my favorite part so far, besides all of it, was when the Dr. questioned how trains were invented before the steam engine. WHY WERE THEY PULLING THE LOCOMOTIVE IN OVER A BARREL?! Anyway, tirade aside, this story kept me on edge the entire time, and I can't wait to read more.-Joe

  143. Anonymous says:

    I like the new chapter and am eagerly anticipating the next one. But, ah, do you actually know much about railroad technology? Don't worry, you left things vague enough that they'll still work, but there are some…oddities in your train design.

  144. Alex says:

    Oh god, still not complete D:It's still amazing, just… not complete 😦

  145. Anonymous says:

    I would like to read this considering I love the doctor who series but is there any recommendation of any seasons to watch first?(I have seen the 5th and a bit of the 6th and just a tad of the 2nd.)

  146. RainbwCRASH says:

    The old series or the new series? With the old ones, I recommend Tom Baker, Davidson, and Colin Baker The other doctors were good, but those were the one that really stood out for me.New series? Tennant and Smith are brilliant, but for Celestia's sake, DO NOT WATCH ECCELISON. It's like watching Steven Segal play Jean-Luc Picard. It's terrible.

  147. Anonymous says:

    This still going? D:

  148. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousIt's been less than a week since the last update dude. Chill, he won't leave us hanging.

  149. Anonymous says:

    Anon ImusNOT AGAIN!I keep stumbling upon unfinished masterpieces-then I have to wait! RAAAAAAAAAA!!!

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