Story: The Elements of Awesomery (Update Side Story!)

[Random][Shipping] This is the most random, uncultivated, mind-bogglingly stupid fan fiction I have ever read. And it is genius”. –Prereader #likes random fics, what a weirdo

Actually everyone that read it seemed to enjoy it!

Author: Present Perfect

Description: When aliens and monsters attack their town, it’s up to Wondercloud Lightningbolt and her friends to find the Elements of Awesomery and stop the invasion! Can they brave the dangers of the Everlame Forest and make in back before everypony’s house explodes?

The Elements of Awesomery

Additional Tags: Metafiction, parody, satire, in-jokes, explosions


Description: Rainbow Dash is really bad at baking, but when it’s the only thing she can think of to impress the pony she loves, she turns to a friend for help, and gets more than she bargained for.


Additional Tags: Insecure Dash is best Dash, Rainbow Dash, Applejack

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28 Responses to Story: The Elements of Awesomery (Update Side Story!)

  1. chiselite says:

    Honestly is fantastic! Keep it up.

  2. What confused me more here was why Seth was updating at such an ungodly late hour, but then I realised…he's waiting for that counter to our right to spill over to 2million.Also, the story was fantastic. I had it down as Pinkie Pie just telling a random story to her friends. I was half-right 😀

  3. shadefox says:

    @Kimba the White LionIt of course depends on an individuals sense of humor. Some find it funny, some find it boring.Personally, I found it hilarious.

  4. LoLZorZs says:

    Aside from the names this is very cultivated compared to mine xD (which i haven't released yet)

  5. Anonymous says:

    in before 20mil views

  6. Anonymous says:

    2.000.000 million pageviews! WOOOO!

  7. Anonymous says:

    Happy 20000000 page views guys!

  8. EQD'S OVER 20000000!!!!!!! WOOOOOOO!I can't believe I just saw that happen

  9. Anonymous says:

    inb4 this gets spammed with 20M related comments

  10. FLOOTERSHAI says:

    20000000 HITS WOOHOO!!!!!

  11. Anonymous says:

    Oh well! At least I got to keep the destroy-the-world button!*click*Cosmo, NO!*boom*Oh no, Pluto!Who cares? It's just a Pluto.Pluto's where I keep my corn!

  12. chiselite: Thanks! I hope Honestly gets a little attention now.And, uhh, it's over 20 million? O.o Lucky me, I guess!

  13. DSNesmith says:

    20 million hits get!

  14. @Present PerfectFor some reason I don't think I "want" to read bad fanfiction. I have read my share of ED posted stuff that was really subpar, but probably nothing like what you were parodying.

  15. Gee, that side story seems familiar. I wonder why.It's almost like I just read it going through the speedfic entries, but that would be silly. Couldn't be that.

  16. Anonymous says:

    Oh, come on. The easiest solution to "Honesty" is definitely a threeway.I mean, Pinkie Pie was just as excited talking about Applejack in Applebucking Season as she was about Dash the next episode. It would totally work.

  17. Anonymous says:


  18. Ekevoo says:

    I don't get it… i've read this side story before!

  19. TenchiFreak5 says:

    Insecure Dash is best Dash.

  20. pixelkitties says:

    Both stories were lots of fun! I was actually a bit taken aback at how sweet and well-written the second story was after the madcap randomness of "Elements of Awesome." "Honestly" actually made me tear up a little bit. That Applejack! What a loyal pony she is!Also, +10 internets for the sly little reference to The Tick!

  21. Anonymous says:

    Honestly was a good read, though the AppleDash lover in me had a bit of a sad at the end. Seems every fic I read about them it ends up not working out. 😦

  22. Algernon says:

    'The Elements of Awesomery' had me in stitches even when I read it through for a second time, and 'Honestly' was really well written throughout. Glad to see there's a sequel in the works!

  23. Barry Hubris says:

    @Present PerfectThe TICK? Who's the JERK that calls himself the TICK?!

  24. Ace12541 says:

    One thing to say about 'The Elements of Awesomery'…..LLLLAAWWWWWLLLLL!!!

  25. @Kimba the White Lion: "So bad it's funny" was more what I had in mind, though this does reference some genuinely funny fics like Progress and How I Stopped Worrying and Learned to Love the Bon-Bon. It may just not be your cup, which is okay.@A Terrible Person: Gosh, I wonder why?@Anonymous: Gee, it's a good thing I haven't thought of doing that, I mean why would I, really?@pixelkitties: Gosh, really? I'm surprised, and flattered too. (Also, for the record, I've never watched the show.)@Anonymous: Sorry. D: I'm actually not a big fan of Applejack (although I write her an awful lot), and I prefer PinkieDash anyway. Which is what this series is all about!@Algernon: Thank you! I feel like a jerk for prematurely mentioning that sequel because A) I have no idea when I'll get to it, and B) it's going to be more like Honestly than AoE. Hopefully at least a little funny. As it is in my mind, anyway.

  26. Anonymous says:

    Over 9000 internets have been won.

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