Story: Trixie’s Inferno (Update Chapter 3!)

[Crossover][Grimdark] Dante’s Inferno with the Greatest and Most Powerful Pony in all of Equestria? I’m pretty sure Satan is bucked.

Author: Ghost of Perdition

Description: After suffering a humiliating humbling in Ponyville, The Great and Powerful Trixie finds herself lost deep within Everfree Forest. However, to escape this fate, she must learn to confront the demons within, and ultimately Hell itself.

Trixie’s Inferno (New Chapter 3!)

Additional Tags: Pony Hell, Religious Controversy, Inferno, Damnation, TRIXIE

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46 Responses to Story: Trixie’s Inferno (Update Chapter 3!)

  1. Anonymous says:

    Erm….I kinda feel bad at chuckling a little when I saw the 'religious controversy' tag. Was kinda randomly out there lolWill comment on story soon…

  2. Anonymous says:

    Erm….I kinda feel bad at chuckling a little when I saw the 'religious controversy' tag. Was kinda randomly out there lolWill comment on story soon…

  3. Anonymous says:

    my interest is piqued

  4. Anonymous says:

    my interest is piqued

  5. Themasterofb says:

    What is this…I must read it now!

  6. Themasterofb says:

    What is this…I must read it now!

  7. Asgard314 says:

    O_O I wonder if Trixie'll learn anything from this… I doubt it but… Guess I'll read and find out. Also, why doesn't it have a Grimdark tag? In the original Inferno there was imagery of torture and blood almost every canto…

  8. Asgard314 says:

    O_O I wonder if Trixie'll learn anything from this… I doubt it but… Guess I'll read and find out. Also, why doesn't it have a Grimdark tag? In the original Inferno there was imagery of torture and blood almost every canto…

  9. KidNeo says:

    A Dante's Inferno crossover with ponies….this has peaked my interest.

  10. KidNeo says:

    A Dante's Inferno crossover with ponies….this has peaked my interest.

  11. Themasterofb says:

    I'm not a huge fan of first person, but the first chapter is interesting and I'll be looking forward to more.

  12. Themasterofb says:

    I'm not a huge fan of first person, but the first chapter is interesting and I'll be looking forward to more.

  13. Asgard314 says:

    Yes… Most definatly deserves a Grimdark tag. Just as gut-wrentchingly horrifying as the real Inferno, so far at least.

  14. Asgard314 says:

    Yes… Most definatly deserves a Grimdark tag. Just as gut-wrentchingly horrifying as the real Inferno, so far at least.

  15. Anonymous says:

    INB4 religious debate

  16. Anonymous says:

    INB4 religious debate

  17. Anonymous says:

    Please, PLEASE can we not have a religious debate over a story that is a crossover between an epic poem and a show about ponies for little girls…

  18. Anonymous says:

    Please, PLEASE can we not have a religious debate over a story that is a crossover between an epic poem and a show about ponies for little girls…

  19. Anonymous says:

    Well I haven't read it yet, but the fact that the author's name is Ghost of Perdition has convinced me to.

  20. Anonymous says:

    Well I haven't read it yet, but the fact that the author's name is Ghost of Perdition has convinced me to.

  21. ZAquanimus says:

    Oh come on1!!I was just thinking about how a Dante's Inferno crossover would work just last week!!!Can't wait to read it.

  22. ZAquanimus says:

    Oh come on1!!I was just thinking about how a Dante's Inferno crossover would work just last week!!!Can't wait to read it.

  23. Anonymous says:

    This should probably have a grimdark tab… Yanno, with the horrific imagery and all.Also, Pleaase no religious flamewars. That sort of thing never stays civil…

  24. Anonymous says:

    This should probably have a grimdark tab… Yanno, with the horrific imagery and all.Also, Pleaase no religious flamewars. That sort of thing never stays civil…

  25. D. Shadows says:

    Trixie's Inferno? Well it's not like that can be alternatively read as…TRIXIE'S SMOKING HOT! (A story with that title would be more towards a parody comedy stylings)

  26. D. Shadows says:

    Trixie's Inferno? Well it's not like that can be alternatively read as…TRIXIE'S SMOKING HOT! (A story with that title would be more towards a parody comedy stylings)

  27. Anonymous says:

    Burn baby burnTrixie infernoBurn that pony down

  28. Anonymous says:

    Burn baby burnTrixie infernoBurn that pony down

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  30. Anonymous says:

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  31. Nova25 says:

    @AnonymousFrankly, I found that Tag funny too 😉 …in fact, even thought I was gonna read it anyway (I read ALL, minus 1or2 occasionally, stories), the Tag caugh my interest even more. ;)But really… It's probably just a safety-measure, because the word ''Hell'' is there. Some people can be ''damn'' touchy…Right… On we go ! (and now I have the song ''Highway to Hell'' in my head)

  32. Nova25 says:

    @AnonymousFrankly, I found that Tag funny too 😉 …in fact, even thought I was gonna read it anyway (I read ALL, minus 1or2 occasionally, stories), the Tag caugh my interest even more. ;)But really… It's probably just a safety-measure, because the word ''Hell'' is there. Some people can be ''damn'' touchy…Right… On we go ! (and now I have the song ''Highway to Hell'' in my head)

  33. OmegaPony11 says:

    I cannot wait to read more of Trixie's time…IN HELL!Still you keep to the spirit of the epic and have piqued my interest as to how Trixie reacts to the Inferno. Also find it amusing how Virgil goes from "ye old pony" to sounding more…modern, I suppose.Keep it up.

  34. OmegaPony11 says:

    I cannot wait to read more of Trixie's time…IN HELL!Still you keep to the spirit of the epic and have piqued my interest as to how Trixie reacts to the Inferno. Also find it amusing how Virgil goes from "ye old pony" to sounding more…modern, I suppose.Keep it up.

  35. Anonymous says:

    So am I the second person here to actually read it? I know that personally I don't like most (75%) of crossovers on their face, but wtf I see literally 0 things here that have to do with Trixie's personality, and 0 things that have to with ponies.And a crossover is one thing, but none of the pony lore (godesses)has been resolved with this "real world" lore. I'm confused, and haven't seen any relatable characters.

  36. Anonymous says:

    So am I the second person here to actually read it? I know that personally I don't like most (75%) of crossovers on their face, but wtf I see literally 0 things here that have to do with Trixie's personality, and 0 things that have to with ponies.And a crossover is one thing, but none of the pony lore (godesses)has been resolved with this "real world" lore. I'm confused, and haven't seen any relatable characters.

  37. Nova25 says:

    >Though we were virtuous in our lives, we did not accept The One as well. So, our punishment is denial into Paradise.">"That doesn't sound very fair.-Aaaaaaaand this is why I do not appreciate Religious stuff, in general… Makes you want to 'punch' the god(s), for their incredible stupidity and haughtiness (seems like a default trait of character for them)…Anyway… to Part 2…

  38. Nova25 says:

    >Though we were virtuous in our lives, we did not accept The One as well. So, our punishment is denial into Paradise.">"That doesn't sound very fair.-Aaaaaaaand this is why I do not appreciate Religious stuff, in general… Makes you want to 'punch' the god(s), for their incredible stupidity and haughtiness (seems like a default trait of character for them)…Anyway… to Part 2…

  39. Anonymous says:

    Haven't read it yet, but I just gotta say Trixie looks stoned as f*ck in that pic. Maybe that's what she trips to.

  40. Anonymous says:

    I find ironic is that is it just me or has anyone else actually read Dante's Inferno before. If you haven't then you should, it's up there with Beowolf in my opinon.

  41. Gypsy says:

    wow oh wow this is done pretty good, not to short nor long, i find this to be a good read, i read The Divine Comedy and played dantes inferno and this plays well intergrating both, im also wondering if your gunna do purgatory & paradise but im guessing itd take waaaaay to long and just finish with the 9 circles of hellwhy do people have to get butt hurt with religion? if you hate so much why do you even care as to just talk bout how "stupid" it is, if you hate, leave it, no need to talk about it, im christian and im not iffened in the least bit, just suck it up and read the fanficnow that thats outta the way, 5-STARS congrats! cant wait for part 4

  42. Gypsy says:

    oh and +plays Johnny Cash – Burning Ring of Fire+

  43. Anonymous says:

    "Played Dante's inferno" nope.jpg

  44. Anonymous says:

    All the people calling it Dante's inferno you are wrong. It is called the divine comedy so calling it Dante's inferno while claiming you read it makes you look foolish.

  45. ZarPaulus says:

    @AnonymousActually the cantica on hell is called Inferno (hell in Italian). The other two canticas being Purgatorio and Paradiso.

  46. Hmm…. This is pretty good stuff. As a BIG fan of the original comedy, it's quite cool to see that even the more subtler aspects of the comedy are being incorporated (Liking the double meaning when Virgil tells Trixie to "watch her step" in the 4th circle. Greed should be good considering Trixie's tendencies…)While I was pretty impressed with the first 2 sections, I couldn't really see how it had to do with ponies or MLP in general and seemed a bit like a transcription of the original (with a few pony words thrown in).The third one really sold it for me, though. I'm pretty intrigued by the whole Pony/Human thing and this presents a pretty interesting avenue of exposition. I look forward to seeing how humans play into the later part of the story!

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