Story: Lyrical Musings


Author: Grif

Description: Lyra, unknown to her friends, is obsessed with Twilight Sparkle. So much so that she is willing to do anything to win her love. Originally inspired by the madness of pony threads.

Lyrical Musings

Additional Tags: You don’t want to know

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47 Responses to Story: Lyrical Musings

  1. Flatterscheu says:

    Interesting additional tags.

  2. kwj says:

    additional tags you don't want to know??

  3. MihailK says:

    Ahhh.This.Ponibooru you trolls.

  4. Grif says:

    Disclaimer in advance.I DONT KNOW WHAT WAS I THINKING WHEN I WROTE THIS. HONEST.Okay, maybe not. But it was still a fit of insanity. Now be off with ye.

  5. Homfrog says:

    Too weird! Loved it but it was very creepy.

  6. Flatterscheu says:

    Just read it.Oh my god.That is hilarious xD@GrifHow the heck did you got the idea for THAT?xD

  7. Aww DAMMIT, and here I was hoping to eventually get the monopoly on this ship! Oh well. I'll wait a bit before I unleash my own creation upon EqD.

  8. Very creepy and weird, but in a good way. Liked it a lot, good work.

  9. Anonymous says:

    @Grif This is fine, nothing you should be ashamed of. You've done well in portraying Lyra's mind. Easy to follow and nothing too hard to get a grasp of.I thoroughly enjoyed it. Even so, others might have issues with it but take it with a grain of salt eh. Also I'm glad you changed your mind about posting it here hehe ๐Ÿ˜‰

  10. MihailK says:

    Needs 6 alternate endings.NAO.

  11. Anonymous says:

    The HELL did I just read….oh well screw it…. 5 stars! lol

  12. CoffeeGrunt says:

    Where the hell have you been Grif? Do you know how sparse Lyra content is in fanfics? :PReading now…

  13. Anonymous says:

    Really strange,but…good.

  14. That has to be one of the more…interesting fics I've read so far XD

  15. Anonymous says:

    Woah. What did I just read? It was so…weird. Well written, mind you…but really freaking weird.

  16. EsperDerek says:

    Just for the record, I approve of this rampant insanity! (Or is that ponysanity?)

  17. Anonymous says:

    …What did I just read?

  18. CoffeeGrunt says:

    I shat brix at the ending, and beginning…and middle.Also I love the references to Out in the Cold. ๐Ÿ˜›

  19. ToonNinja says:

    What. The. F*ck. I'm really not sure how to feel about this right now.

  20. Dima says:

    She did move to Ponyville with Twilight Sparkle after all, so I guess it makes sense.

  21. Some Anon says:

    When the ship hits the fan…Nice work, I dare say.

  22. I'm strangely okay with this.Lyra needs to be shipped with more than just Bon Bon.

  23. Asgard314 says:

    Okay, this is my fourth try at writing a comment describing how amazing this is, but I just can't find the words beyond well-written, easy to follow while still being bat-s*** crazy, and Inception ain't got nothing on this when it comes to complexity. 5 stars.

  24. Melodia says:

    We finally get a story focusing on Lyra (and mostly with Bon-Bon)….and it's this.Poor darling Lyra ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

  25. Anonymous says:

    Wow. Just wow. That's all I can say. And I've been lurking on giantitp for ages so I understood ALL the references XDFor those of you wondering, Lyra's imaginary friends are all avatars of posters on another forum ๐Ÿ˜›

  26. Anonymous says:

    Well that's… uh… I don't exactly know what that is…

  27. Grif says:

    So… many comments! Thank ye for all your kind responses. Seriously. You bronies warm my insane heart.@Conner CogworksAnd I would read that! Fandom needs more Lyra nao.@FlatterscheuTwo words. Pony threads.@EsperDerekYesssshhhhhhhhh! Ponysanity!@Coffee GruntHave an internet cookie for spotting that.@Anon11:36I have a feeling we chatted before on DA. :p@Anon1:01Hohoho. We have a spy! Ha, I challenge ye to spot all the references I crammed in. I dare ya!

  28. Anonymous says:

    Oh my God, what did I just read?That was horribly scary, I don't even know what happened.IT'S BLACK OPS ALL OVER AGAIN.

  29. CoffeeGrunt says:

    Black Ops sucked. Just sayin'.@GrifInternet cookies? Boy those ethereal, digital, inedible ones are the best kind!

  30. nemryn says:

    Party of Lyra?

  31. …the hell is this.Really though that was crazy.

  32. Anonymous says:

    This is completely bat-shit insane.And I loved it.

  33. Anonymous says:

    Ah, the insanity of the GITP pony threads. This story is like all of that madness distilled into poor Lyra.

  34. Skay says:

    By far one of the creepiest fanfics I've ever seen.Part of me wishes the torture scene was a tad longer. (no, I don't take pleasure in reading that)I can't get the thoughts of a possible sequel out of my head. Twilight Sparkle, after noting Lyra's disillusion state, tries what she can to help Lyra out. Only thing is, Twilight has no idea about the nature of Lyra's hallucinations.

  35. That was the good sort of creepy.

  36. Anonymous says:

    Heh, pretty funny stuff there. Kind of puts Lyra's separation from Bon Bon in later episodes in perspective.Nice job on making out of character Lyra… believable. Although I wasn't expecting this as written, especially with the cute little picture of Lyra prancing happily.

  37. Miyajima says:

    Now, if you replace "Twlight Sparkle" with "Lyra", and "Lyra" with "Phoe"…

  38. Oh no, not Lyra cheating on Bon-Bon again! Also, Bon's not a unicorn…This has a lot of tense issues, which keep pulling me out of the story. You should read up on how to use the subjunctive aspect. Lyra's headponies are an interesting touch, at least. Making her a complete nutter? You certainly went the extra mile.Wait, who is this Shimmer? Real or not?Umm, well, the twist ending made me like this more, it explained all the bizarre things that didn't make much sense. I think the very ending was a little vaguely 'gotcha', though. If this had been an honest sendup of the entire concept of shipping, it would have really gone somewhere. I dunno, it was all right.

  39. Bunnylisk says:

    Weird and awesome.

  40. Anonymous says:

    @GrifAnon 1:01 here. Yeeeeah okay, maybe not ALL the references. Looking over it again there were a few I didn't get (i.e, I'm sure "Lone Star from Magic School" is a ref to something) and probably a few more I missed. Oh well. CHALLENGE DENIED

  41. Anonymous says:

    This story… Was insane to say the least

  42. Anonymous says:

    I guess you could say (Puts on glasses)Her train went swimming in the piano.YYEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!

  43. Shimmer says:

    @Grif where did you get the name "shimmer" for the tied up pony… dammit that's been my ponyname for 6 months now XP

  44. LoganBrony says:

    I kind of want a sequel to this. I don't know why though. I'm a bit confused but I think I quite enjoyed this.

  45. Grif says:

    @ShimmerIt's based on a fellow forumer ponytar. So any similarities are purely coincidental. :p@Anon 1:03Well, there were some very obscure references I threw it for the fun which only I could understand. "Lone Star" was one of them. Heh.

  46. Grif says:

    @Present PerfectDarnit, forgot about this.Fixed the Bon-Bon is a unicorn bit. Thanks for the catch.

  47. Ace12541 says:

    Throughout this whole story all i could think was "Whut?", it made me feel weird because Lyra is one of my favorite ponies. Good story no doubt, just weird lol. P.S. I also wanted to thank you for a drawing idea, Kaiser Wearing Monocle'd Falcon, i lawl'd

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