Story: The Sun Was Going Down

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Author: Kazberry

Description: Pinkie Pie never thought getting rid of ghosts could be fun, until the day her grandma surprised her.

The Sun Was Going Down

Additional Tags: Pinkie Pie, granny, filly, ghosts, bedtime

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69 Responses to Story: The Sun Was Going Down

  1. Anonymous says:

    Somebody needs to draw Pinkie as a Ghostbuster YESTERDAY.

  2. Anonymous says:

    Somebody needs to draw Pinkie as a Ghostbuster YESTERDAY.

  3. Anonymous says:

    Last line made me d'awwww… clever idea this, and well executed.

  4. Anonymous says:

    Last line made me d'awwww… clever idea this, and well executed.

  5. Anonymous says:

    There -IS- a Ghostbusters crossover pic in one of the Drawfriends, cannot remember which one, I think one of the 90s.

  6. Anonymous says:

    There -IS- a Ghostbusters crossover pic in one of the Drawfriends, cannot remember which one, I think one of the 90s.

  7. Anonymous says:

    So it's not about Pokey?-sadfaic-

  8. Anonymous says:

    So it's not about Pokey?-sadfaic-

  9. D'awww, this is so sweet! Of course you probably know what song was playing in my head the whole time I was reading this. XDAlso, nice "surprise" at the end. πŸ˜›

  10. D'awww, this is so sweet! Of course you probably know what song was playing in my head the whole time I was reading this. XDAlso, nice "surprise" at the end. πŸ˜›

  11. Anonymous says:

    D'aaaaaawww fiction!

  12. Anonymous says:

    D'aaaaaawww fiction!

  13. Anonymous says:

    That was so adorable! I think what really made this, though, was the fact that it was so believable! I can genuinely see this happening πŸ™‚ All the characters seemed very real, and I had Pinkie Pie's song playing in my head towards the end.This is the cutest fic I've read yet. I can't help but d'aaaawww! Awesome job! :3

  14. Anonymous says:

    That was so adorable! I think what really made this, though, was the fact that it was so believable! I can genuinely see this happening πŸ™‚ All the characters seemed very real, and I had Pinkie Pie's song playing in my head towards the end.This is the cutest fic I've read yet. I can't help but d'aaaawww! Awesome job! :3

  15. I'm pretty much gonna echo everybrony when I say "d'aaaaaaaw"I also couldn't NOT think of the song the whole time I read this.

  16. I'm pretty much gonna echo everybrony when I say "d'aaaaaaaw"I also couldn't NOT think of the song the whole time I read this.

  17. Hmmm, what more can I say about this that hasn't been said? I think you broke the cute meter with this one.

  18. Hmmm, what more can I say about this that hasn't been said? I think you broke the cute meter with this one.

  19. Anonymous says:

    D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW x 2D4SHTH3R4INB0W

  20. Anonymous says:

    D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW x 2D4SHTH3R4INB0W

  21. Calnos says:

    Surprise ending? I like it.

  22. Calnos says:

    Surprise ending? I like it.

  23. Anonymous says:

    One of the drawfriends, eh?Gah, I cannae be sifting through many pictures, I have fics to read and PMVs to watch and much-needed sleep to ignore!

  24. Anonymous says:

    One of the drawfriends, eh?Gah, I cannae be sifting through many pictures, I have fics to read and PMVs to watch and much-needed sleep to ignore!

  25. Anonymous says:

    @CalnosI see what you did there.

  26. Anonymous says:

    @CalnosI see what you did there.

  27. Anonymous says:

    For those who missed it, "Surprise" was a G1 pegasus who played pranks on the othersNice touch πŸ™‚

  28. Anonymous says:

    For those who missed it, "Surprise" was a G1 pegasus who played pranks on the othersNice touch πŸ™‚

  29. Whiteout says:

    Absolutely adorable, and well written to boot!

  30. Whiteout says:

    Absolutely adorable, and well written to boot!

  31. Anonymous says:

    But alligators have scales…

  32. Anonymous says:

    But alligators have scales…

  33. Presspass says:

    Pinkie Pie is adorable, the grandmother is awesome and there's a great big bunch of thoughtful additions that show a real love of the universe. Very nice!

  34. Presspass says:

    Pinkie Pie is adorable, the grandmother is awesome and there's a great big bunch of thoughtful additions that show a real love of the universe. Very nice!

  35. Markeith says:

    What everypony else said, I Dawwwwww'd and laughed at this story.Well done and 5-stars!!

  36. Markeith says:

    What everypony else said, I Dawwwwww'd and laughed at this story.Well done and 5-stars!!

  37. Anonymous says:

    Too cute….my brain is melting -_-Actually smiled during this5 stars

  38. Anonymous says:

    Too cute….my brain is melting -_-Actually smiled during this5 stars

  39. Anonymous says:

    Surprise has even more meaning at the end, considering in Lauren Faust's original drawings of G1 ponies, Surprise was the base pony for Pinkie Pie. Scroll down a bit to see the images.http://www.mlparena.com/Forums/viewtopic/t=242067/postdays=0/postorder=asc/start=30.html

  40. Anonymous says:

    Surprise has even more meaning at the end, considering in Lauren Faust's original drawings of G1 ponies, Surprise was the base pony for Pinkie Pie. Scroll down a bit to see the images.http://www.mlparena.com/Forums/viewtopic/t=242067/postdays=0/postorder=asc/start=30.html

  41. Anonymous says:

    Surprise was granny Pie? Never expected something like that! Awesome story! πŸ˜€

  42. Anonymous says:

    Surprise was granny Pie? Never expected something like that! Awesome story! πŸ˜€

  43. Anonymous says:

    SO MUCH D'AAAAAAAAAWWWWWW!!!

  44. Anonymous says:

    SO MUCH D'AAAAAAAAAWWWWWW!!!

  45. Raymond says:

    teeheehee cabbage. that was pretty adorable.

  46. Raymond says:

    teeheehee cabbage. that was pretty adorable.

  47. Anonymous says:

    it made me smile. this story is so adorable.

  48. Anonymous says:

    it made me smile. this story is so adorable.

  49. Anonymous says:

    Me: aww that was such a sweet story :3Scoot: Sweet? Try sappy.Me: Get out.

  50. Anonymous says:

    Me: aww that was such a sweet story :3Scoot: Sweet? Try sappy.Me: Get out.

  51. Bitmun says:

    There's a CIA Miami to be extrapolated from the ending being a Surprise, but it'll get done eventually.The thing I really like about this is how expertly stylized the writing is; it reads precicely like a children's book, and I love it. Itty-bitty twinkie-Pinkie felt a little off, considering how she was in her Chronicles flashback; a little too eratic to be pre-mark and not impulsive enough to be post, but that's just opinionated nit-picking.Excellent story, a reccomended read.

  52. Bitmun says:

    There's a CIA Miami to be extrapolated from the ending being a Surprise, but it'll get done eventually.The thing I really like about this is how expertly stylized the writing is; it reads precicely like a children's book, and I love it. Itty-bitty twinkie-Pinkie felt a little off, considering how she was in her Chronicles flashback; a little too eratic to be pre-mark and not impulsive enough to be post, but that's just opinionated nit-picking.Excellent story, a reccomended read.

  53. Kazberry says:

    First of all, I want to thank everyone for the amazing comments. This is my first time posting here, and I've been slightly panicked about it.@BitmunWhile Pinkie is a little off in this, I think it's partially because I went with the idea that her Chronicles flashback was…colored, and failed to elaborate at all on this. Here, while the family still farms rocks (for the gemstones, naturally) and while her parents are obviously quite strict, they're not the joyless Amish caricatures we saw in the episode…that's just Pinkie thinking they were boring.

  54. Kazberry says:

    First of all, I want to thank everyone for the amazing comments. This is my first time posting here, and I've been slightly panicked about it.@BitmunWhile Pinkie is a little off in this, I think it's partially because I went with the idea that her Chronicles flashback was…colored, and failed to elaborate at all on this. Here, while the family still farms rocks (for the gemstones, naturally) and while her parents are obviously quite strict, they're not the joyless Amish caricatures we saw in the episode…that's just Pinkie thinking they were boring.

  55. Baree says:

    That was as adorable as a short story can be I think. As said, its also completely believable. It could be any grandmother anywhere with any granddaughter.I've got nothing else, so yeah… Its pretty much perfect for what it is. I hope we will see more from your hoof in the future.

  56. Baree says:

    That was as adorable as a short story can be I think. As said, its also completely believable. It could be any grandmother anywhere with any granddaughter.I've got nothing else, so yeah… Its pretty much perfect for what it is. I hope we will see more from your hoof in the future.

  57. Eeyup this is great, five stars from me!

  58. Eeyup this is great, five stars from me!

  59. HHNNNNNNNGGGGG It's so cute!Delta Approves!

  60. HHNNNNNNNGGGGG It's so cute!Delta Approves!

  61. La Barata says:

    There is not enough D'AWWWWW to go around here.

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