Story: Accolade

[Comedy][Shipping] Hey so, Cereal Velocity wrote this story. He said he would never write anything involving shipping, but we all finally convinced him. Feel free to give him crap for that.

We also told him to continue it, so feel free to do that in comments as well. 

Author: Cereal Velocity

Description: Luna and Trixie both want Twilight Sparkle gone. Will teaming up solve their problem once and for all?

Accolade

Additional Tags: Trixie Trixie Trixie Trixie Luna

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145 Responses to Story: Accolade

  1. Anonymous says:

    Description bothers me because they want Twi dead. This is ponies. Wth.

  2. Anonymous says:

    Description bothers me because they want Twi dead. This is ponies. Wth.

  3. Alester says:

    Luna and Trixie? It's not gonna end well.

  4. Alester says:

    Luna and Trixie? It's not gonna end well.

  5. Anonymous says:

    >I agree with anon 1>not bad; mine are certainly worse>SCOOTS IS THE BEST PONI

  6. Anonymous says:

    >I agree with anon 1>not bad; mine are certainly worse>SCOOTS IS THE BEST PONI

  7. Anonymous says:

    Luna killing Twilight? Maybe.Trixie killing Twilight? Not a chance.

  8. Anonymous says:

    Luna killing Twilight? Maybe.Trixie killing Twilight? Not a chance.

  9. TenchiFreak5 says:

    Do Trixie shipping stories exist that aren't comedies? Not that I'm complaining. I just don't think I've ever seen one.And reading this now.

  10. TenchiFreak5 says:

    Do Trixie shipping stories exist that aren't comedies? Not that I'm complaining. I just don't think I've ever seen one.And reading this now.

  11. Anonymous says:

    >Comedy>Trixie wants Twilight Sparkle deadhahahahaha that is funny

  12. Anonymous says:

    >Comedy>Trixie wants Twilight Sparkle deadhahahahaha that is funny

  13. Anonymous says:

    so ponies eat bacon and eggs

  14. Anonymous says:

    so ponies eat bacon and eggs

  15. Anonymous says:

    It was informative to know that ponies eat bacon and eggs. Now I will never see them the same way again.

  16. Anonymous says:

    It was informative to know that ponies eat bacon and eggs. Now I will never see them the same way again.

  17. Anonymous says:

    silly Cereal, Trixie doesn't want to kill Twilight she want to turn Twilight to her sex slave.

  18. Anonymous says:

    silly Cereal, Trixie doesn't want to kill Twilight she want to turn Twilight to her sex slave.

  19. Shmoogy says:

    one of these days there will be a lunaxtrixiexcelestia shipping story wuth a jealous twilight on the sidelines

  20. Shmoogy says:

    one of these days there will be a lunaxtrixiexcelestia shipping story wuth a jealous twilight on the sidelines

  21. Anonymous says:

    lolwut? Just all of that story in it's entireity: lolwut?

  22. Anonymous says:

    lolwut? Just all of that story in it's entireity: lolwut?

  23. ZettaLux says:

    Cereal? WROTE A FIC? RUN FOR YOUR LIVES… RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!

  24. ZettaLux says:

    Cereal? WROTE A FIC? RUN FOR YOUR LIVES… RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!

  25. I've written tons of fics!

  26. I've written tons of fics!

  27. The pic far outshines the fic, though. Sorry, Cereal. -_-You're still an awesome writer.

  28. The pic far outshines the fic, though. Sorry, Cereal. -_-You're still an awesome writer.

  29. Saint Dane says:

    That was actually really good. Your trollestia was in top form. Although I really think they should have been trying to banish Twilight to the moon or something, instead of killing her. And bacon? Anyways, excellent work.

  30. Saint Dane says:

    That was actually really good. Your trollestia was in top form. Although I really think they should have been trying to banish Twilight to the moon or something, instead of killing her. And bacon? Anyways, excellent work.

  31. Miyajima says:

    Sweet Apple Acres has pigs.You don't keep pigs for milk. Or their cute little tails.You do the math.

  32. Miyajima says:

    Sweet Apple Acres has pigs.You don't keep pigs for milk. Or their cute little tails.You do the math.

  33. chinlamp says:

    -Cereal doesn't want to write shipfics.-Writes REALLY long shipfic that may continue.Why does that make it seem to me like he really wanted to do this?

  34. chinlamp says:

    -Cereal doesn't want to write shipfics.-Writes REALLY long shipfic that may continue.Why does that make it seem to me like he really wanted to do this?

  35. Okay, I take it back, the fic is better than the pic. -_-Sorry Mr. Artist person. You're still an awesome drawer.

  36. Okay, I take it back, the fic is better than the pic. -_-Sorry Mr. Artist person. You're still an awesome drawer.

  37. uSea says:

    I usually avoid shipping stories, but I make an exception when they're by authors I already enjoy. And another chance to read about your Trixie again? Yes please!I really enjoyed it; particularly the characterisations of Trixie and Celestia and how they bounced off of Luna.

  38. uSea says:

    I usually avoid shipping stories, but I make an exception when they're by authors I already enjoy. And another chance to read about your Trixie again? Yes please!I really enjoyed it; particularly the characterisations of Trixie and Celestia and how they bounced off of Luna.

  39. Anonymous says:

    Well… that was a surprise ending. Kinda. Maybe. I may have seen it coming…

  40. Anonymous says:

    Well… that was a surprise ending. Kinda. Maybe. I may have seen it coming…

  41. nukeiffum says:

    Haha, what a story mark.

  42. nukeiffum says:

    Haha, what a story mark.

  43. TenchiFreak5 says:

    I love the dialog in this. So many great Trixie lines.Teh Spoilerz:And I love the implication that I got that Celestia was doing all that on purpose just to undermine them in the end.

  44. TenchiFreak5 says:

    I love the dialog in this. So many great Trixie lines.Teh Spoilerz:And I love the implication that I got that Celestia was doing all that on purpose just to undermine them in the end.

  45. Anonymous says:

    Oddly enough, this is the fic that has made me hate Celestia, even more than the grimdark fics!

  46. Anonymous says:

    Oddly enough, this is the fic that has made me hate Celestia, even more than the grimdark fics!

  47. Phoe says:

    @chinlampBecause we broke him. We broke him hard.

  48. Phoe says:

    @chinlampBecause we broke him. We broke him hard.

  49. Anonymous says:

    That was some awesome Celly.

  50. Anonymous says:

    That was some awesome Celly.

  51. I smell plothole*SPOILERS BELOW*despite trixie leaving without luna's plan she is still now a match for twilight whats stopping her from attacking her anyway?

  52. I smell plothole*SPOILERS BELOW*despite trixie leaving without luna's plan she is still now a match for twilight whats stopping her from attacking her anyway?

  53. Asgard314 says:

    Please Cereal, we will PAY you with thousands of plates of *ahemmetaphoricalahem* cake if you continue this, tis quite funny.

  54. Asgard314 says:

    Please Cereal, we will PAY you with thousands of plates of *ahemmetaphoricalahem* cake if you continue this, tis quite funny.

  55. Anonymous says:

    @bobbin the unicorn That clearly leaves room for a sequel.

  56. Anonymous says:

    @bobbin the unicorn That clearly leaves room for a sequel.

  57. Anonymous says:

    Lol, that was the epitome of Trollestia.

  58. Anonymous says:

    Lol, that was the epitome of Trollestia.

  59. chinlamp says:

    @PhoeThink we can break him enough to ship Rarity with someone other than him?

  60. chinlamp says:

    @PhoeThink we can break him enough to ship Rarity with someone other than him?

  61. CELESTIA LIKES TO WATCHThis is the best Celestia fic I have ever read. I'm in tears, dude.

  62. CELESTIA LIKES TO WATCHThis is the best Celestia fic I have ever read. I'm in tears, dude.

  63. ZettaLux says:

    Oh my gosh, I'm laughing like no tomorrow. Trollestia is best Celestia.

  64. ZettaLux says:

    Oh my gosh, I'm laughing like no tomorrow. Trollestia is best Celestia.

  65. ruff1298 says:

    Lovely work, Cereal. I absolutely adore your writing Luna as the type of person to be extremely paranoid, and have afterthoughts. I especially loved the parts when Luna was thinking that maybe Celestia was planning to do both.I honestly don't like Evil Luna, but I enjoyed your implication that Luna is a great actress and still seeks to overthrow Celestia. It really throws a great continuation to Luna's little murderous tantrums against her sister's disciplinary action.I was kind of saddened by the lack of continuation with the Twixie. It was hilarious when you had Trixie's speech and thought be so pompous and self-flattering, and the point where she rebuked her ever thinking Twilight's eyes were delicious was absolutely hilarious.I died when Celestia left a good-willed treat in the library. So like our Celestia to screw around with her sister and be nice at the same time.I died again with the clop-fiction.Your describing deadpan tones and the like was excellent. I always have an issue with "completely deadpan" coming after the dialogue, but now I realize that it works. I should really start mixing descriptions and moody dialogue again.Great ending with Trixie getting the wrong idea. I skipped most of the semi-clop stuff, because it's just not my thing, but I enjoyed the major whiplash with Trixie just up and storming like that. Excellent ender, if I may say so myself.

  66. ruff1298 says:

    Lovely work, Cereal. I absolutely adore your writing Luna as the type of person to be extremely paranoid, and have afterthoughts. I especially loved the parts when Luna was thinking that maybe Celestia was planning to do both.I honestly don't like Evil Luna, but I enjoyed your implication that Luna is a great actress and still seeks to overthrow Celestia. It really throws a great continuation to Luna's little murderous tantrums against her sister's disciplinary action.I was kind of saddened by the lack of continuation with the Twixie. It was hilarious when you had Trixie's speech and thought be so pompous and self-flattering, and the point where she rebuked her ever thinking Twilight's eyes were delicious was absolutely hilarious.I died when Celestia left a good-willed treat in the library. So like our Celestia to screw around with her sister and be nice at the same time.I died again with the clop-fiction.Your describing deadpan tones and the like was excellent. I always have an issue with "completely deadpan" coming after the dialogue, but now I realize that it works. I should really start mixing descriptions and moody dialogue again.Great ending with Trixie getting the wrong idea. I skipped most of the semi-clop stuff, because it's just not my thing, but I enjoyed the major whiplash with Trixie just up and storming like that. Excellent ender, if I may say so myself.

  67. Andrew says:

    Brilliantly, hilariously done! Every bit was fantastic, aside from the semi-clop stuff but I just skipped it. And that ending was hilarious.

  68. Andrew says:

    Brilliantly, hilariously done! Every bit was fantastic, aside from the semi-clop stuff but I just skipped it. And that ending was hilarious.

  69. Dave says:

    @TenchiFreak5I've also never seen a Twilight-centric fic where she didn't screw up the magic getting her and the gang into daily crazy shenanigans.

  70. Dave says:

    @TenchiFreak5I've also never seen a Twilight-centric fic where she didn't screw up the magic getting her and the gang into daily crazy shenanigans.

  71. @DaveUnfortunately I have played my part in perpetuating that particular story archetype. Twilight screwing up her special talent is fun to write.

  72. @DaveUnfortunately I have played my part in perpetuating that particular story archetype. Twilight screwing up her special talent is fun to write.

  73. Anonymous says:

    Oh please do write more. This was just too hilarious .. it's like imagining tom and jerry antics .. except tom and jerry are Luna and Trixie and both want the same filly dead.

  74. Anonymous says:

    Oh please do write more. This was just too hilarious .. it's like imagining tom and jerry antics .. except tom and jerry are Luna and Trixie and both want the same filly dead.

  75. Anonymous says:

    Ultimate Trollestia. Not a huge fan of the cloppish stuff, but I laughed my ass off throughout the rest of it.

  76. Anonymous says:

    Ultimate Trollestia. Not a huge fan of the cloppish stuff, but I laughed my ass off throughout the rest of it.

  77. Anonymous says:

    Heh, when the cloppy stuff rolled around, I half expected a "STOP RIGHT THERE CRIMINAL SCUM"

  78. Anonymous says:

    Heh, when the cloppy stuff rolled around, I half expected a "STOP RIGHT THERE CRIMINAL SCUM"

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  81. Markeith says:

    I wasn't too sold on this story at first but when I got to the end I couldn't stop laughing…Classic Trollestia

  82. Markeith says:

    I wasn't too sold on this story at first but when I got to the end I couldn't stop laughing…Classic Trollestia

  83. Gozerian says:

    Wow Trollestia can be quite the horn-blocker.

  84. Gozerian says:

    Wow Trollestia can be quite the horn-blocker.

  85. Anonymous says:

    I now understand what force caused Luna to transform into Night Mare Moon. Well done.

  86. Anonymous says:

    I now understand what force caused Luna to transform into Night Mare Moon. Well done.

  87. Anonymous says:

    Laughed a LOT, still smiling. I'd have liked to see this continued. I had to keep looking away just so I could contain myself so I could keep reading.

  88. Anonymous says:

    Laughed a LOT, still smiling. I'd have liked to see this continued. I had to keep looking away just so I could contain myself so I could keep reading.

  89. I was laughing the entire way through. I didn't know you had it in you Cereal, that was one of the funniest fics I've ever read, and the way you depicted Luna was golden — very different from the norm. You better continue this, a second part would be SO AWESOME!

  90. I was laughing the entire way through. I didn't know you had it in you Cereal, that was one of the funniest fics I've ever read, and the way you depicted Luna was golden — very different from the norm. You better continue this, a second part would be SO AWESOME!

  91. Alexstrazsa says:

    Be right back, picking up a case of you’re stupid and so is that idea.

  92. Alexstrazsa says:

    Be right back, picking up a case of you’re stupid and so is that idea.

  93. Kujiiro says:

    Fukkin' loved this.

  94. Kujiiro says:

    Fukkin' loved this.

  95. Nick says:

    Oh man. This was freaking great. Trixie was golden, and although I don't particularly like vengeful Luna, it was a nice change of pace and well written, so I'll roll with it.Then it got to the cloppy parts. Not sure why I'm okay with it, but damn. I really have no complaints about this story outside of a general distaste for vengeful Luna and the fact that it ended far too abruptly. Write more!

  96. Nick says:

    Oh man. This was freaking great. Trixie was golden, and although I don't particularly like vengeful Luna, it was a nice change of pace and well written, so I'll roll with it.Then it got to the cloppy parts. Not sure why I'm okay with it, but damn. I really have no complaints about this story outside of a general distaste for vengeful Luna and the fact that it ended far too abruptly. Write more!

  97. FoxOfWar says:

    Smiled the whole way through, even if it was slightly more "evil Luna" than I care for.And now, for some *completely inexplicable reason* I want to draw Luna hitting her head to a wall in frustration. 😉

  98. FoxOfWar says:

    Smiled the whole way through, even if it was slightly more "evil Luna" than I care for.And now, for some *completely inexplicable reason* I want to draw Luna hitting her head to a wall in frustration. 😉

  99. mfw Trollestia knew everything all along

  100. mfw Trollestia knew everything all along

  101. Anonymous says:

    It would be just as funny if Celestia REALLY thought the two were trying to be, well, an item… I've known a couple of dedicated shippers (one, sadly, a yaoi maniac) and they CAN be that obsessive.

  102. Anonymous says:

    It would be just as funny if Celestia REALLY thought the two were trying to be, well, an item… I've known a couple of dedicated shippers (one, sadly, a yaoi maniac) and they CAN be that obsessive.

  103. ProfesorRod says:

    It's only homosexual if the horns are touc–Oh, Mollestia… I see what you did thar~

  104. ProfesorRod says:

    It's only homosexual if the horns are touc–Oh, Mollestia… I see what you did thar~

  105. Anonymous says:

    If only Luna's hornblowing skills weren't rusty whit 1000 years of celibacy…

  106. Anonymous says:

    If only Luna's hornblowing skills weren't rusty whit 1000 years of celibacy…

  107. Anonymous says:

    now that was top tier Trollestia, great story.Also "The Celestia-pult" best revenge plan EVER.

  108. Anonymous says:

    now that was top tier Trollestia, great story.Also "The Celestia-pult" best revenge plan EVER.

  109. Zarkanorf says:

    @Phoe/r/ing Phoe's ponysona and Seth-cube "breaking in" Cereal's ponysona.

  110. Zarkanorf says:

    @Phoe/r/ing Phoe's ponysona and Seth-cube "breaking in" Cereal's ponysona.

  111. Lovecraft says:

    Oh man, this was way too entertaining, I was pretty much laughing throughout the entire thing.I love vindictive Luna AND out-of-touch snarky Luna, so having them combined in one story was just fantastic. And, of course, I love Trixie, and all of her boasty bravado. Giving her a crush on Spitfire was pretty funny, I enjoyed that bit.If you do plan on continuing in some way, I'm curious what Trixie plans to do with all of that magic she's learned now that Luna's no longer backing her.Anyway, thanks for the story!

  112. Lovecraft says:

    Oh man, this was way too entertaining, I was pretty much laughing throughout the entire thing.I love vindictive Luna AND out-of-touch snarky Luna, so having them combined in one story was just fantastic. And, of course, I love Trixie, and all of her boasty bravado. Giving her a crush on Spitfire was pretty funny, I enjoyed that bit.If you do plan on continuing in some way, I'm curious what Trixie plans to do with all of that magic she's learned now that Luna's no longer backing her.Anyway, thanks for the story!

  113. sandvichgod2 says:

    ok well heres what i think trixy killing/twilight = 1,000,000%luna killing/twilight = -1,000,000%reason isif you read "the spark" you would know why

  114. sandvichgod2 says:

    ok well heres what i think trixy killing/twilight = 1,000,000%luna killing/twilight = -1,000,000%reason isif you read "the spark" you would know why

  115. One of the funniest stories I've read in a while! Lovely characterization, too, and Celestia was in fine form. 🙂

  116. One of the funniest stories I've read in a while! Lovely characterization, too, and Celestia was in fine form. 🙂

  117. Sun Ray says:

    Not gonna read. I love Luna and Trixie too much to have my perfect perceptions ruined =(.

  118. Sun Ray says:

    Not gonna read. I love Luna and Trixie too much to have my perfect perceptions ruined =(.

  119. Anonymous says:

    This story has Luna, Trixie, Trollestia, and bacon. What more do I need?Maybe another story from cereal velocity?

  120. Anonymous says:

    This story has Luna, Trixie, Trollestia, and bacon. What more do I need?Maybe another story from cereal velocity?

  121. Anonymous says:

    A pony's diet, I should mention, is completely vegetarian.

  122. Anonymous says:

    A pony's diet, I should mention, is completely vegetarian.

  123. Anonymous says:

    Thanks to you, I now love Trollestia. And even kind-of-evil-Luna. Hope you're happy.

  124. Anonymous says:

    Thanks to you, I now love Trollestia. And even kind-of-evil-Luna. Hope you're happy.

  125. FoxOfWar says:

    Luna + wall, as promised: http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg23/FoxOfWar/LunaHeadbang.jpgAlthough now I wonder if Luna actually does have a wall exactly for that purpose?

  126. FoxOfWar says:

    Luna + wall, as promised: http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg23/FoxOfWar/LunaHeadbang.jpgAlthough now I wonder if Luna actually does have a wall exactly for that purpose?

  127. Nick says:

    @FoxofWar is that an abacus I spy in the emergency case?

  128. Nick says:

    @FoxofWar is that an abacus I spy in the emergency case?

  129. Andrew says:

    @FoxOfWarHeh. Love the abacus on the wall. And the pic in general, though I still think you do noses a bit weird. That's just me though.

  130. Andrew says:

    @FoxOfWarHeh. Love the abacus on the wall. And the pic in general, though I still think you do noses a bit weird. That's just me though.

  131. Anonymous says:

    ooooooooooooh how cuteLuna following her sister´s stepsShe is just a troll like CelestiaPoor Trixie LOL

  132. Anonymous says:

    ooooooooooooh how cuteLuna following her sister´s stepsShe is just a troll like CelestiaPoor Trixie LOL

  133. I love it! Can I use tha as the OP image for the story?

  134. I love it! Can I use tha as the OP image for the story?

  135. FoxOfWar says:

    Sure you can – I'd be honored, really 🙂

  136. FoxOfWar says:

    Sure you can – I'd be honored, really 🙂

  137. FoxOfWar says:

    @AndrewAs far as drawing noses go, I'm well aware it's not exactly MLP:FiM style. But it's very hard to shake the knowledge of how horse muzzles work when drawn realistically, it kind of bleeds over without even thinking about it. :PPut in perspective: I've drawn the FiM ponies for maybe month and a half. I've drawn equines in general for maybe eight years…

  138. FoxOfWar says:

    @AndrewAs far as drawing noses go, I'm well aware it's not exactly MLP:FiM style. But it's very hard to shake the knowledge of how horse muzzles work when drawn realistically, it kind of bleeds over without even thinking about it. :PPut in perspective: I've drawn the FiM ponies for maybe month and a half. I've drawn equines in general for maybe eight years…

  139. Anonymous says:

    Please, we GROVEL AT YOUR HOOVES TO CONTINUE CEREAL!But being less dramatic, I'd love to see more bacon. And horn blowing. And Trollestia. Oh yes, more of her. More vindictive, slightly-snide Luna. It ended so masterfully, yet so abruptly. T'honestly a damn shame if you ain't continue it. Do you see this fic? It is now rainbows. And there must more rainbows.

  140. Anonymous says:

    Please, we GROVEL AT YOUR HOOVES TO CONTINUE CEREAL!But being less dramatic, I'd love to see more bacon. And horn blowing. And Trollestia. Oh yes, more of her. More vindictive, slightly-snide Luna. It ended so masterfully, yet so abruptly. T'honestly a damn shame if you ain't continue it. Do you see this fic? It is now rainbows. And there must more rainbows.

  141. The best was the final part, while Celestia was watching Trixie and Luna doing something weird. I felt sad that Trixie said to stop it. Yeah… i like yuri stuff written very well. Keep up the good work!

  142. The best was the final part, while Celestia was watching Trixie and Luna doing something weird. I felt sad that Trixie said to stop it. Yeah… i like yuri stuff written very well. Keep up the good work!

  143. @Miyajima No but I always though that they were raised to find truffle in equestria. Also, if Celestia always acted like that toward her little sister, it is not a wonder that she ended becoming Nightmare Moon.

  144. @Miyajima No but I always though that they were raised to find truffle in equestria. Also, if Celestia always acted like that toward her little sister, it is not a wonder that she ended becoming Nightmare Moon.

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