Story: Pie’s Path

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Author: Sagebrush

Description: After Pinkie Pie discovered her special talent and her life’s calling, what became of the rest of her family? How did her departure affect them?

A Pie’s Path

Additional Tags: Slice of Life, Dreams, Responsibilities

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36 Responses to Story: Pie’s Path

  1. Baree says:

    Its not the best thing ever, but it works. Short, sweet and not unimaginative. Read it, enjoyed it.

  2. Baree says:

    Its not the best thing ever, but it works. Short, sweet and not unimaginative. Read it, enjoyed it.

  3. I'd like to begin by saying that this was a very good story, and I liked the subtle pop culture trio created with the names given to Pinkie's siblings. The story very neatly ties in to the world of MLP:FiM, and needless to say, it might actually work nicely as a side-story, similar to the Cutie Mark Crusaders' episodes. Though the concept of Pinkie's writing being identical to how she speaks – drifting in-between thoughts – seems fairly off to me, I have no say in how the story was written, and I acknowledge that I subsequently have no grounds for complaints.All in all, a very good explanation of what Pinkie Pie's siblings and parents did when she left the farm.

  4. I'd like to begin by saying that this was a very good story, and I liked the subtle pop culture trio created with the names given to Pinkie's siblings. The story very neatly ties in to the world of MLP:FiM, and needless to say, it might actually work nicely as a side-story, similar to the Cutie Mark Crusaders' episodes. Though the concept of Pinkie's writing being identical to how she speaks – drifting in-between thoughts – seems fairly off to me, I have no say in how the story was written, and I acknowledge that I subsequently have no grounds for complaints.All in all, a very good explanation of what Pinkie Pie's siblings and parents did when she left the farm.

  5. ToonNinja says:

    An interesting sort of contemplative piece. Has kind of a melancholy undertone to it, but overall quite uplifting. Even if I'm still more convinced Octavia is a member of the Pie family.Also, completely unrelated note, but does anybody know if we're going to celebrate at 11 million? I get the sinking feeling we might have to start waiting for every 5 million views.

  6. ToonNinja says:

    An interesting sort of contemplative piece. Has kind of a melancholy undertone to it, but overall quite uplifting. Even if I'm still more convinced Octavia is a member of the Pie family.Also, completely unrelated note, but does anybody know if we're going to celebrate at 11 million? I get the sinking feeling we might have to start waiting for every 5 million views.

  7. Sali says:

    This was a really sweet story and a pleasure to work on. Reading it really did bring a smile to my face. :3I also like the Inkie, Blinkie, Pinkie, Sue and Clyde thing the fandom's picked up. XD That's awesome.Anyway, great work, Sage! :3 Look forward to more!

  8. Sali says:

    This was a really sweet story and a pleasure to work on. Reading it really did bring a smile to my face. :3I also like the Inkie, Blinkie, Pinkie, Sue and Clyde thing the fandom's picked up. XD That's awesome.Anyway, great work, Sage! :3 Look forward to more!

  9. Anonymous says:

    That was nice. I know "nice" sounds like a stock word for somebody who's struggling to say something positive about a mediocre story, but I really did enjoy it. It wasn't exciting or romantic or sugary; it was just… nice. And I feel all the better for having read it.

  10. Anonymous says:

    That was nice. I know "nice" sounds like a stock word for somebody who's struggling to say something positive about a mediocre story, but I really did enjoy it. It wasn't exciting or romantic or sugary; it was just… nice. And I feel all the better for having read it.

  11. i_love_lamps says:

    d'awwwww, short and sweet, very nice story πŸ˜€

  12. i_love_lamps says:

    d'awwwww, short and sweet, very nice story πŸ˜€

  13. Anonymous says:

    I'm kinda upset that this has less comments… Anyways great story! If it was a bit short, but you were working with people we've only heard about for a few seconds

  14. Anonymous says:

    I'm kinda upset that this has less comments… Anyways great story! If it was a bit short, but you were working with people we've only heard about for a few seconds

  15. Sagebrush says:

    @SaliThank you so much for your input by the way, you're fantastic.

  16. Sagebrush says:

    @SaliThank you so much for your input by the way, you're fantastic.

  17. I really liked it. :3

  18. I really liked it. :3

  19. Anonymous says:

    Now, I usually like my poni long and with a side of grimdark, but this was short, sweet, well written, and most importantly, it made me smile. Very well done.

  20. Anonymous says:

    Now, I usually like my poni long and with a side of grimdark, but this was short, sweet, well written, and most importantly, it made me smile. Very well done.

  21. Bunnylisk says:

    I really enjoyed it πŸ˜€

  22. Bunnylisk says:

    I really enjoyed it πŸ˜€

  23. Kits says:

    i enjoyed it. It was pretty tight. I liked the way pinkie writes her letter: Its similar to how I would have done it.

  24. Kits says:

    i enjoyed it. It was pretty tight. I liked the way pinkie writes her letter: Its similar to how I would have done it.

  25. Anonymous says:

    This was sweet, and good a for a quick read. Kudos!

  26. Anonymous says:

    This was sweet, and good a for a quick read. Kudos!

  27. Anonymous says:

    I liked this story. It was different then other stories i have read. I usually read shipping and sad stories, but this one really made me smile.

  28. Anonymous says:

    I liked this story. It was different then other stories i have read. I usually read shipping and sad stories, but this one really made me smile.

  29. Anonymous says:

    That was a sweet story it brought a smile to my lips.

  30. Anonymous says:

    That was a sweet story it brought a smile to my lips.

  31. I feel acomplished for having read this! Well done!

  32. I feel acomplished for having read this! Well done!

  33. drewdle says:

    I really enjoyed this. Great extrapolation of some characters we didn't see much of. Loved Pinkie's letter to them! Thanks for sharing.

  34. drewdle says:

    I really enjoyed this. Great extrapolation of some characters we didn't see much of. Loved Pinkie's letter to them! Thanks for sharing.

  35. Sagebrush says:

    @ToonNinjaThis is actually an older story that I wrote before Octavia made her appearance, so it kinda clashes a bit with fanon =). I just decided to release it recently.My aim was not to draw attention to the specific life paths the sisters took, but rather the fact that they chose to take them; hopefully I managed. Whether they found a passion for archaeology, classical music, dance, or photography wasn't as relevant as they idea that they'd embrace that passion.So I encourage anyone reading to take my presumptions about the Pies as nothing more than a means to parrot a common, but valuable message: always dare to dream, and never feel that you're too old to do so =).

  36. Sagebrush says:

    @ToonNinjaThis is actually an older story that I wrote before Octavia made her appearance, so it kinda clashes a bit with fanon =). I just decided to release it recently.My aim was not to draw attention to the specific life paths the sisters took, but rather the fact that they chose to take them; hopefully I managed. Whether they found a passion for archaeology, classical music, dance, or photography wasn't as relevant as they idea that they'd embrace that passion.So I encourage anyone reading to take my presumptions about the Pies as nothing more than a means to parrot a common, but valuable message: always dare to dream, and never feel that you're too old to do so =).

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