Story: Nopony Can Resist ‘Em

[Shipping] It’s short, sweet, and wonderfully cheesy, and it knows it.-Pre-reader #15

Author: N.K.

Description: It’s said that the fastest way to a colt’s heart is through his stomach. When Soarin’s sweet tooth begins to arise while visiting Rainbow Dash, he’s advised to pay a visit to Sweet Apple Acres. Will he recognise the mare who made the pie of his dreams when out of dress?

Nopony Can Resist ‘Em

Additional Tags: Short, Sweet, Light-Hearted, Cuddly, Pies

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34 Responses to Story: Nopony Can Resist ‘Em

  1. Anonymous says:

    Yep, pre-reader 15 pretty much hit the nail on the head. A pretty well-written story, and I found it really cute!

  2. Bow chika wow woooow

  3. Dave says:

    Eeyup. Twas amusing. I liked it.

  4. Bobcat says:

    So, what happens when a drunken Big Mac comes home to find his sister in bed with some stranger?I say Pitchfork Wedding.

  5. mbulsht says:

    Haha, this one was pretty good. I'd like to see more of this ship.

  6. Anonymous says:

    They did or did not have sex?

  7. ToonNinja says:

    Well that progressed… quickly. Very interesting read, and apparently a new pairing to keep on my radar…

  8. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousI agree with your agreement.

  9. Brett Turner says:

    andthentheyallfucked.gif

  10. Bobcat says:

    @Brett Turner Now now, only one or two bases were crossed.

  11. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousSounds like they did not go all the way.

  12. That was so cheesy I think my arteries are clogged.And I mean this in the best way possible.Fun little read.

  13. ZettaLux says:

    As said before, fun little read. But I found the progression to be a little too fast, to at least be realistic. Nonetheless, nicely done.

  14. TenchiFreak5 says:

    Got a good laugh out of this one. Pre-reader #15 was right on the money.

  15. Kyle says:

    That was a cute, funny little story. Nothing really game-changing or revolutionary, but a solid little piece of work, and quite amusing.

  16. Anonymous says:

    And then Applebloom was an auntie.

  17. Anonymous says:

    @supervanman64My thoughts exactly. 😉

  18. Anonymous says:

    Yeah…it did progress a little quickly…

  19. Hayatecooper says:

    I like it, we need more of this pairing. It makes so much sense.

  20. Anonymous says:

    You drag us right up to the bed chamber and don't even give us a peak inside. Lame.

  21. Anonymous says:

    I enjoyed this TOO much… oh Celestia… WHAT'S HAPPENING TO ME?

  22. Anonymous says:

    I agree with Kyle, and also, I think the last line is the best one.

  23. Anonymous says:

    Could've used a bit more of a build-up, either between the pie and the kissing, or between them kissing and going to bed, but otherwise solid.

  24. Nyoko says:

    Author here – thank you for all the comments and feedback, it's much appreciated. :)Major problem point seems to be the rush – I think you're probably all right, though I kind of set myself the goal of doing a quick story as my first ever piece – 3000 words in 2 hours was the goal, and I didn't want to try and go NSFW on my first ever MLP story – hence why the naughty is only implied, and not fully at that. AJ strikes me as the kind of girl to not go the absolute full hog at the very first. Of course, you're free to imagine how the night went otherwise. ;)Anyway, thank you for the comments and reviews, and I shall be submitting and writing a few more fics before the month is out. -N.K.

  25. justsomepony says:

    That was really cute! Great job Nyoko!!

  26. ratinha Dey says:

    That was a cutie and lovely story!! and I imagined all that, it was an amazing story so well written and so charming!

  27. Anonymous says:

    I hate Google docs. it's slow on my comp (which is outdated sooo lol)but.I had.to read this.FHEJKFJADSKLAFJDKSJEWOIAINTRO PIC WAS ADORABLEAND I HAD THE DASH FACE THE ENTIRE TIME I WAS READING THIS!!!!!SO…. CUTE….! /)>3<(\I even found the implied sex adorable. is that weird? O.oanyway, yeah, i agree that it was a bit rushed too, and the ending was confusing; was it Spitfire or RD outside the window? or both? that needed to be a bit more clear.GRRR, FIRST APPLEDASHTHEN BIG MACXFLUTTERSHYNOW SOARIN X APPLEJACKCRACK PAIRINGS FTW.jpg

  28. Not bad, not bad at all.

  29. Not bad, not bad at all.

  30. Muff_Muff94 says:

    It needs a sequal, It was amusing, but ending did not amuse, and the rush part should be less rushy

  31. Colt.45 says:

    Ha, that was adorable! Even considering how easy Applejack was, I couldn't help but smile the whole time. It's definitely sexual in implication, but as well, it was just so cute and playful that it almost seemed…innocent? Not the word i'm looking for, but close enough. Very enjoyable read.

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