Story: Photo Shoot

[Grimdark] “Like a sharp needle applied to the skin, Photo Shoot is an interesting little instrument filled with insanity and intrigue.”-Pre Reader #23 (Showoff)

Author: ItsTheWhinyGuys

Description: She shall pay. She shall pay dearly for snubbing Rarity and her fashions…

Photo Shoot Docs
Photo Shoot DA

Additional Tags: Anger, revenge, murder, dark humor, Photo Finish

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17 Responses to Story: Photo Shoot

  1. Anonymous says:

    Aw hell, Photo Finish is screwed.

  2. Anonymous says:

    Ok, the ending to the first part is kinda funny in how it counters the first chunk. That ending paragraph is just cute 😀

  3. Since Rarity and Photo Finish are my 2 favourites, I didn't think that I'd like this very much. It was actually quite well-written and made the most of Rarity's perspective.

  4. Hikuro14 says:

    It was a good story. Kinda short though.Got my heart racing at some parts.

  5. T.O. Brony says:

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  6. T.O. Brony says:

    Fluttershy would probably have a more cunning plan, such as say…leaving a 'special order' for Pinkie…

  7. RedCore says:

    Pretty good, just felt too short.I would gladly read a chapter 2 of this.

  8. sponsz says:

    >Anger, revenge, murdermfw i saw the header image

  9. NinesTempest says:

    Heh, that was fun for what it was. A tad short.

  10. Fluttershy says:

    But, but it needs more. The ending just well….

  11. Baree says:

    I never ever read Grimdark. Ever. Except for the fallout crossover, but that one doesn't count.Somehow though, I knew I wouldn't mind this story. And I was right. Anyway, yeah, its ok I guess. Written well enough, but it doesn't really stump the reader. Kept me occupied for a few minutes anyway.

  12. Anonymous says:

    Lol.This was great. It'd like a second chapter,though.

  13. Anonymous says:

    I am now envisioning Rarity dressed as agent 47.

  14. Epona says:


  15. To all those saying this should be longer/needs a continuation: it is quite possible I will extend this a bit, seeing how there were a few parts I had wanted to expand on here and there, but I really did envision this more as a one-shot; I don't think I'll be doing a sequel, to be honest.Anyways, thanks for the critique and support!

  16. La Barata says:


  17. Anonymous says:

    Rarity + Grimdark = Perfect ComboNice story!

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