Story: A Mile High in the Summer Sky


[Shipping] So I heard you guys like borderline clopfics!

Author: ButterscotchSundae

Description: When Fluttershy goes looking for Rainbow Dash’s help, she instead finds herself on an adventure with the gorgeous Spitfire and together they learn that love can be painful as well as pleasurable.

A Mile High in the Summer Sky

Additional tags: ButterscotchSundae Spitfire Fluttershy Trollestia erotic but not too cloppy

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73 Responses to Story: A Mile High in the Summer Sky

  1. Anonymous says:

    "So I heard you guys like borderline clopfics!"You are mistaken, my good sir.

  2. Anonymous says:

    Mmm, Dom Fluttershy is delicious….curse these ponies.

  3. Lol; Awesome!That is all.

  4. NinesTempest says:

    WHY IS THIS HERE BUT NOT ON DA D: D: D:

  5. Anonymous says:

    >borderline clopficsYOU HAVE MY ATTENTION.

  6. Zarkanorf says:

    > borderline clopfics> posted by Cereal VelocitySETHISTO IS GONE, POST CLOPFICS

  7. Anonymous says:

    Well well well, what have we here. Guilty pleasures ahoy

  8. Anonymous says:

    >Fluttershy>borderline clopfic…I'm ok with that

  9. Anonymous says:

    @NinesTempestIt's on DA; has been for hours.

  10. LOLZorzs says:

    I Wonder if we'll be seeing Rainbow Dash with her goggles more often in season 2

  11. Anonymous says:

    That ending…. MUAHAHAHAHA

  12. NinesTempest says:

    @Anonymouswow fuck me, I dont' see the journal update.Yes mad.

  13. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousSpeak for yourself! mmmmm clopfics!

  14. Pegasi says:

    Funny how Celeal refueses to read cupcakes, yet aprooves of clopfics…

  15. Yes, yes I do like borderline (and not-so-borderline) clopfic. And I also like Buttersc0tch's writing. This is not coincidental. ^_^

  16. @PegasiNot really, I have exactly the same preferences. Little interest in being horrified, great interest in being titillated. 🙂

  17. Hikuro14 says:

    My god…My mouth was agape for like…half the story.

  18. Flutterfire? What the hay. We don't even have many proper Spitdash's yet.

  19. Anonymous says:

    *clop clop clop*

  20. Anonymous says:

    Oh gosh… The ending… Internet fueled mental pictures are a go.

  21. Anonymous says:

    This fic made my day. That is all…

  22. Anonymous says:

    You know what? Despite all the fanart, I don't think we've had a single DashFire fanfic yet. We've had DashSoarin, and now this…Am I missing something here?..

  23. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousWhatever it is, I'm missing it too. I expected a dash/spitfire story within a day of the season finale.Writers, I am disappoint.

  24. Kits says:

    I've said it before and I'm sure I'll say it again. Everything Butterscotch writes is PURE GOLD.>mfw THE WHOLE STORY

  25. @NinesTempestI just finished my Dashfire and left a note to have someone I know look over it.

  26. Adrian Brony says:

    well written but it was just plain too… rapey… for me.as in, I kind of had to stop because I just couldn't stand that… but that was a creative decision I won't hold against you too much I guess.

  27. Duskfly says:

    What did I just read? Oh right a borderline clopfic. Should have seen this coming.

  28. Anonymous says:

    Oh, I just got the Mile High club reference. Also, Flutterape.

  29. NinesTempest says:

    @Narwhals' Bend2/3s done. My proofreader and I spend hours on it at a time, so yeah.HOPEFULLY IT BEATS THE SHIT OUT OF YOURS

  30. I'm not a big fan of Butterscotch, honestly – for obvious reasons.Have to say, however, that the little bit of self-deprecation at the end was funny. Didn't make up for the story, but it was funny.

  31. Still want that G-rated clopfic competition xD

  32. rangergx9 says:

    … Not really borderline… <.<

  33. Anonymous says:

    oh god that last part!Trollestia Queen of the Ships!Butter's been my favorite writer since The Party Hasn't Ended and she still is

  34. Anonymous says:

    Wut.Just…. wut.What did I just read!?!

  35. I'm going to give Fluttershy some love now so I don'y get assaulted…good story by the way.Later

  36. Anonymous says:

    Why do we STILL not have any RDxSF fics? Really, seth has something like 20 pics just waiting for a fic, and there's nothing!Still, awesome fic. Funny ending, good buildup, and rather cloptastic bit.

  37. Anonymous says:

    Spitfire and Fluttershy? That's not how you spell RAINBOW DASH.

  38. Anonymous says:

    talking about rape xd

  39. Shellsh0cker says:

    >So I heard you guys like borderline clopfics!Did you put a fic in our fic so we can read while we read?

  40. Star Whistle says:

    I'm pretty sure Dash x Spitfire is against the rules because it's too obvious. It's basically shipping Dash with Future Dash.Anticipating a mammoth post of 20+ Dash x Spitfire for the 7 million view threshold ^_^

  41. Anonymous says:

    Did someone say BORDERLINE CLOPFICS?

  42. If I don't see that Spike x Mac followup I'll stab somepony.

  43. Zarkanorf says:

    @AnonymousNo. What gave you that idea?

  44. Anonymous says:

    Oh God, Flutterape. I am okay with this.

  45. Anonymous says:

    2/3 of the population are girls? when is the last time you looked at other ponies? It's at least 4/5 of the population are girls.

  46. Anonymous says:

    crap wrong story

  47. Brian says:

    This…was disappointing. I loved the first two/thirds, I loved the last one/third, but together…it was just too big a tonal 180. The Celestia reveal just made the beautiful descriptions and romantic moments between the two seem cruel and heartless.I mean, the progression of the Spitfire/Fluttershy was beautiful, the events exhilarating while making it seem plausible for their relationship to happen. Then suddenly BAM! Celestia reveal, rendering every previous moment of sweetness and excitement between the two null and void.

  48. Bejoty says:

    @BrianThis exactly. =\I should have just stopped when I realized the story was turning a completely different direction.Still, very impressive writing.

  49. BagOfChips says:

    Equestria: Everyone is a lesbian, apparently.

  50. ^Everyone EXCEPT Dash.

  51. Butters says:

    Aw, the last bit with Celestia is just a parody of the Romantic notion of Cupid pulling all the strings behind the scenes. No need to think of it as being a cruel trick – all love is a game after all! It's no more cruel than if you invite two mutual friends to a party in the hope they'll get together. Now, if Fluttershy and Spitfire HADN'T ended up together at the end, it would have indeed been horrible – a kind of rape-by-proxy. I leave that to our grimdark friends.I think some people are confusing the fanon Celestia with my particular portrayal of her in this situation – which is definitely something I should have expected. Oh well! Perhaps a sequel with Spitfire and Fluttershy getting married and having a foal will help that. (coolface.jpg)Oh, and thanks for reading everyone! Once I hit 666,666 page views a portal to Equestria will open – at least that's what I've been promised.

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  53. I hope this doesn't happen tomorrow on our date…

  54. Vopogon says:

    Never again….

  55. At first I was like, you know, that's not too Fluttershy-like.But then I was like, what in the hay, psychotic Fluttershy is dominatrix, oh Celestia, that's so awesome, give me more.The ending just made me laugh hard, Trollesta surely have imagination.

  56. Anonymous says:

    wait. i didnt really see the 'borderline' there. :S also. SPIKE x BIG MAC OH DEAR GOD NO

  57. 5t3v0 says:

    wow… That was unexpected…

  58. Anonymous says:

    Rapey Fluttershy confuses me.However, Celestia playing horrible matchmaker is all kinds of hilarious.

  59. Anonymous says:

    I sense A hint of Trollestia Here! (:O… XD

  60. Retl says:

    "borderline clopfics"You've got my attention. "SPIKE x BIG MAC"Okay, now I'm actually going to read it in bits and pieces.

  61. Anonymous says:

    On one hoof: I love everything B.S.S. writes! This is no exceptions. XDOn the other? Now any drop of motivation I had to finish my semi-comedic FS ship is gone. =|I feel like a kid who entered a talent show playing guitar and he has to follow Hendrix

  62. Anonymous says:

    This story is not good.

  63. Acrianna says:

    The trollestia ending was a bit much, I don't think I enjoy her having that much power over everything. Would have preferred it if she simply talked to the escaped bird and saying how it turned out even better than she expected or something. The Spike x Big Mac talk would have to stay though!Other than that, great story as always. Still weird that there are no rainbow dash x spitfire stories, although I can understand it would just be to… well, obvious.

  64. Retl says:

    Skimmed it. Looking forward to the Spike/McIntosh fix to be, actually. ❤ Spike.

  65. Anonymous says:

    the words "borderline clop-fic"it forever grabbed my attention.

  66. This was pretty good; wasn't expecting it to go in that direction, though. XD Still, I liked it, especially the ending.

  67. Jair says:

    Flutterrape made her fall out of favor and applejack to take the place as my #1 fav. However referencing this fic is hilarious to get reactions.

  68. Anonymous says:

    La la la la la oh happy shipfic la la BAM FUCKING FLUTTERRAPE OUT OF FUCKING NOWHERE

  69. Anonymous says:

    Damn Fluttershy, you scary.I pretty much had the same reaction Twilight had. Except all the time.

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