Story: The Seventh Element (Updated Part 2+3!)

[Normal] I never know what to use for these OC pony stories when it comes to images, so have a castle. 

Author: Marius Malek

Description: It’s been three centuries since the “event” that changed the face of Equestria forever. Thanks to the sacrifice of six brave ponies, the land has known a peace like no other. However, something lurks beneath the shadows, waiting to disrupt the lives of every pony. It is here that we meet our new hero, Flash, a young pegasus pony, who embarks to discover what happened three hundred years ago on that fateful day. Unknowingly, he will set in motion a series of events that will change the world – again.

Google Docs
The Seventh Element: Overture
The Seventh Element: Celestia’s Orders (New!)
The Seventh Element: Startling Revelations (New!)

Deviant Art
The Seventh Element: Overture
The Seventh Element: Celestia’s Orders (New!)
The Seventh Element: Startling Revelations (New!)

Additional Tags: 1st Person, Action, Adventure, Mystery, Epic

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25 Responses to Story: The Seventh Element (Updated Part 2+3!)

  1. That doesn't look like a castle to me.

  2. krypqe says:

    @Narwhals' BendI just knew that'd be the first comment…

  3. What's the 7th element?

  4. Anonymous says:

    Really liked this. I'd love to read more from this author! Really liked the 1sy person too. We don't get many 1st person stories.@Narwhals' Bendlol'd so hard!

  5. @AnonymousI'm glad so many people thought that was funny.

  6. TaleSpinner says:

    I loved this! Totally great, can't wait for the next installment!

  7. Shellsh0cker says:

    Thank Celestia for people like you, Mr. Malek. You make my job so easy.

  8. Anonymous says:

    Liked it pretty much so far!Hope that you will continue to write soon

  9. Anonymous says:

    i cant wait for you to finish this it seems full of potential…

  10. Marius Malek says:

    @AnonymousI hope I don't disappoint!

  11. Anonymous says:

    Careful with the OC there, lest you overdo it…

  12. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousYes indeed, mary sue senses tingling, still, let's see where he goes with it.

  13. Anonymous says:

    I love this, can't wait for more! 😀

  14. Anonymous says:

    need MOAR! This is going from a very good story to a great one – keep it up!! 🙂

  15. Anonymous says:

    7th element: also magic, surprisingly.

  16. Anonymous says:

    Liking it more than any other adventure fic thus far. Keep up the good work.

  17. Anonymous says:

    love this story thanks for making it.

  18. Anonymous says:

    good story so farkeep on going!

  19. La Barata says:

    So far, win. Let's see if it makes it to Epic Win. Hell, I'm even betting it could make its way up to Flawless Victory.

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