Story: Dragon Your Hooves (Update Part 2!)

[Normal] And then Spike was a Pony.

Author: Twinkletail

Description: While helping Twilight rearrange her lab, Spike comes across a magical powder that changes him into a pony! While Twilight tries to find an antidote, pony Spike has some adventures of his own.

Dragon Your Hooves 
Dragon Your Hooves Part 2 (New!)

Additional Tags: Ponified Spike!

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58 Responses to Story: Dragon Your Hooves (Update Part 2!)

  1. Baree says:

    Oeh. This could be interesting. First chapter is short, but well written. Looking forward to the next.

  2. ZE Pony says:

    *inhale* yay…This is interesting and i am going to read it C:

  3. fireant says:

    Not buying this one yet, simply too short.Also, the INTRO SONG? Seriously? For real?

  4. Anonymous says:

    Maybe he has a chance with Rarity now? ๐Ÿ˜›

  5. pegaSpike says:

    Oh hey I have a backstory now?

  6. pegaSpike says:

    @AnonymousHmm. I do have to wonder. As it goes with -me-, it's pegasus Spike dating Apple Bloom.

  7. PonyStark says:

    Dunno about the theme song in there. Seems a bit unnecessary. skimmed very quickly while in class and looks like a good read though. ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. Anonymous says:

    The theme song is okay if your trying to make it exactly like an episode. I'm not sure if hes going for that yet.

  9. Fire.Esper says:

    Didn't read yet, but have some points just for the idea.

  10. Anonymous says:

    I've been waiting for this.I hope the next chapter is longer, tho…

  11. Anonymous says:

    I lost it at the intro song, it's almost self-mocking

  12. Anonymous says:


  13. Anonymous says:

    I like what's there so far, but just one short opening chapter isn't enough. In summary:NEED MOAR.

  14. Anonymous says:

    great story, I love the idea you had.

  15. Anonymous says:

    ffffuuu- this story is too short, need MOAR

  16. Anonymous says:

    I really enjoyed it, but as stated by other bronies, MOAR!

  17. Tristam says:

    I can almost see this as an episode.

  18. Anonymous says:

    Can't wait for the next one. His cutie mark could be a little green flame or something though.

  19. Anonymous says:

    The pony-Spike's cutie mark could either be a quill and paper or a microphone (he seems to love announcing, as seen in "Fall Weather Friends" and "Suited for Success")

  20. Anonymous says:

    VERY cute! And in-character too! I hope to see more soon!

  21. I see this as a potential plot episode.

  22. Twinkletail says:

    hey, author here. just figured i'd reference the two most common comments.1) the theme: i've seen a couple of other fics do this (and did it myself before, in a party cat-astrophe). i like doing it to denote the fact that i'm trying to go for a somewhat-realistic episode.2) the length: hopefully gonna have the second part out tomorrow, but i just thought that was a good cutoff point.glad y'all are enjoying it ^_^

  23. Anonymous says:

    The small horse joke made me laughprobably more than I should have… Keep writing this!

  24. Binky says:

    I need more. Also, dammit Twilight. You. Are. A. Nerd. We. Do. Puns. C'mon.

  25. Hey, I'm liking this so far. I must agree, it's a bit short right now; I can't wait for the next part! Also, the theme song seems fine to me; it adds a certain touch.

  26. Anonymous says:

    you must continue or you will face the wrath of 4000 hooves.. in other words 1000 ponies stampede. PS: Twi, leave the puns to Rainbow you nerd.

  27. Anonymous says:

    Must become a real ep Would be best thing ever

  28. Anonymous says:

    I'm surprised it took this long for Spike/Sweetie Belle to appear. Seeing that Spike has a crush on her older sister, you'd think that'd be more obvious.

  29. Anonymous says:

    Gentlemen, we are on high alert! This fic has reached… MAXIMUM D'AWWWWWW.

  30. Anonymous says:

    This was really cute! Great job with this.

  31. Andrew says:

    This was really good I can't help but hope we get a sequel because that would be absolutely rad!

  32. Anonymous says:

    Great so far. The second part was much better on length than the first. I am hoping it is not ending here though. This concept has way too much potential to stop now.

  33. Jeqstream says:

    Aaand it got adorable… just like I knew it would.

  34. Anonymous says:

    Is it over? If so, great place to end it. I really enjoyed it."Best game EVER, Midnight!" I laughed for real, that's hard to do.

  35. Anonymous says:

    Needs a shipping tag

  36. Anonymous says:

    I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It does kind of seem like Sweetie Belle is the odd one out in the CMC, and it was very astute of you to notice that!

  37. Bobcat says:

    I'll never look at Sweetie Belle quite the same. This was cute and funny. Is it complete now? I wouldn't mind seeing more from you, even if it isn't this.

  38. Anonymous says:

    this story was too short, I was hoping SparkStar gets more airtime than this.

  39. Anonymous says:

    he is no longer … a pony whyyyyyy you could make so much longer story bot no it neet to be short omg. btw. great story only a little bit short hoping for moor parts ๐Ÿ˜€

  40. A. AwesomeB. Let's hope this gets to be an episode someday

  41. Twinkle says:

    @Anonymouscoughcough stillgotanotherpartplanned coughcough…i should really get this cough checked out…

  42. Twinkletail says:

    @Twinklewow, my cough is so bad it's making me forget to write half of my name

  43. Anonymous says:

    I like this story. It's…nice.

  44. Brian says:

    Great story so far. And the Spike/Sweetie Belle thing is surprisingly sweet. Usually ya see Spike get paired with Applebloom, but this makes a lot more sense.

  45. Pseudo Faux says:

    I approve of Sparkstar and the off shoot one offs this could take off into.

  46. Shellsh0cker says:

    Oh, good, so it's not over. I was going to say it seemed too short for an episode–clearly what you were going for, given the presence of the theme song–but if you've got some more coming up, great!"Don't you just love that game we play where we pretend to forget each other's names?" was hilarious, as was Spike's follow-up. Twilight teasing Spike at the end of part 2 was awesome, and I loved that Spike was unaware Rarity and Sweetie Belle were sisters.And yes, I d'aaaaawwwwwwwwwed so hard.

  47. Anonymous says:

    I am really liking the story but its a little odd that you have already included the letter to Celestia before the story is over…

  48. I liked the premise, and I liked the execution. Great story. Man, I wish this were an episode…

  49. Twinkletail says:

    @Anonymousi had been thinking of omitting the letter part, but i couldn't think of a good moral to go with the way part three is going to go, and i wanted to make sure to get a letter in there.

  50. Anonymous says:

    Spike/Sweetie Belle?Now that's a new one!Any idea when the third chapter will be up?

  51. Ddude28 says:

    Usually I hate shipping, but when I read that Twilight understood and was playing along, I just lost it. I can't wait for the third chapter.

  52. This story could end right there, but I see another chapter where Spike wants to continue to be a Pegasus and two possible endings. I love the stories where Spike is turned into a pony, (or a failed attempt)and it's great to see how he reacts. I hope there are more chapters.

  53. This story could end right there, but I see another chapter where Spike wants to continue to be a Pegasus and two possible endings. I love the stories where Spike is turned into a pony, (or a failed attempt)and it's great to see how he reacts. I hope there are more chapters.

  54. This was such a cute story! Twilight was a little ooc, and the ending was abrupt, but maybe "Sparkstar" will come visit Ponyville again…?

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