Story: After April Foals Day

[Shipping] Some early April Foals day stuff! This time with Big Mac/Fluttershy. A Sequel to After Mare Day Gras

Author: Roy G.Biv

Description: Fluttershy never has been one for pranking, but THIS year she tries to get into the act!

After April Foals Day

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16 Responses to Story: After April Foals Day

  1. D.Shadows says:

    Sounds like my idea, except Fluttershy terrorizes the Cutie Mark Crusaders.Yes, the worst fan fiction writer in the world is still shadowing Equestria Daily.

  2. Anonymous says:

    It was all going well an interesting… and then the ending.

  3. Anonymous says:

    Pregnant twilight…. Wut?Some parts are just silly

  4. Roy G. Biv says:

    @AnonymousAfter Mare-Day Gras ended with pregnant Twilight. This is a sequel. First was drunk pony flashback. This is sad pony flashback.

  5. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousWhat's wrong with a FlutterMac ending? Personally, I think that Ponyville's shrinking violet and Sweet Apple Acres' titan make a nice couple.

  6. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousI don't have anything against it. It's even tagged shipping up there in the summary… and still, it feels out of place with the rest of the story. There's no leading to it, no hinting, it's just… there. It comes out awkwardly of the blue, and makes it feel like a last-minute addition.

  7. Anonymous says:

    Sorry if this is a stupid question, but who's Madame R?

  8. Roy G. Biv says:

    @AnonymousReference to 'Love of a Mule' a while back.

  9. Roy G. Biv says:

    @AnonymousI'm not the only author who gives that shoutouts. A few other have nodded to 'Madame R'.

  10. Anonymous says:

    that was adorable. You certainly captured Fluttershy's personality in the prank attempts. reading again

  11. Anonymous says:

    Ending was a little weak. What? 5 Star – Fluttershy pranking failures.5 Star – Fluttershy spiraling depression.3 Star – Resolution.This isn't even about shipping, the end is just too cut and dry. It's like it was finished up in the middle, and a different part happens where everybody hugs and the three's company theme kicks in.

  12. zorinlynx says:

    Haven't read the story yet, but wow, that artwork is adorable! Kudos to the artist!

  13. Marrock says:

    Ok, is it odd that I find the idea of a pregnant Twilight to be mind-numbingly adorable?

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