Story: Apples and Acres (Update Chapter 6!)

[Grimdark] Applejack time!  Another one not for the faint of heart!
Author: Anon Writepony

Description: Applejack’s descent into depression and madness, as well as the effects it has on her family. 

Apples and Acres Chp. 1-3
Apples And Acres Chp. 4-6 (New!)

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44 Responses to Story: Apples and Acres (Update Chapter 6!)

  1. Anonymous says:

    I wanna read it, but it says I need permission…

  2. @AnonymousAuthor of the story here. Try this link. I think OP must've copied the link from the address bar instead of the "share" link.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LOK1VCif5wF2IYJU708_yfQPy5J44m_2dDSmIQAthrw/edit?hl=en&authkey=CPvErpsG

  3. Sethisto says:

    @AnonymousThere are a few people in there reading it now, I am not sure. Maybe try creating a google account.

  4. Sethisto says:

    @AnonymousActually I just logged out to see if I could still access it without being logged into google, and still was able to enter. Were you the same person having this trouble with the other story earlier?

  5. Sethisto says:

    @SethistoI found a bunch of your posts in the spam folder for some reason, I fixed them.

  6. Anonymous says:

    i cant get to it either

  7. Edited viewing settings. Hopefully everything is sorted out now. Sorry about that.

  8. Anonymous says:

    …I just want to ask, will there be a happy ending here? I don't like to read Grimdark, because it tends to ruin the show for me sometimes… This story is really good, but I just want to know if it all ends in tragedy. Hope you can tell me…

  9. @AnonymousI wish I could tell you, but doing so would ruin the suspense and the story overall. I can tell you that there are various high points throughout the story while accompanied by those low ones that all grimdark stories have. Whether or not you want to hop along for the whole ride is up to you.Glad you enjoy it so far!

  10. Anonymous says:

    @Anon WriteponyWell, I think I will stick with it. I mean if worst comes to worst I dont like the ending, and that's all. Plus a definitive end will actually help me a bit as my mind tends to wonder quite a bit, especially on these sort of things. I try to complete unfinished stories in my head, and don't always like the results and get hung up on them, but a real end helps me get over it.Also, I do quite like the story. Some of the things Applejack says in the newest part seem like the lyrics to a song almost… Hm. While im here, would you mind if I try to do that? Make some song lyrics to it? It would be a great song, about her growing insanity…Oh my, I have rambled, haven't I? Sorry about that!

  11. MasterMask says:

    @AnonymousSo I guess no one wants to hear the song? I already wrote a bit…Oh well. I'll just wait until the story ends, then. I can keep it to myself. Can't wait for the next part, man.Btw, I have a name now!

  12. Anonymous says:

    Some parts seem like how I imagine what it would be like to actually start losing you mind. I sort'a picture the whole "song lyrics" part as being part of the delusion, although I may be wrong about it. Good stuff. I await the next chapter.

  13. Anonymous says:

    I love this! Can't wait for an update. ❤

  14. Cottonmouth says:

    Been waiting for this update! Good to see this fic is still being worked on.

  15. @CottonmouthGlad you like it! Sorry it took so long to get the update out; I'll definitely work harder to make new chapters release as soon as I possibly can.

  16. Anonymous says:

    Older Applebloom x Older Spike?…….THIS IS WHAT I HAVE WANTED ALL OF MY LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIFE. DEAR GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD.YES YES YES. OH MY GOD ITS SO GOOD.Can't wait for next chapter. Thank you for writing.

  17. Anonymous says:

    I've been waiting for this! Thanks for continuing, keep it coming!

  18. Anonymous says:

    The waiting will soon be over…

  19. Naxts says:

    Wow. I'm in awe. This is a really good story! I just can't wait to see the next part, this story is just so suspenceful. Its scary almost.

  20. Anonymous says:

    I'm reading too much grimdark D:This is very good. I love the whole *spoiler for people who haven't read any of it and are lame enough to check the comments first* part!

  21. Gig says:

    I'm really liking this story. To be honest, I prefer the psychological aspects of a grimdark fanfic rather than gore and violence. This is doing a perfect job of being dark and suspenseful without incorporating brutality. I'm looking forward to the rest of this.

  22. Anonymous says:

    I like this story but with so many characters speaking with a harsh Southern dialect, it is kind of hard to read.

  23. wow… Next to Normal and MLP. Two great tastes and whatnot!Great story so far.

  24. Cottonmouth says:

    I don't trust Doctors, and I don't think I should trust this one either.We'll see. Good job and I'm looking forward to chapter 7.

  25. Hikuro14 says:

    Looks to be a promising story. I normally don't read grimdark stories, but this one has potential.

  26. Epona says:

    crosses fingers for appledash ship next chapters**

  27. Anonymous says:

    Did you really have to call the doctor "Madden"? Now I can't get that freakin' video out of my head whenever I read this story.

  28. Naxts says:

    I've been waiting for a really long time for this update. Though unfortunately. I don't really think that the new chapter really… Delivered.But still. I really like this story and I'm really interested in seeing what happens next.

  29. smexypony says:

    this is pretty interesting.when do you plan on finishing this, anon writepony? please say you plan on doing so

  30. Nope says:

    Darn it all, chapter 4-6 I can't access because they "violate our ToS". Any chance there's an alternate link? I hate leaving a story unread D:

  31. Anonymous says:

    Yeah, CAN'T GET TO CHAPTERS 4-6. THEY VIOLATE THE TOS OR SOME BULLSHIT.But yes, nopony can acess the final three chapters, still.I DEMAND this to be fixed… if… that's okay. It's a good read.

  32. I cant view chapters 4 to 6. Google Docs says its in violation of the TOS?

  33. Adam says:

    epicly brilliant story so far, had me close to tears D:. but same problem as everyone else with chapters 4-6 =/.

  34. Ddude28 says:

    I can read them just fine.

  35. Anonymous says:

    "We're sorry. You can't access this document because it is in violation of our Terms of Service."…FFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-

  36. Nope says:

    Ah good, I can read 4-6 now. Gonna have to read 1-3 again to refresh my memory, but if said memory serves, that ain't a bad thing. ONWARD TO READING!

  37. Hey everypony!Thanks so much for liking the story, and I apologize for having not updated it in such a long time. I still don't know when I'll be able to update it next, seeing as how the upcoming chapter will be incredibly lengthy.The main reason for this hiatus is because of the work I'm pouring into My Little Musical; I prefer focusing on one thing at a time, and unfortunately, MLM has been demanding more of my attention.Sorry and thanks again!

  38. Hey everypony!Thanks so much for liking the story, and I apologize for having not updated it in such a long time. I still don't know when I'll be able to update it next, seeing as how the upcoming chapter will be incredibly lengthy.The main reason for this hiatus is because of the work I'm pouring into My Little Musical; I prefer focusing on one thing at a time, and unfortunately, MLM has been demanding more of my attention.Sorry and thanks again!

  39. Roxor says:

    Should I feel bad for enjoying the Sanity Slippage scenes?

  40. Roxor says:

    Should I feel bad for enjoying the Sanity Slippage scenes?

  41. Anonymous says:

    Man, I am LOVING the interaction between Spike and Applebloom.

  42. Anonymous says:

    Man, I am LOVING the interaction between Spike and Applebloom.

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