Story: Tech Support

[Normal] Ponies and technology!?  Madness!

Author: Cereal Velocity

Description: The ponies find several mysterious objects in Twilight’s library. Whatever could they be?

Tech Support

Additional Tags: iphone, laptop, soda, trollestia, cluelessness

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21 Responses to Story: Tech Support

  1. crazyredemu says:

    "This isn't that kind of fanfiction" priceless!

  2. Anonymous says:

    Noooo! Y u change banner?!

  3. hawkysu says:

    Cereal Velocity:You are amazing. I love you 😀

  4. Grrxmaster says:

    Why exactly did Princess Celestia have these things? Souvenirs from a trip with Dr. Whooves?

  5. Retl says:

    The swearing threw me off a little, but aside from that I think this is probably the most enjoyable fanfic I've read so far. ❤ This in combination with the image is a great pair.

  6. Midnight says:

    I liked this! short and simple with good imagery…and now I want to know more! WHY was Celestia in the library with the strange boxes that glowed and the tin of happy drink?

  7. Anonymous says:

    I didn't think it was that great tbh. It was short and sweet, but the idea felt kinda boring.

  8. Anonymous says:

    you could have done better with this concept imo

  9. Anonymous says:

    'It isn't that kind of fan fiction'OH IT IS, IT TOTALLY IS

  10. hikuro says:

    I giggled. 10/10

  11. Anonymous says:

    It says there are six ponies, but what was Rarity doing during all this?

  12. Anonymous says:

    Some ponies are too critical with fanfics. I enjoyed this.

  13. @AnonymousOh, Rarity was being ponynapped. She secretly enjoys that sort of thing.

  14. 9Nine9 says:

    Oh god that was the best fourth wall break I've read in a while.Was laughing loudly the whole time, five stars.

  15. Pacce says:

    It gave me a smile and a giggle.

  16. Zarkanorf says:

    "What's a 'Cereal Velocity'?"A GIGGLING PILE OF FRIENDSHIP. BUT ENOUGH OF THAT, HAVE AT YOU.nice fic, would read again!

  17. Mads says:

    A fun little piece that feels too short to properly use the potential of its idea. The author also gets a negative mark for self-referencing (mustn't allow it to be overused, hmm?) however this is balanced out by using a godly troll as the story's climactic deus ex fenestra. I do have to complain about using both indentation and blank rows to separate paragraphs, however. Use one or the other, please! Anyway, this gets a solid thumb and I will share this with a fellow pony lover at some point.

  18. ultra8 says:

    A little too short but a very fun read.

  19. rmsaun98722 says:

    @Cereal VelocityI actually completely forgot about Rarity when I drew the pic, so I gave her a debacle all of her own.I still can't believe that you wanted to use my picture for the Draw/Writeoff. Compared to yours, my short stories are feeble twigs. Bravo, friend!

  20. @rmsaun98722Oh, you're the one who drew this? I would have given you credit in the story, but I had no idea. I've been wanting to write a story based on this image for a while and I'm glad I got a chance to. It's adorable. Thank you for drawing it, and I'm glad you liked the story!

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