Story: I Need a Freaking Drink

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Description: An incident in Ponyville ends up getting Twilight and her friends arrested, but one pony is in far more trouble than the others.

I Need a Freaking Drink

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10 Responses to Story: I Need a Freaking Drink

  1. Pacce says:

    I always lose interest a little when ponies start swearing…

  2. Adrian Brony says:

    @Pacceforgive my orwellian editorness but I did decide to change that on second thought… Didn't really pay that part much mind until someone mentioned it.

  3. Adrian Brony says:

    alternate DA link for those that hate google docs pages:

  4. Anonymous says:

    Fun but too short. Could've been a fun "Rashomon" style story where each pony recounts the event in their own POV. Pinkie Pie's story would have been hilarious.Hmmm, I wonder if I can write it…

  5. Adrian Brony says:

    @AnonymousYeah I wanted to do it rashomon style but I only had 24 hours to write this thing. and I am neither fast nor clever enough to write a story like that in such a short time.

  6. Tanner says:

    Nice story! Ditzy the lawyer made me laugh quite a bit

  7. Anonymous says:

    This was awesome! Too bad Ditzy is no Phoenix Wright.

  8. Mads says:

    Fun indeed but this leaves me craving more. Toothpaste, after all. One thumb, might re-read.

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