Story: Scooting Along

Posted on February 15, 2011 by sethisto

[Normal] Something Madmax requested and Squeek did, so you know it going to be good right?!

Description: Scootaloo show’s up at Rainbow Dash’s door in the middle of a storm. She claims eveything’s fine, but is it really?

Scooting Along

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19 Responses to Story: Scooting Along

  1. graham says:
    February 15, 2011 at 2:41 pm

    This is a great one and could easily win the ship-off. I D'awwww'd hardcore.

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  2. madmax says:
    February 15, 2011 at 3:39 pm

    OH MY GODDESS!!!! I can't believe squeak finished this already šŸ™‚ now I have to bake him 41 cakes :Dthanks squeak!

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  3. Malaka says:
    February 15, 2011 at 3:47 pm

    @madmaxThat's as many as 4 10s and then 1.And that's wonderful.

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  5. uSea says:
    February 15, 2011 at 6:28 pm

    That was adorable, in character and well thought out.Loved it.

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  6. Cereal Velocity says:
    February 15, 2011 at 8:30 pm

    A few mistakes here and there, but overall very enjoyable! Extremely cute.

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  7. Pacce says:
    February 16, 2011 at 6:48 am

    I really really liked that…I got a little heart warmified when Rainbow was looking for Scoot in the woods.

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  8. Pecan says:
    February 16, 2011 at 8:09 am

    Two words:Kawaii. Desu.*Hugs Scootaloo*

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  9. Regal says:
    February 16, 2011 at 6:08 pm

    Great story. I think you did very well writing for Rainbow Dash.

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  10. Anonymous says:
    February 16, 2011 at 7:19 pm

    yeah i really liked this story and its a nice break from all the lesbian shipping ive read in the last few days

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  11. SlyWit says:
    February 18, 2011 at 5:10 am

    Hmm . . . there are sections of the prose that make me want to take it in as a little peer review and give you feedback on. Just small things, a mistake or two that newer writers are bound to make.But the reason I feel that way is because I enjoyed the story. It's interesting to me to see your talent creep up in everything you've written. You've got this natural way of leading everything to a heartfelt and satisfying climax.

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  12. Midnight says:
    March 6, 2011 at 12:59 pm

    There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes, and the structure could do with some work, but it's an adorable story, please write more šŸ™‚

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  13. Blaze says:
    April 10, 2011 at 2:32 am

    Good story. It made me feel quite happy! I believe that you captured RD's character pretty well and the ending was heart-warming. šŸ™‚

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  14. ThisHomeBoy24 says:
    April 17, 2011 at 7:24 am

    Very nicely done, i wish they would make this into an episode.

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  15. La Barata says:
    May 22, 2011 at 5:54 am

    Brilliantly written. The only thing I find strange is pony parents trying to guide colts and fillies into a certain career. With the whole existance of cutie marks thing, it seems rather pointless, as they're each born with their own special destiny, which nobody can really have any effect on, as good as their intentions might be. Regardless, spectacularly done. Five stars for you.

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  16. Wierdplatformer says:
    June 14, 2011 at 10:28 am

    Mentor Dash wins! Scootamazing!

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  17. Wierdplatformer says:
    June 14, 2011 at 10:28 am

    Mentor Dash wins! Scootamazing!

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  18. Roxor says:
    June 26, 2011 at 7:02 am

    This was a nice take on the little pegasus.Maybe I should have a shot at writing something about her?

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  19. Roxor says:
    June 26, 2011 at 7:02 am

    This was a nice take on the little pegasus.Maybe I should have a shot at writing something about her?

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