Story: Cupcakes

[GRIMDARK AS FUCK] Yes, you read that title correctly.  I have been putting it off for almost a month, but I think it’s finally time (and it’s finally in google docs version).  For those that don’t follow the threads on 4chan, this story is pretty much legendary for being the most brutal and disturbing pony story ever written.  It will give you nightmares, and will ruin Pinkie Pie forever.  Enjoy :)

Description: GRIMDARK AS FUCK.  POSTED ONLY BECAUSE I’M TIRED OF PEOPLE ASKING ME TO.  ——–READ AT YOUR OWN RISK———

Cupcakes
Cupcakes v2: Grammar/spelling fixes abound

Cupcakes Alternate Ending by Pacce
Cupcakes Alternate Ending by Pimps Mcgee 
Cupcakes Alternate Ending by Darkjester 
Cupcakes Alternate Ending by Minalkra 
Cupcakes Alternate Ending by Cartoonhottie2009
Cupcakes Alternate Ending by Dr. WTF 
Cupcakes Alternate Ending by Lucas
Cupcakes Alternate Ending by milesprower06
Cupcakes alternate ending by SirenScythe

Cupcakes Sequel by James Corck
Cupcakes Sequel by Shackbunny
Cupcakes Sequel by Lord Xaos
Cupcakes Sequel OverlordLC/PoetofFate

Cupcakes Live Reading
Cupcakes Live Reading Sequel
Cupcakes the Musical 
Cupcakes Remix Song 
Cupcakes Soundscape 
Cupcakes Fan Song
Cupcakes Pinkie Todd Song

Cupcakes baking with pinkie pie wtf you people are insane 

Cupcakes Side Story: Muffins 


[Grimdark]

Author: Vladuke

Description: It’s been a week since the “Cupcakes” incedent, and Twilight is on the look out for Rarity, when she discovers that Pinkie Pie, has been preforming horrible crimes against ponies. Now she and the Royal Guard are in a race against time to save Rarity.

Cupcakes 2 Fan Story

Additional Tags: complete, Sequel, Pinkie Pie, detective, buffalo bill, long.


Author: hahatimeforponies
Description: Twilight presents Rainbow Dash with a test of speed, and she jumps at the call, but afterwards, she can’t help but notice that something’s not right. She soon finds herself as the only constant as she sets out to unravel the mystery of what happened to her and make it home alive.

Rainbow Leap

Additional Tags: Cupcakes kinda sequel weird plot


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719 Responses to Story: Cupcakes

  1. Anonymous says:

    Honestly. What's the fucking point of this vileness?

  2. Sethisto says:

    @AnonymousI don't even know. At least we won't have people requesting the 5 image dump every single pony general.

  3. Anonymous says:

    Have you thought about having a "gore" or "violence" tag/label on fic?I mean, not all Grimdark stories are violent (and vise versa)

  4. hikuro says:

    OH GODNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONOT CUPCAKESANYTHING BUT THAT!!!I read that story a few weeks ago and almost cried.

  5. Anonymous says:

    this was the first pony fanfic i ever read.sad times were had by all involved

  6. Anonymous says:

    Should I be disturbed by the fact that I'm not disturbed by this fic?

  7. IT'S ABOUT TIME.I heard Sgt. Sprinkles was going to edit a few things. I wonder if that's true or not.

  8. Sethisto says:

    @AnonymousI have, but I've always favorited simplicity (If I had coding knowledge this site would look like google) I'm trying not to dump too many tags out there, for the sake of the poor category box on the side.

  9. Anonymous says:

    I haven't read the fic yet, but I just have to say the [GRIMDARK AS FUCK] warning made me lol.

  10. I have not read this and do not intend to.

  11. Hito chan says:

    I hate you, I'm not usually much of a fanfic reader, especially involving things outside the usual stories, but I don't know if i'm going to going to be capable on not clicking on this. it's almost like having a big red button that says do not press… MUST RESIST!!! >_<

  12. Samuel says:

    Words cannot sum up this shit.

  13. Anonymous says:

    Am I the only one that finds something really, really uncomfortable about having this entry so closely above the charity for children in need?

  14. Anonymous says:

    I cannot understand why everyone has an orgasm over this shit.Nopony's in character, the idea is simply absurd, and it just isn't a good story.

  15. Anonymous says:

    Hah, ever since the underoos poll, comfort has gone out of the window and into a dark pit of…. whatever ponies are supposed to sink into

  16. Anonymous says:

    I was waiting for this to pop-up somewhere.Ever since I saw the good/bad pictures.

  17. Anonymous says:

    Sweet, I've been waiting for this to get posted on here! I thought the story was good for a laugh, especially the Apple Bloom part at the end.And yeah, it's kinda ironic that Sethisto has been talking about not posting pics of ponies kissing and making the site slightly more family friendly, and then suddenly, Cupcakes!

  18. Anonymous says:

    I dont get what the big deal is its just a story the words cant really hurt anypony just chillax

  19. Anonymous says:

    I was on a thread on /b/ a week back when it was posted. I had enough sense to wait for the dump to finish and to read it backwards. That saved me mental scars. But as for everyone who read it that night, well, pretty much the whole thread was disturbed.That's how messed up it is, it drove /b/tards to dry heaving! I kid you not! It was so bad a concerned anon wrote an 'easymode' epilogue (happy ending) to staple on the end within the hour to calm everyone down. Other epilogues were spawned later, that aimed to calm people down too.I've read it since, well, skim-read it, since grimdark isn't something I read, and it loses it's effect after the first read. But still, I cannot deny how brutal it is, as I witnessed an entire thread break down into anons going crazy…

  20. Anonymous says:

    wow it just got posted on /b/ a week ago?lol slow newfags /co/s been making ending/art and other fics have referenced it for ages now

  21. question: does anyone have "part 6/5"? It's an alternate ending someone made, and trust me… it sort of makes the story worth it. In a good way, not a bad. I don't want to give away too much (i don't have it or i would post it), but trust me on this.

  22. Anonymous says:

    Was able to piece together from various sources enough about this story to know that I WILL NEVER READ IT.

  23. Pacce says:

    It becomes funny if you imagine it all as a b movie with one guy in a couple of different pony costumes trying to disguise that he's the only actor through bad editing….At least I think that to help me sleep.

  24. Pacce says:

    @Rainbow BriskWhich one?There are at least three.

  25. Anonymous says:

    @Rainbow Briskthere's so many alternate parts its mind bogglingthere's one ware it was all a dream pinkie had there's one ware it was all a dream rainbow had there's one ware its a recurring dream that drives dash insane and there's one ware it was all a crazy fantasy angel had and that's just what i remember off the top of my head i know there's more and ive hear even /b/ came out with things trying to ease the pain

  26. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousExactly. It's like our own little Higurashi no Naku Koro ni, but with ponies.

  27. Anonymous says:

    That's pretty sick. Dunno if this kind of thing should really be posted here.

  28. Fairy Slayer says:

    Heh, his blows the plan to post my own grimdark pony story today. Cupcakes will definitely keep everyone's bloodlust and gore hunger sated for a while yet — that's guaranteed!(I already waited for three weeks for proofreading, so letting MAMHDE wait another week or two will be fine.)

  29. Pacce says:

    Also,*grabs soapbox*Why is this okay and fapfics aren't?

  30. Anonymous says:

    @PacceWell, IMO this isn't really okay. I'm not sure what you mean by fapfics, unless it's the same as shipping fics?At least shipping fics are cute; this is just sick and disturbing. Why would anyone want to write the characters this way?

  31. Daffodil says:

    @PacceBecause we live in a sexually repressed society where it's more acceptable to read about the horrifying torture and dismemberment of children's cartoon characters than it is to think about sex.Also, Pony vag is kind of nasty.

  32. Pacce says:

    @AnonymousI mean okay to have on the site.And by fapfics, I mean more sexually explicit stories.For good examples of what I mean see BrotherPrickle on DA.

  33. Zarkanorf says:

    This fan-fiction is grimdark as fuck, as the description said, but my experience was a good one with that chatroom inside the google docs page.I guess the impact is softened when you talk about ghost shits, meat cupcakes, and being hungry while reading terrorslash. Who knew? o:

  34. Anonymous says:

    The only reason this fanfic was written is to incite the drama and cause reaction from the fans. Hey… if you want something of yours to get a lot of attention and make it stand out from the rest, this is one way to do it. The author certainly got his wish in that regard.I was quite freaked out reading this the first time, but now I just shrug it off with a simple "meh". It's just fanfiction, after all.

  35. Phoe says:

    …Jeez, people on the internet have weak stomachs. Or maybe I have a crappy imagination? That's a depressing thought. I dunno, I'm kind of not into this sort of thing as a general rule because it's so difficult to actually GET anything out of it. The dark, horrible stuff, especially the really dark and horrible stuff gets so difficult to even fathom that I think my brain just sort of coasts through the experience. And I don't think that's a completely uncommon reaction, but given how many people seem close to vomiting at this stuff I guess I'm wrong? I don't want to start telling people what they should or shouldn't write, just… you know, be aware the the farther "out there" you travel, the harder it is to get the reader to come with you. You've got to have more than just a bloody vivisection.

  36. Anonymous says:

    Grimdark as fuckAlso, dat ending

  37. Anonymous says:

    I'll say it again. I read a snippet from this story once and found it disturbing. Then I read the whole thing and found it almost funny. Initially I'd been letting my mind fill in the blanks that I hadn't read whereas the reality of the story was really pretty benign. It's kind of like a B grade movie to me, with all of the charm such movies have. It is over the top, out of character and really just silly.Later folks. :)

  38. Anonymous says:

    This is a good read for anyone sick of annoying Rainbow Dash fans.

  39. Sethisto says:

    I'd have to make the blog 18+ only if I posted fapfics.Ponies cutting each-other up and wearing their skin? Society says that's just R rated!

  40. pollardy says:

    o_- this story was well writ but dam, it was like a poet misuing a broadsword. though i don't dought its existance this stuff is in every franchise, hek im suprised all were getting out of it is a couple of these considering everything4/5, its not me to judge but hey if your into this stuff it wouldn't be that bad

  41. Pacce says:

    @SethistoI understand. My comment was aimed more at society than this site.And I also get why you put it on here, even if I do think it's a bit against "All pony that's fit to print."Also, hey you linked my alt. That was swell of you!

  42. Anonymous says:

    @SethistoYes, but we all know society is fucked… or why else would so many people have voted to go to Equestria in one of those prior polls, even were there no way back to earth. Seriously, though, society is kinda fucked in this regard; kinda *really* fucked. :PIMO, ones like this should have an 18+ and "GORE" in the header in the future. There's really no reason for anyone to be reading stuff like this unless they absolutely want to.

  43. Sethisto says:

    @Anonymous"Grimdark as fuck" in caps and red letters wasn't enough? ;p

  44. Pacce says:

    @AnonymousI think two big red warning labels saying "GRIMDARK AS FUCK" and the the description saying it's the most disturbing thing written and that it will ruin a character for you isn't enough warning, then that's their own fault.

  45. Phoe says:

    @SethistoYou can put up as many warning signs as you like, but somebody is still going to yell at you when they ignore them and fall down the well. =P

  46. Anonymous says:

    I don't really see anyone blaming or yelling at Sethisto. I just recommended the "GORE" header so as to be more specific than just "Grimdark". Grimdark can mean varying degrees to different people, but everypony knows what GORE means.

  47. Anonymous says:

    Anyway, thank fuck for that alternate ending.And then they made out, amirite? :P

  48. Anonymous says:

    @Sethisto I demand all of my grimdark warmings in neon yellow and in comic-sans, please; a-herp-a-derp-derp.

  49. Anonymous says:

    I know a person who says 'Cupcakes are Evil!' but I didn't think they meant it literally. Wow… just wow… anyone see any good horror movies lately?

  50. Anonymous says:

    I… this is… what… but Rainbow… and Pinkie… and cupcakes…The nightmares… the nightmares…

  51. Anonymous says:

    THANK YOU! It got so hard to find this!

  52. Sergeant Sprinkles: World's Greatest Party Clown says:

    Anybody with a good memory should remember the reasons I listed as to why i wrote this fic.How do ya like yer fancy pants shipping, now?Just to let you all know, I like Trespasser better.But you can't spell infamous with famous.I won't say I won't continue to do weird and shocking material, but I'm moving on to lighter fair for a bit.

  53. Anonymous says:

    I fapped to it and I regret nothing.This thing had been discussed to death anyway.

  54. Anonymous says:

    being on /b/ seeing all the gore one could possibly encounter in a lifetime.But why does this fic made me feel dying a little inside?

  55. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousProbably because it's a revolting use of such lovable characters, even if you're entirely desensitized to gore.The alternate ending is obviously where it's really at.

  56. Anonymous says:

    Should I feel bad about not feeling bad about it?

  57. Geradex says:

    The more pure and innocent something is the much more satisfying it is to corrupt…With that said, and takining into account my overactive imagination, the part that bothers me most is that I can almost see pinkie doing that… she is just too happy… I like grimdark things but why ponies damnit… WHY?!?!? Well I point you to my first statement… that's how people who currupt think… and I like to think I draw my lines in fictionland where it is ok to RP a crazed demon bent on mayhem…

  58. Putuk says:

    …spooky…But it does give insight to a ponys intestents.

  59. Anonymous says:

    Every time I hear cupcakes now, I lol.

  60. Don_ko says:

    The creepiest thing I've ever read. D:Hannibal Pinkie is more horrible than even The Brutal Sniper. I hoped for the last, that this is just somebody's nightmare. Thanks god for the extended ending. Now I feel no strength in my muscles. Must go rest. How I'm glad that new Pony episode is in hours to be aired.

  61. Anonymous says:

    i cried myself to sleep after reading this, had nightmares. then i read the alt ending, i feel better now

  62. Anonymous says:

    DEAR ADMINS OF THIS SITEThis story has personally made it difficult for me to enjoy MLP as I used to. I had not read the entire thing, but what I had still haunts me.DO NOT SUBJECT BRONIES TO THIS. It's not fair to have them read this. I wish i never heard of it, don't spread what should not exist.

  63. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousI agree.I read it unprepared. Now the mental images re-appears every time I close my eyes. I can't see Pinkie Pie as before.I just hope that this mental scar will heal with time.

  64. Anonymous says:

    i read up until the part i saw what was happening.i stopped, before my mind could get scarred any further.

  65. Anonymous says:

    Meh, people make such a big deal about it."Loyalty"Now that one really caught me off-guard… twice.

  66. Anonymous says:

    Fortunately, this hasn't impacted hwo I actually view the characters, as it apparently has some other readers. I just can't see Pinkie as a closet lunatic; she wears the craziness she does have proudly on her sleeve, lol.

  67. Anonymous says:

    I liked this story as it terrified me in the way that little kids cover their eyes when watching a scary movie but peek between their fingers anyway cause they still want to see whats going to happen next.

  68. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousMy bitch sense is tingling.Stop bitching and deal w/ it. Majority of people visiting EquestriaDaily are regular 4chan users who do not need an authority protecting them from themselves. If you find shit like this offensive, dont read it.I on the other hand find it arousing.

  69. Anonymous says:

    Fucked up stuff like this is a weird guilty pleasure for me when it comes to fanfics

  70. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousHigurashi seems pretty tame to this. I could take little Rika slamming a knife into her skull repeatedly, but I couldn't handle what happened in Cupcakes. I regret reading it.

  71. Taco Wiz says:

    This wasn't scary. Was it supposed to be? It feels more like a failed attempt at dark humor.I generally don't like fanfiction, so I guess I'm kind of a spoil sport.

  72. Sethisto says:

    Only one admin. And I put like 10 warnings. Not my fault you read it. Have some self control!

  73. Anonymous says:

    There seems to be a recent trend of really disgusting fanart showing up (despite this story having been around for a at least a month, according ot the description?).Gotta say, not a fan. This is the kind of stuff that gives 4chan a bad name; and if I worked on the show personally I'd totally disregard that community after this stuff.

  74. Don_ko says:

    @SethistoYeap. That's a funny thing about – That people have read the whole story. They didn't stop after the first bloody moment, they continued. Nobody forced them to read it till the end. But they Did it. And now they're complaining about their mental scares.Pinkie reminds me of one of Team Fortress 2 mems: "I am a pain-is cupcake. I will eat you! :D " See? Cupcakes are the way to grim-dark stuff!

  75. Anonymous says:

    @Don_koProbably because that kind of morbid curiousity is (for whatever reason) incorporated as part of our basic natures.No doubt most people probably wanted to stop reading after they'd reached that point, but few would be able to. They'd want to go on, if for no other reason to see how much sicker the author could possibly have made the story.

  76. Naxts says:

    Buh. I remember reading that on the day I finished watching all the episodes. It gave me some serious chills. Its one of those things you don't want to read but something dark in your mind tells you to keep reading. It disturbed me, but its not like its anything I'll loose sleep over.Thank god for the alternate ending though. That made things a bit better.

  77. MasterMask says:

    Oh, man…Cupcakes…I have to say, I've heard some serious stuff about this.Seems to be accepted as the most super Grimdark fic out there….I'm not sure if I can read it…

  78. Anonymous says:

    @MasterMaskDo yourself a favour and don't.

  79. Kie says:

    …Damn it why didn't I listen to the warning. WHY. WHHHHHYYY.

  80. Naxts says:

    MasterMask, Its pretty damn horrible. But if you're like me, if won't be the WORST thing you've ever seen.Saw and Hanninbal is much worse.Just read it and enjoy the gore, just be glad its not animated… Besides, the alternative ending makes things a lot better.

  81. Anonymous says:

    @NaxtsThe alternative ending is canon; screw the original author.

  82. Naxts says:

    @anonPretty much yeah.

  83. Anonymous says:

    @Sergeant Sprinkles: World's Greatest Party ClownI am tracking you down as we speak… I am close.. so close I can taste it.. When i find you… I will subject you to horrors that even your sick head can't come up with.You can't hide… prepare yourself. I am coming

  84. Anonymous says:

    the alternate ending made me ;u;

  85. Kie says:

    Thank you whoever wrote the alternate ending..Just..Just thank you. You are a saint as far as I am concerned.

  86. Anonymous says:

    I caved.I just went insane for a little bit, thought some little evil secret thoughts, and read…And read…Got to say, I liked it a little. Going insane is always fun, for me at least…Alt ending is good, but I have to say this fic is well written, even if it is a little bit on the grim side…Did you notice Grim is only a little bit away from Grin? Food for thought….He he he he he he heh HAH HAH HAH.

  87. Anonymous says:

    The alternate ending is more concrete proof of the existence of God than the entirety of the last 10000 years of history of human spirituality.

  88. Anonymous says:

    The thing I really don't like about this otherwise forgettable story is that it's taking attention away from much better stories. It's more like it's a forced meme than a fanfic.

  89. kari says:

    there is also another alt ending where rainbow dash wakes up in hospital because pinkie accidently used crystal morphine instead of sugar in cupcakes, causing rainbow to have a bad trip

  90. Auta Mane says:

    If that picture up top is even slightly true, we know why Luna's never been seen again.Just remember, everyone: Celestia's Ponyville Cloning Facilities will keep your ponies stocked, and with only a 20% chance of homicidal tenancies.

  91. Anonymous says:

    I think the picture is acyually a lot scarier than the story itself. Granted that it's a tad bit disturbing, but the picture on top of this screen, it's just scary. Now all we gotta do is to wait for some seriously disturbed someone out there to make a comic out of this.

  92. Prominence says:

    Wooow. With all this stuff about it…I really wanna read it. But at the same time I really don't. It's a struggle.

  93. Anonymous says:

    I've… been in the university for too long. While reading this I was going "Uhuh, uhuh, good pacing, uhuh, some minor grammar issues, somewhat accurate characterisation, uhuh, ooh nice twist, and with foreshadowing too…" Really, I'm getting kinda worried here.

  94. The alternate ending was so heartwarming it pretty much instantly erases any left over feelings of being disturbed. Poor Pinkie! I bet she had to sleep over at Dash's for a week after that dream.

  95. Anonymous says:

    looking at the picture i was all like"hey look its pinkie pie with a creepy face.wait, why does she have wings? three pairs of wings? and whats that necklace? oh god!"

  96. Anonymous says:

    @stokerbramwellWell, I'm sure Pinkie will take any excuse she can to sleep over, lmao. :P

  97. Anonymous says:

    I don't see what the fuss is about, I read it… and well I wasn't that effected by it. Sure it went into some dark places… but well its just words, and i know its just words, so I don't let it effect me. Also I have been a /b/tard for two years, so I'm sorta jaded to everything.

  98. Spoonman says:

    I must say that I find it very interesting that I actually was disturbed by this, didn't think I could get that from just reading something.I don't know what to say really, the fact that fans of a My Little Pony show are writing stuff like this is very creepy….or bizzarly funny.Can't decide

  99. Andrew says:

    I liked this story. It had me cringing and the original ending gave me a feeling similar to the first Hostle movie, where these ponies keep getting away with these wild murders and they could still be out there… It's not like I'm fapping to this sort of thing, I just think that this is supposed to be a painful, gory story and that is entirely the vibe I get from it. The extra ending was just icing on the pony flavored cupcake, something sweet that you can decide if it happened or not, depending on your mood when thinking about the story. Overall, the grammatical errors are a bit distracting, but I liked this story.

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  101. oh yeah, I just remembered that I happened to find another alt. ending, too bad I don't know shit about google docs.I guess I'll just send it to Seth.

  102. Honestly, I thought I would be upset or angry from this, but it is so over the top and absurd in the crazy gore and psychopathic portrayal of Pinky, it comes off not as MLP:FiM but just bizarre parody. Fortunately because of that, it doesn't ruin my image of the characters or the universe at all, because it just feels so surreal and ridiculous.

  103. Also, as Stokerbramwell stated, the alternate ending takes so much of the bad taste of the story away You can think of the second ending as the "real one", because at least it story makes a little sense.

  104. Anonymous says:

    @brianblackberryYes, precisely. After reading that horrible gore, the alternate ending was so touching and heartwarming and genuine that it brought a few tears to my eye.

  105. Naxts says:

    @AnonymousPretty much yeah. I guess after spending 3 years on /b/ and 7 years on newgrounds, I guess your stomach becomes iron.Now if you guys want to see something disturbing. Try going to /b/ or newgrounds during Halloween then tell me how you feel about cupcakes.

  106. Roy G. Biv says:

    I really, really didn't like it… But as bad as it is, it's still not as horrid as 'Agony in Pink' written for the MMPR fandom years ago. That Grimdark makes this one look friendly & cheerful.

  107. Muffin says:

    Thank you, Pacce.You let me love Pinkie Pie again

  108. Anonymous says:

    @MuffinI just look at the Pacce one as the real ending, and it changes everything about that story. That or you can imagine the "Pinky" in the Cupcakes story was just some sort of demon who took her place since she always looked "off" in the art done for the story, as if it was something else.

  109. anulenasnI says:

    Well, now! You all seem to have enjoyed this! Perhaps you would read my fic, it has been compared to this…https://docs.google.com/document/d/1S0AzkilUjpwo9rn53EnTgJQsy6PT1cs5eApwPvlhwsM/mobilebasic?hl=en

  110. Anonymous says:

    Is the writer of this story a Dolcett fan? It reads like he'd be into Dolcett type stuff.

  111. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousYeah, "Loyalty" was much more of a tear-jerker for me. This one was just gross.Speaking of "Loyalty"… I've heard that one's part of a series. Does anyone know where the other parts are if that's true, or who wrote it (because it was very good)?

  112. Shidoshi says:

    This is just so evil. It makes all of the reaction images of "Let's make cupcakes" have a new meaning.

  113. Shidoshi says:

    Can't we have someone submit a version grammar checked?

  114. Gig says:

    Nausea, misting of the eyes, increased heart rate, sense of dread, feeling of nervousness.All of the emotions a fan fic like this should evoke.

  115. Anonymous says:

    I had the Winter Wrap Up Song in my head throughout the gore…..Im ok with that

  116. Anonymous says:

    Can I just say this story is entirely without merit? The characterization is way off, the imagery is sophomoric at best, the dialogue is completely lifeless, and it's not even that good at what it aims for. Sure, it's disgusting, but because of how poorly-written it is, not for its content.You want to make a good, gory piece of fiction? Read the Johnnie Walker scene from Kafka on the Shore by Haruki Murakami, then we'll talk.

  117. Anonymous says:

    I always thought that gore should stay the fuck away from MLP. While reading this I laughed a couple of times and now I even feel inspired to write my own ridiculously brutal My Little Pony fanfic. Is that normal? Will you guys tolerate it?

  118. Anonymous says:

    To everyone who says this story should not exist and demands its removal from this blog:While "Cupcakes" is disturbing at best, the author still has his right to freedom of speech. It is not for you to try to censor him. You should listen to the warning in the post. This is the only fan fiction marked as [GRIMDARK AS FUCK] for a reason. If it's not appealing to you ignore it. Simple. As. That.

  119. Sethisto says:

    @AnonymousCupcakes is the limit.

  120. Thel says:

    I liked it!!!it did its job at getting pretty fucked up in some parts… it is hard to register a cringe from me but this story did have its moments, and as much as i hate tooting my own horn if you can get me to cringe, that is a mark of honor.i also loved the dialogue! it did have that subtle Rainbow dash is not all she is cracked up to be/just wants people to like her, bit in it to where it isn't beating me over the face with it. also some of pinkies lines are just relay funny! and that bit at the end (in the original version, i have not read the alternate ending) had me cracking up!Overall a very enjoyable story that i plan too read again… and i will recommend to some friends (the ones who can handle it)

  121. Thel says:

    @Theloh snap one more thing…if you tied me down and forced me to give you some criticism i would say maybe a little more description…you went pretty far into detail about what was happening but i think it could use a little more! give my imagination a workout!

  122. Anonymous says:

    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.GOD NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  123. 5t3v0 says:

    My curiosity got the better of me… Im shocked and horrified… but as a prospective writer im Impressed. The suspense and the actual creation of horror, the vivid descriptions… Very well written in my opinion, even though stories like that arent my usual cup of tea.However, Im going to ponychan to look for a cuteness thread now…

  124. Anonymous says:

    Wow…i'm impressed. I like the story. I don't see the point of it, but it was…interesting.

  125. This sounds pretty stupid judging from the comments.

  126. kefmaster says:

    I finally read it and it was sick, I almost had to cry. The alternate ending made it up a little, now I have to watch all the episodes in a row to get over this ;_;

  127. Anonymous says:

    the alternate ending makes it all better

  128. Anonymous says:

    "The heads of four foals, their eyes closed like they were sleeping, WEARING PARTY HATS MADE FROM THEIR OWN SKIN."That is so f'ing dark xD

  129. Anonymous says:

    This was gruesome, freaky and I regret reading it. Other than that, the writing was pretty terrible and pinkie was very out of character.

  130. Anonymous says:

    people who prefer the alternate ending over the real one are fucking pussies.

  131. Anonymous says:

    Eh… It's not nearly as dark as other fanfics I have read. To be honest, it made me laugh a few times.The alternate ending was okay, but I prefer the original. Just think of it as there being a multiverse; choose which universe you prefer.

  132. Anonymous says:

    Oh god I feel sick, why did I read that…

  133. Arc Tempest says:

    "For those that don't follow the threads on 4chan, this story is pretty much legendary for being the most brutal and disturbing pony story ever written."THIS IS A CHALENGE.OH GOD YOU PEOPLE ARE GOING TO HATE ME.

  134. williamcll says:

    I am screaming right now

  135. Anonymous says:

    This was so terrible! D:The happiest part was when Rainbow Dash finally died, so he wouldn't be in pain anymore. R.I.P.

  136. Filiecs says:

    @AnonymousGah, she. (Acts too much like a boy)Also, thank god for Pacce.

  137. Wafflepan says:

    This is a really good fic. It's horribly Grimdark and violent, but it was a great read.

  138. Well I "finally" decided to read this. I guess I am more jaded than I would like to be, because I didn't find it to be that soul-crushing. But then again, they are just words on a "paper".In fact I am kind of relieved – now I am free of all the unshaped horrors that my imagination made up based on how horrible this thing was supposed to be.You can't giggle at the ghostie if you don't look it in the eyeI guess the worst part in the entire thing was not the imagery, but how cheery and detached Pinkie remained during the entire story.There might be a risk of the story popping into my mind when I'm watching the next episode and she appears on the screen, but we shall see

  139. Anonymous says:

    uh its not really scary in my own opinion but its good especially the extra ending

  140. Anonymous says:

    This is some pretty talentless writing. The characters ring hollow, and are interchangeable with absolutely anyone. It's just a shock gimmick using MLP as a crutch because people know it.Honestly this seems more like a troll work /b/ came up with. Either that or Rob Zombie likes MLP. I'm not sure which would contain more stupid.

  141. GeminiSaint says:

    Eh…"Cupcakes" is almost childish next to "Agony in Pink". If you want gore, AiP is the way to go. Now, that stuff is really, truly sick, and it's leagues above Cupcakes. You've been warned.

  142. Anonymous says:

    I almost threw up. I am in physical pain from reading this. Why did I subject my self to such torture? I had all these warnings, all these signs saying I shouldn't, and I ignored them. I'm going to pop some pain meds, and start drinkin early today. :(

  143. Anonymous says:

    Ed Gein all the way.

  144. Anonymous says:

    This story made my cry, but I'll get over it. This induced massive sympathy pain, I feel very physically cold.

  145. Pimps McGee says:

    Thanks for posting my alt/extension, hopefully I can get some more feedback on it.

  146. DarkJester says:

    Disgusting as all hell, and unfortunately, that ruined a lot of the emotion in the story. Never once did I feel sorry for Rainbow Dash. The sadness just wasn't there, as it was buried beneath all the torture and violence. I think this could have turned into a good sob-story if it was more balanced between the torture and the emotions you tried to express with Rainbow Dash. Secondly, this story would have been a lot more disturbing if in fact Pinkie Pie used Dash's entrails to make cupcakes for all her friends who proceeded to eat them. Instead, the only thing that disturbed me was the fact that I laughed at all of Pinkie's puns and, to an extent, the ending of the story.It was, however, well-written. I give credit for that. It's good for what it is, but it could have been so much better.8/10.

  147. Saint Dane says:

    I will admit I was pretty disturbed at a couple points, and I'm no stranger to the worst the internet has to offer. I just don't get the point of writing something like this. The story isn't interesting and there is no artistic or creative worth to it at all, except trying to shove in as much random gore as possible. The author did do a good job of taking the character we love and utterly obliterating our love for them in a few dozen paragraphs.

  148. Anonymous says:

    I'll paraphrase a fitting review. "The author has fallen into the trap of every single high school drop out who decides that they've seen enough horror movies that they can write a good one in between shifts as a dishwasher. Clearly, too much time has been spent plotting out the villain, her one-liners, and her murderous quirks, and not enough on plotting out the story or removing all the awkward lines your stoned buddies came up with while playing wrestling video games at 3 am. This whole fic is one big circle jerk for gore-hounds fed up with character motivation, plot structure, or anything else that gets in the way of a forced meme."

  149. Bit of a boring story. I'm not really sure what the fuss is about. The ending actually made it a bit amusing, mostly due previous character interactions giving the acts performed a valid narrative purpose. Like other people here have said, there's no story to this – just violence for the sake of violence. The attention to detail is nice at some points, however, such as her saving and valuing cutie marks. Keeping mementos from the victim is a usual trait of these individuals. In the end, though, violence without a story feels like a joke without context – pointless and stale.

  150. DarkJester says:

    This didn't come out paragraphed from my copy&paste and I can't edit it. I apologize for that.

  151. Anonymous says:

    Meh. Nothing to freak out over.

  152. Anonymous says:

    In the name of Rico from Just Cause 2: "That was fun!"

  153. Anonymous says:

    Holy Jesus Christwhat is this?…i dont even…i mean….FUCK dude

  154. Anonymous says:

    This is the first text that made me feel four kinds of feelings: First excitement of reading a new story, then fear and disgusting feelings started rolling in and in the end sadness …

  155. XenoBrony says:

    i read the comments and was scared to read it. so today, i ponied up and read it, and feel like an idiot. its not that bad. i've read worse, and seen worse, like an organ less baby with the words welcome to /b/ over it. i actually kind of enjoyed this story, for the descriptions. the dialoge and emotions could have been better. and Apple Bloom's last line made me chuckle. i read this story, and welli'mokaywiththis.jpg

  156. Anonymous says:

    meh. i survived two ponies one troff and this wasnt as bad. people need to remember that this is a fic. not cannon, and not apart of the universe everypony here came to love. the only thing similar are names and places. all in all i recommend this for the non-weak willed. but seriously i was waiting for pinkie to say "it puts the lotion on its skin.." needs a scene like that in it.

  157. Anonymous says:

    I accidentally read a story about Pinkie Pie. It was written in second person, and was all about foot fetishes.That fic disturbed me far more than this one did.

  158. Anonymous says:

    ^ I read that, and I agree.

  159. Anonymous says:

    I WILL NEVER READ THIS!

  160. Anonymous says:

    This story made me hungry for cupcakes… and I'm a vegetarian.

  161. Ewyndall says:

    All this…commotion around this fanfic is starting to make me curious. Just so you know, if I get a heartattack or end up in a coma or suffer a nervous breakdown it will be YOUR fault for posting so much about this work. Never read anything in the [Grimdark as fuck] category. The only Grimdark I've ever read was The Eternal Night.I'm going to read this one tonight…Should I prepare some alcohol to make it hurt less? Some hankys? A loaded gun? Emergency shutdown button? Lobotomizer for my brain?

  162. Ewyndall says:

    WHAT THE *BEEP* WAS THAT YOU *BEEP* *BEEP* MONSTER OF *BEEEEEEP* YOU SHOULD BE *BEEEP* IN *BEEEP* BY *BEEEP* *BEEEP*. JUST *BEEPEEEEEEEEP* AND *BEEEEP* YOU *BEEEEEEEP*!!!*coughs* That was the most civilized critics this….work deserves.Dear author. You – Need – Help! Seriously. PS: You will burn in Ponyhell.

  163. Anonymous says:

    @EwyndallHave the alternate ending handy for when you finish.And keep reminding yourself that Pinkie would never hurt Dash.

  164. Ewyndall says:

    Second comment:I thought I will get more disturbed by this in the end, after all the commotion going around it.I tend to shed a few tears when reading sad stories and generally I find myself sensitive to stuff, but this didn't make me "sad" in the original meaning of the word.I was more angry and confused. It was scary and more distrubing in the beginning but towards the end it became more of a B-grade chopchop horror movie from the 80s. It's plain senseless mutilation. What's the point?I never understood HOW would anyone have such a story build up and stuck into his mind and WHY would one decide he/she has to work on it and write it out.Let me explain.I guess I could be called a veteran fan of Lovecraft and I will pick him as an example. He had a disturbed mind. He was writing stories that made me afraid just to go out to the toilet in the night. His stories really hit the mind and soul alike. He did that while basicly avoiding gore and blood in general. He was a true master of creating fear and doubt in the minds.Now why am I telling this?This kind of thing you wrote will not create a beliveable atmosphere. It won't scare people. People won't be shocked by the story itself to be honest in the way you might think.The further you push it the more will the reader's mind focus on the author, rather than on the story itself and the result?Many readers convinced the author is a latent serial killer without actually paying attention to the story itself, other than finding it as a proof of your mental instability.To make it short: the story will be lost, only creating a negative feeling towards the author, rather than leaving a deep impression of the story.I appreciate scary stuff and good horror stories, but this was non of them. @Darkjester That ending was good though. @Pacce I liked how you tried to save the story:P

  165. Elicoor13 says:

    I think that while the Fan-fic is fucked up, it's well written and well……actually kinda compelling. It puts an interesting spin on Pinkie Pie, who most would view as a total ditz and completely harmless. It puts her more in the mindset of someone like Jeffery Dahmer. Except that Dahmer didn't have a "numbers" system on how he killed. His killing pattern was more based on his deep seated fear of abandonment(which is an interesting kinda counterpoint for Pinkie actually). This whole "number" system actually makes it rather tragic for even Pinkie, implying that she(the Pinkie Persona that we all know) has no real control over who she kills and it is left up to some other aspect of her personality that she has no control over. And once you address Pinkie's Multiple-Personality Disorder, then you have to wonder where this "Dark Pinkie"(for lack of a better word) came into being. I mean, we know that Pinkie's parents are dead(I think, and it works well for this thought exercise) and that she was raised by her extended family. But we know very little about her childhood, maybe this "Dark Pinkie" came to be as a sort of protector of sorts, maybe someone abused Pinkie, maybe something happened to Pinkie, or maybe this "Dark Pinkie" just sorta popped in one day(Yeah yeah, I know I'm reading too much into this but whatever.). Who knows? Maybe this "Dark Pinkie" is what helps Pinkie Pie to "giggle at the ghostly". Maybe the darkness in her own mind is what can help her face the darkness of the outside world. Although, it does seem that Pinkie Pie has some control over her darker side, because she has that number system that she spoke of. That might be how she fights her urges, by trying as hard as she can to not kill those closest to her. But then the rather nasty dark little hobgoblin of a thought occurs, what if Pinkie Pie's "Dark Pinkie" persona killed her parents? Maybe they are a part of Pinkie's "party" down in her lair. Maybe their hides help to make the banner of "Life is a Party". I could go on for hours in a treatise on how fascinating this makes the character of Pinkie, but I really shouldn't and most people will tl;dr this anyway. But yeah, fucked up fan-fic, but compelling. I'd kinda chalk it up to people's admiration for "The Triumph of Will". The subject matter is abhorrent, but the execution and the subject matter are compelling. Although I much prefer the first alternate ending, with Dash.

  166. Display Name says:

    I just read it for the first time and I laughed several times.And I'm a high school freshman.I feel like I should feel like a bad person.

  167. my face was blank during the entirety of this, it's sick and disturbing, but not believable for me. it didn't freak me out or make me afraid, it was just someones concept of pinkie pie killing rainbow dash, Sadly i have to say the Fanfic seems a little over-hyped. Now Pardon whilst i locate some pastries.

  168. Brian says:

    It is sickening to think of a beloved character twisted like this. A character who through her attitude and actions throughout the show has brought smiles and laughs to thousands of people. A character who's twisting into a monster served NO PURPOSE other than pure shock value. It is despicable.And don't take me to mean that a character should never ever be changed or grown in a story, that's ludicrous. People have interesting stories they want to tell, and the events of those stories can affect the characters. But this? This is a frickin' joke. No rhyme, no reason, no relevance AT ALL to the character as she is in the show. It's SENSELESS and a waste of a character.I got into My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic thanks to a bright pink pony who was fun and funny in almost every scene she was in. And THAT is why I hate this story so much. I can't watch or think of the episodes I love anymore without thinking of THIS! THIS EXPLOITIVE, BADLY-WRITTEN PIECE OF TRASH!

  169. Ewyndall says:

    @BrianI was thinking about this story for some time and came to a different view after a few days.I did find the story overall bad for it plain being senseless mutilation. The point of such stories is probably the shock element, that the reader is asking Why? And there will be never be an answer. No explanation to satisfy our minds. Just the brutal scenes. I guess that's why it burns into the mind. It's an unsolved riddle.Anyways, my cure for such things: embrace it. Not kidding. Turn off the lights, put on some sick music, and read it again, and again till you feel nothing about the story. No hatred, no anger. Then it will go away. It worked for me, can't guarantee it does for others aswell.

  170. i think i just died inside

  171. Anonymous says:

    But why is Applebloom in on it?

  172. Mami Tomoe says:

    I read this "Cupcake" fanfic (at dark) and "Rocket to Insane" minutes ago… And wow. I think I have a iron heart for this. Yandere Pinkie is scary as f*ck though. But as much as I feel creaped out to bits, I have read worse with more graphic guro content… Oh and that i'm a Higurashi/Umineko fan, so this brings me deja-vu moments. But I do enjoy the fanart made for this fic though. I could use a bit of well… Creepy pics to go with all of my cute MLP(FiM) pic collection~Though for me, it's not good of a fic, but it would be a nice concept for your next MLP visual/sound novel… (And please don't throw tomatoes at me!)

  173. Anonymous says:

    I must be really jaded. I didn't find that disturbing or disgusting. I actually found it somewhat interesting.

  174. TD says:

    My life will never be the same.You have soiled the image of pinkie pie and I'll never see her in the same light again.

  175. supervanman says:

    I got pretty light-headed and felt sick after reading this. Not gonna be doin THAT again.

  176. nova_25 says:

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  177. nova_25 says:

    I said it once… I said it twice… Three is the magic number.Ugliest, pathetic, revolting… excuse for a ''thing'' that dare to ''pretend'' to ''be'' a story.This isn't Grimdark ? …I have read grimdarks, violence, war, sadness, even some deaths in classic fashion.This is nothing more than a cheap take on a SAW-like movie that should have died long ago…A mess of nothing else but dirty twisted ''Guro''.An absolute try to shock and create disgust, and surely not to entertain in any sick ways.This story would gain more to be forgotten… alone, dusty and never to be unearthed… or remembered.(on a side note, I salute Pacce's Alternative Ending, with Honor.)

  178. Anonymous says:

    Did anypony here watched Happy Three Friends? Is not a big deal ¬¬

  179. Anonymous says:

    i'm all for freedom of speech and i'm aware the writer did it for the lolsbut i gotta ask… why gore? is your mind really that sick? it's just words, that's true, and it's true that words can't truly hurt, but man, your work says more about you than you thinkthe mere fact that you're writing about fictional characters being killed in a grim fashion and then literally baked in cupcakes for the others to eat… i gotta really question the sanity of the writer and the people who actually enjoyed it

  180. Anonymous says:

    I am not amused. Okay I am, but really I look at this story as wasted potential. The premise is good, but the execution is faulty. The writing lacks any real style, and the killing was a bit uninspired. The dialog was great though, I could really imagine Pinkie saying those things if she were a homicidal maniac. The story did make me laugh though, the contrast between the lighthearted and the murderous can be fun to those with high squick tolerances and a taste for black humor.

  181. Anonymous says:

    I'm in a limbo, I consider this scarier than 3 guys 1 hammer or pain olympics. I don't know if read this or no. Something tells me "do it" but something tell me no. Oh, well, I will never giggle at this ghostly if I don't face it.

  182. Venbrou says:

    Wow… The one by minalkra was just… epic! As for the original, I see it as more of a ponified version of hanable lector. And having a taste for horror movies with unnecessary amounts of gore, I kinda enjoyed this story. I guess the main reason why I'm not disturbed by this is because I've grown up on these kind of stories and I know they're not real.

  183. DarkJester says:

    Minalkra's alt. ending was pretty good, though hard to follow. Also noticed a lot of spelling errors that could be easily fixed with a light proofread.

  184. Anonymous says:

    @Anonymous I actually didn't think this was that bad. The characters were a bit off, but not by much. The Apple Bloom ending made me laugh. I'm more disturbed by the fact that I wasn't disturbed than anything else; I guess /b/ has rendered me impervious to gore and such.

  185. Anonymous says:

    Despite how much I love MLP, I actually enjoyed this story. I especially liked how it well it kept to Pinkie Pie's character in how she was joking around and stuff during some of the most disturbing scenes.Truly a unique, though horrifying tale involving our little ponies.

  186. Darclord says:

    I finally manufactured enough vertibrae to giggle at this particular ghostie. After enough gore and screaming piled up I just kind of tuned it out and couldn't tune it back in. So, meh.There's a story in the Apple Bloom section under "Normal" called "White Tail Woods." No gore except for some brief squdgy noises off camera. That story had me six inches from my monitor, baring my teeth, and white-knuckeling my chair. No lie. My wife had to peel me off the celing when the fridge kicked on.

  187. Darclord says:

    ^^I feel that I should point out that Sgt. Sprinkles has some really great stories out there and you should read them. It sucks that "Cupcakes" is the one he seems to be known for. Okay, I'm done.

  188. Minalkra says:

    @DarkJester I specifically left bloodlust as one word, to try to give it a more, I don't know, Biblical feel? Also, yes, several spelling errors I've fixed, thank you. Could you try to describe how it was hard to follow? You're not the first to say so about my writing and I'd like to try to fix that, if possible.

  189. Anonymous says:

    yay for alternate ending!pinkie pie is now nice and cute again :3

  190. "It becomes funny if you imagine it all as a b movie with one guy in a couple of different pony costumes trying to disguise that he's the only actor through bad editing….At least I think that to help me sleep."Thank you, Pacce. You've managed to help me giggle at this particular ghostie, as well as mend my heart with your alternate ending.Thank you so much.

  191. ExStryde says:

    1st Time Reading : that was pretty nice, in a gory and creepy-ish way.2nd Time Reading : OH GOD WHAT THIS IS HORRIBLE3rd Time Reading : …huh, this isn't too bad..

  192. Anonymous says:

    Hmm… The ending by Minalkra is interesting but kind of confusing too.

  193. Anonymous says:

    @Mercedes Guardian i couldn't agree more. after having that bad taste in my mouth i need that palette cleanser thanks pacce <:D.

  194. Kakashi says:

    1 st Time reading: -Killed himself shortly after reading the fanfic-

  195. Anonymous says:

    Thank you for the alt end, Pacce. That was really sweet, and healed my scarred heart.I can now love Pinkie again.

  196. Anonymous says:

    I'd really like to see this in comic form.

  197. Anonymous says:

    wow, WTF… kinda disturbing, but not as bad as the human centipede, DO NOT BASE A STORY ON THE HUMAN CENTIPEDE I SWEAR TO GOD…

  198. Jackie says:

    What's the big deal? I thought it was a good fanfic. Gruesome and sick, yes, but I've become desensitized to those kinds of things. xD

  199. Anonymous says:

    this is a the greatest thing ever pinned.

  200. Anonymous says:

    =3 I love it!Are there more like this?

  201. Anonymous says:

    ya knowI just got done reading the story, hit the back button to go back to this page, and I saw an add for cupcakes to the left… woah.

  202. conker502 says:

    @Sergeant Sprinkles: World's Greatest Party ClownSergeant Sprinkles? Hi, I am Kill Katt. I am a furry art artist, but I also write sometimes. I want to know if I can upload, on the Equestria Dialy, a fan fic of your fan fic (sort of Cupcakes sequel-prequel). If you want to read it first I could send links to your e-mail. What Do you say?

  203. Anonymous says:

    I've read more than my fair share of Creepy Pastas.Lurked /x/ for months.Watched Marble Hornets, and every horror movie I could get my hands on.But that….That….

  204. Anonymous says:

    Hello this is the part where I kill you!Page 7: The part where she kills youAchievement unlocked: The part where she kills youP.s. I lol'dP.p.s. Portal 2 reference

  205. mbulsht says:

    Is it bad that this was the first fanfiction I ever read?

  206. Kyosuke says:

    I read I don't even know how much, but not even close to half, and went "This is pathetic" it's sock value using a children's show, like a fan fic about Johnny test where his sisters take out his organs or some random crap like that. Seriously, it's like people who post pictures of popular game and TV characters as zombies, or Marvel Zombies itself. It's "ooooh, look at how EDGY I CAN BE!"

  207. wow…..just…wow. Dude whoever wrote this you Sir have a stain on your soul, Just wow that is SO freaking depraved!*Sigh* I will not seek our suck people when the world ends, but we will meet on the field of zombies, and there will be a terrible battle! Shudder, man thats freaky gory stuff, why do people enjoy this?

  208. Anonymous says:

    read this last week. didn't have nightmares but just sat there for about a half-hour thinking "what the hell did i just read?"

  209. Anonymous says:

    Honestly, I think the tales of horror I've been hearing from all over the fandom were way worse then the actual story. Or maybe I'm just disturbed as Hell, I don't know.

  210. Anonymous says:

    This is still my fav fan fic

  211. Anonymous says:

    I skimmed through the comments and it's just 200 posts of "WAAHHHHHHHHHHH"Can someone just post a two or three paragraph summary of this story for us weak babies who can't handle it but are still curious?

  212. Anonymous says:

    God…this is too fucked up to not to make an animated version.

  213. @AnonymousPinkie's cupcakes are made of ponies that she tortures before killing (and she doesn't let them just die until they literally cannot sustain life anymore due to having no blood left to carry oxygen (she revives them if they passout)). Applebloom is in on it too.Kinda can be seen as an alternate timeline starting off of the most recent episode

  214. I don't like this story's content in its original form (ie no alternate ending), but I do need to give the writer credit for composing a piece of work that is so able to unsettle the majority of the fandom (esp. /b/tards, those notorious few who are largely desensitized to gore).Especially since it was written prior to the 'Pinkie is crazy' episode…

  215. FrostV952 says:

    Somehow, Pinkie reminds me of Karl Denke in this story…Why do i even know about such people :/

  216. MichaelXX2 says:

    The most fucked up thing about this fandom is this fanfic. Seriously.

  217. Anonymous says:

    and it is now canonically a more realistic possibility than most of the other fics. sarcasm/oh joy/sarcasm

  218. Prancingfox says:

    I really did enjoy this, it was fun, entertaining, and a nice change of pace towards a more cynical and sadistic audience.

  219. Anonymous says:

    horrifying.especially when you read everything in the intended voices.Now somepony make a not-shitty flash out of this.

  220. Anonymous says:

    To people who said they didn't find this disturbing: that's because it's not disturbing. It's just gross.To be truely disturbing you need to have emotional connection with the reader, you need subtlety and to allow their imagination to fill in the gaps. This fic is poitless, the characters are to different from the show, and the gore too over the top for it to be disturbing. It's just gore for the sake of gore.I did like Pacce's ending though.

  221. Anonymous says:

    WWHHAAAAAAAAAATT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU?!!?! OH GOD, WHY THE HELL DID I READ THIS, I SHOULD'VE FOLLOWED THE WARNINGS!!! FUCKING FUCK, THIS IS TERRIBLE!!*reads first alternate ending*Oh man, thanks Pacce. My sanity is in eternal debt to you.

  222. Anonymous says:

    I guess growing up with danish children movies makes you tough… Try watch "Terkel i knibe" and then compare it to this, and think about Terkel being a family/childrens movie

  223. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousOn it. Cant promise yet that it wont be shitty. Have to see how it turns out.

  224. Anonymous says:

    And then Episode 25 happened…..

  225. Anonymous says:

    Meh it could be worse, that didn't bug me at all, come on you can make something worse than this.

  226. Anonymous says:

    I actually kinda liked it.

  227. Anonymous says:

    it may be because i play a lot of mortal kombat or i read to much Invincible that i see gore as something more action oriented than terror, but i didn't find it that horrifying as everyone says, but i most admit its very creative and it has pretty good writing, its like a kid version of american psycho

  228. Anonymous says:

    Eh. Gory, but really, but calling it [lol bweare the grimdarks] is too much. It has the essential technical elements (and some of Pinkie's dialogue was fititng enough), but it lacks an empathic narrative. It needs context to draw horror out of simple gore, you see? Preferably, more detail should have been put into the psychological depravity going on, rather than the slasher-properties.Of course, you'd have to change the narrative POV, but that's more inconvenient than really difficult. The point is that grimdark is not gore, it is… the essential pointlessness and solitude of existence overpowering the positivist narrative. It is the triumph of defeatism. Not just snuff.imho anwyay

  229. KillKatt says:

    Can some one tell me please how I can contact with Sergeant Sprinkles? I need to talk to him

  230. Anonymous says:

    I'm with all the jaded people. Which is horrible…If anything all it made me feel was one thing:I *REALLY* want to go bake some cupcakes.

  231. Anonymous says:

    YOU SICK BASTARD! How the fuck could anybody write a story like this?!Then again, the ending with Apple Bloom was kind of funny.

  232. Alester says:

    I swear Sergeant Sprinkles is watching and playing TOO MUCH Higurashi No Naku Koro Ni while writing this. D: Now I'm scared as FUCK!Even more scarier is how Party of One referenced this.

  233. Ridley says:

    So… How bout that new episode?

  234. Anonymous says:

    Wow. Just wow. I think I'll stick to Fallout: Equestria for all my Grimdark needs from now on.Curse my curiousity.

  235. Loved it. Every second. I would love to know the author.

  236. Anonymous says:

    A good alternate title, at least in my opinion, would be "Silence Of The Ponies". It fits, with the cannibalism, the "skin suit", and all that…

  237. Anonymous says:

    Halfway through the second page: Nope, nope. Nuh uh, not gonna finish reading.

  238. falkampft says:

    I'm not reading this shit. EVER.

  239. Anonymous says:

    Is it me or are these alternate endings keep getting worse?

  240. Zack G says:

    Jesus fucking H Christ. Very disturbing but very well written. Well done!

  241. D-d-d-daniel says:

    I threw up twice during that.And that was just the first half……

  242. Anonymous says:

    Lol, I loved the puns, I had to reread them once, but burst out laughing, even if I dont like the whole gore thing o,o

  243. Anonymous says:

    Pimps McGee's Alt Ending made the read worthwhile. The baddest of BAD ENDs. If you picture this as a separate entity from Faust's core story and a FANFICTION – which it IS – then it's really easy to accept.I grinned a bit, picturing the look of horror on Twilight's face. It made the most sense of them all, easily. Truly Higurashi-grade shit there. :3

  244. Anonymous says:

    Huh, not bad. I don't know why but I like these sorts of stories. Adds a bit of mortality to the world, y'know?

  245. Anonymous says:

    So I just read this, and I've got some mild pre-medical background. I've done surgery on live rats and dissected animals – that kind of thing. When reading this story, I just couldn't help but think of how inconsistent some of this stuff is with biology.For starters, the knock-out cupcake is unlikely. Rather, it would more likely be something like Rohipnol, which renders a person conscious but basically inert. Actual anesthesia is complicated, and even applying it to small animals is dangerous and can cause them to die before you operate. You can't just make somebody eat or drink something and have them fall completely asleep.The other big thing was removing the intestines. After you do that your patient is basically dead because of a system of blood vessels known as the hepatic portal. Your body has to supply a lot of blood to your digestive tract, so when you carelessly remove a creature's guts with your bare hands, then death from blood loss is just a matter of seconds.The other issue is shock. After cutting pieces off of Rainbow Dash, Dash would certainly be losing blood, especially if she's panicked. If enough blood isn't circulating properly, then major organs that need that blood can fail, and that will lead to death. I don't know how long Dash blacked out for after her initial injuries, but if it was long there's a good chance she would have passed away while she was out.Otherwise, it was not a bad horror piece. Obviously not what the fans would be expecting, but I guess that's the point. Of course, when you go into reading it thinking, "I will be mortified, and that's the emotion I want to feel," then it's not a bad read.

  246. Drax says:

    I been wondering, anyone seen the pic of Pinkie all mutilated with the word "PARTY" on it? I came across it a few months back on /rule34, and was like "Meh, not porn, not even funny" and passed it by. I've since then become entertained by this bit of insanity that is MLP:FiM (Alcohol makes it better, kids!), and stumbled across this particular fanfic. Seems the pic I found was related to the one alternate ending, but now I cant find it again. Its driving me nuts. Anyone know where I can find it?

  247. Anonymous says:

    Read one line. Closed page. Not gonna let this fan fic blacken my soul.

  248. Wolfemann says:

    While I understand that some people are upset by the story, personally, I think it's brilliant and hilarious.It's a dead-on spoof of the ridiculous levels of gore and pointless graphic violence of films like Saw and Hostel.However, if you're not a fan of slasher flicks and *real* grindhouse cinema, by the likes of Fulci, Diodatto, and the like, I wouldn't recommend it. Not that you won't "get it," but it's just not likely to be the sort of thing that you'll get the *joke* in.

  249. Anonymous says:

    Which is the best alternate ending? Ill read it at some point but I don't want to ruin pinkie pie for myself :(Though I gotta say I enjoyed the light dash of insanity they gave her in episode 25.

  250. Anonymous says:

    Ooooh I feel sick. Eating Pork n Beans while reading this was NOT a good idea.

  251. Anonymous says:

    Khorn smiles on you, Pinkie Pie.

  252. Tarvoc says:

    Having read this three times now, it actually gives me an idea for a sequel. Not an alternative ending, an sequel. It would be a crossover of sorts between FiM and Jeff Lindsay's Dexter novels, with Crazy Cupcakes Cannibal Pinkie as the victim and another cast member as a Dexter Morgan expy who kills other serial killers. It could even be written in a Jeff Lindsay-esque monologue style.So, who could be Dexter Morgan? My first thought was Twilight Sparkle, but there are other options. Rarity shares with Dexter a great perception for details and an obsession for neatness, so she might be an option. With Fluttershy, one would have a nice pun for the title ("Dextershy"). I'm just not sure if I can see Fluttershy as a serial killer who kills other serial killers. Also, another brilliant option would be Luna, with Nightmare Moon as her Dark Passenger.I am really tempted to do something like this, but since I'm not a good fiction writer and I don't know if I will have the time, feel free to use this idea yourself if you like it.

  253. Anonymous says:

    I think this story deserves all the weird hype/fear its been getting. Now I've seen this kinda story telling before with all the gore and dark mentality, but its a right of passage if you do read it. Never look at pinkie pie the same way again boy I tell you what!

  254. Derpy says:

    Cupcakes… <3

  255. Anonymous says:

    I want to read this, but I don't at the same time

  256. Anonymous says:

    Wow, talk about underated. This is one of the best things I've ever read, seriously.

  257. Anonymous says:

    @TarvocOh my balls that sounds amazing. Please do it. Please.

  258. Comrade Azza says:

    Once you've read "Recitfied Anonymity", you don't get disturbed by nothin'.

  259. Anonymous says:

    I think I may be insane, I could not stop the manic laughter that surged forth. I no longer trust myself…

  260. Anonymous says:

    I am clearly a terrible person.I grinned to the end.

  261. Gadget says:

    After finally getting off my flank to read this. I must say…I was hoping for scarier. Oh well, to each their own.

  262. Dr. WTF says:

    @AnonymousRead mine! Swag the fuck out! Wolf Haley! Triple-six!

  263. Anonymous says:

    For the record, I facehoofed after reading Dr. WTF's ending. Talk about a mood spoiler.

  264. Dr. WTF says:

    @AnonymousThink of it as viral marketing for GOBLIN.

  265. Anonymous says:

    What really worries me about this is the sense of deja-vu.

  266. @AnonymousI laughed the whole way through this fanfic. Don't get me wrong, Pinkie's my favourite character and I love Dashie, but this is my favourite fanfiction. My favourite alt. ending was the one where Pinkie gets mashed to pieces.

  267. Anonymous says:

    I read all the alternative endings. I liked the first three, and not really on the last three. Don't get me wrong, I thought they were all excellently written, just that I didn't like the concept of them. My favourite ending was the one done by Pimps Mcgee. I thought he captured Pinkie's personality better than the original author of Cupcakes. Also, after reading the ending by Dr. WTF. I did the biggest facehoof I've ever done. Normally, when people say that they facehoofed, they're just typing that to give their feelings. However, this is the first time I've ever actually facehoofed in real life from reading a fanfic. That was pretty bad.

  268. Dr. WTF says:

    @AnonymousNot a fan of Odd Future, I take it? Free Earl!

  269. Anonymous says:

    I almost saw my dinner again.

  270. Anonymous says:

    3/5. Nice job displaying the general 'insanity' factor of your antagonist, but otherwise sadly gore for the sake of gore. Minus the spelling/grammar errors, I do have to give kudos to the dialogue itself, which is definitely the highlight of the piece.

  271. Anonymous says:

    you see, thank god I simply forgot this tab around my GC, And didnt read it. cause i didnt actually know what it was about. now that i know, im soooo not going to read it.

  272. Ron says:

    Huh. I'm suddenly hungry for cupcakes.

  273. Anonymous says:

    Who believes this? I certainly don't. My brother does though.

  274. Anonymous says:

    Eh… This isn't that disturbing… I thought it was kinda cheesy :P Though it reminded me a lot of the silence of the lambs… that movie was the most disturbing thing I have ever seen in my whole life.

  275. Tarvoc says:

    @Anonymous Have you seen Copycat? ^^Also, I agree with you on parallels between Cupcakes and Silence of the Lambs. In Silence of the Lambs, Lecter eats humans and Buffalo Bill wears the skins of humans. In Cupcakes, Pinkie Pie does both (with ponies instead of humans, of course).

  276. Daniel says:

    No words (at least from me) can express how insane this story is. Pickie Pie gone full phycho?! A fate worse than dealing with Chuck Norris when choosing to die!My opinion: if you seen a lot of the Cupcake jokes about Rainbow Dash being scared, I SUGGEST LEAVING THIS STORY ALONE!The story is HIGHLY not suggested for the faint of heart nor for kids ("GRIMDARK AS FUCK* warning is true!).If you read this – as insane as it sounds – FINISH READING! Otherwise you could get mental trauma about what could happen that you skipped.Take my word and all bronys and fans of the 4th series: this story is bloody crazy and flips emotions and perceptions of Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash. For the very least, LOOK HOW FUCKED UP PINKIE PIE LOOKS!! Doesn't that seem strange, because it's a WARNING!! If I can't stress that enough nor others commmenting, then read the story and learn the abridged insanity of the legendary partier and the innocent, high-flying pony of Rainbows.A common reaction: sickified and mortified.Final thoughts: DON'T READ IT UNLESS YOU HATE THE PONYS TO DEATH AND ENJOY TORTURE!! Anyone who loves the series will be subjected towards painful memories of the loved ponies and think different of them. Although, as maniacal as it sounds, this story is impressive, despite hating the theme. The intricate detail is almost enjoyable in description. The personality changes have evidence towards why! Overall, if you are looking for the most zany twist for an innocent series going to the phycho Xtremes, thern read it. Otherwise, GET THE HELL AWAY FROM THIS STORY OR SUFFER TO DIRE CONSEQUENCES!! This story is powerful with words and will twist fans' stomachs, begging to stop. "Haters gonna hate," as the cliche goes, and haters will enjoy the GOREFEST (HINT, HINT?!).Note: No one will be held responsible for the mental damage from the tragic tale. It is only the viewers' fault to read it, for relief, read the last few alternate endings, such as movie making and a new side of Fluttershy to elaborate the ironic twist of the bloody carnage for a laugh or inconsistancies.

  277. Ten Mihara says:

    My reaction to this story was somewhat odd, considering. As opposed to being thoroughly disgusted or sick or saddened, I was amused. The story is so over wrought and taken so far to the extremes that it stops being scary and goes into the territory of stupid funny. Crossing the line twice, as it were. Then again, I'm a person who does not find anatomy scary. If I want a good scare, I like suspense, darkness, primal fears, not just an anatomy lesson. Props for being bold enough to write this, but I'm afraid if scary is what you were going for, no sale here.

  278. Anonymous says:

    I don't think that I can ever watch the show again. I read this a couple days ago and I not been able to sleep much since. This will burn a hole into your mind if you are not prepared.

  279. Ron says:

    Am I the only one who thinks that Bennett the Sage should totally do a Fanfiction Theatre of this and that Rob from Topless Robot should do a Fan Fiction Friday of it?

  280. J~~ says:

    I just read the description/summary of this on tvtropes. I fear the dreams I will have tonight.I need happy pony videos immediately!

  281. Rexco33 says:

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  282. Anonymous says:

    I wasn't planning on sleeping anyways!

  283. Anonymous says:

    I love the taste of blood and the sight of gore…but this made me scared i mean really scared..i can stand humans being tortured but not ponys…not ponys excuse me while i go and vomit out my food have a good day everyone.

  284. Anonymous says:

    Just read it the first time, and pfft! You call that dark? I've read plenty of darker stories than that. If you're going to write a story about torture and mutilation, at least try to put some effort into it.You guys are a bunch of wusses.

  285. Anonymous says:

    Narm.Narm everywhere.

  286. Avojaifnot says:

    Read "Agony In Pink".

  287. Tre says:

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  288. Tre says:

    Seen enough pictures to know that it is uh… bad. utterly dreadful, really. will never read this. ever.read "Rocket to Insanity" yesterday and it felt like alot better of a fanfic (and by that i mean it was still partially sickening but not nearly as much as even the PICTURES of this are) and alot more in-character for the ponies, so, read that one, disregard this one, yea. i may read the first paragraph or two to see how much i have saved my brain from exploding though..

  289. Anonymous says:

    I, uh…I thought Pinkie was hilarious.

  290. PinkiePieFan says:

    I dont know if I should read Cupcakes or not…. I want to.. but Im scared too. I LOVE Pinkie and I dont want this to ruin it :(

  291. Fen says:

    This is the best thing :D No idea why everyone seems to hate it. Then again, I wish this would happen to Dash in canon, so maybe all the haters are just dumb enough to like her.

  292. Altair says:

    I've been lurking around the site a few days and I had to post something about this….It needs a little work, while I was reading it I was mostly bored and couldn't help but notice spelling mistakes here and there. (I also read the alternate endings, and Minalkra's is by far the most interesting, I would definitely read more of that, seems like it has an epic tale behind it.)Am I just desensitized to this sort of stuff or is it just not as bad as everypony says?By the way, still think Pinkie Pie is freakin' awesome, she's just soooo random…[Sidenote/Spoiler?]I won't go into detail, but when I reached a certain part I thought of Red vs. Blue (http://redvsblue.com/archive/?sid=rvb&v=more&s=1 <=Season 1 starts here) where it was mentioned that someone's spleen was inflated and used for general recreation and esprit de corps.)

  293. Omega RKB says:

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  294. Omega RKB says:

    And now I remember why I usually don't read fanfics xPNowhere near as horrible as people make out, but damned Seargent Sparkle, you've got one twisted imagination…

  295. Sir Leadhead says:

    hm.that was… odd. Too unrealistic to really scare or disturb me, the person writing this obviously had no medical background whatsoever. Combine that with rather sub-par, purely descriptive writing, no imagery to speak of, and you've just got a bag of guts and no substance. I kept expecting a description of the smell, but apparently the smell isnt noteworthy, because it's pretty much not brought up at all. One would think a chamber full of pony remains would reek like nothing else.Honestly, I was expecting more, with the big deal everypony makes of it. I get the context of the references and jokes referring to this fic now, though, so I guess that's something.So yeah… not a total waste of time, but frankly, it's bad writing. The content, I can handle, (especially since it's so ridiculously presented… Dash would have died the instant her entrails were taken out. Maybe even when her wings were chopped off, depending on the arteries that go to the wings and how they are configured.) but the presentation is lukewarm. Soft. Mediocre. Just good enough to not be absolutely terrible, but still bad enough that it's almost not worth reading. So, final verdict? I'd suggest reading something else, but if you want to know what the hey everypony is talking about, I suppose you could read it.It does show the beginning development of some talent, though, if sergeant sprinkles is still writing, a little practice and I bet he could scare the socks off of anyone.

  296. Estavin says:

    I really enjoyed it but would have made it more kinky if Pinky was complementing her instead. Darkjester's alt ending made this a lot better.

  297. Anonymous says:

    As I was reading, I made a few notes in regards to my personal tastes:Electrocuting your meat is going to make the muscle seize up and thus difficult to cook and eat. Not only that, but its going to flash cook parts of it as well. Pumping it full of adrenaline and pain killers is only going to make it even less palatable. When one considers how fragile horse meat is, Pinky's haphazard butchering is insulting to connoisseurs of meat everywhere.Furthermore, why for the love of Princess Celestia would she decide to dilute the flavor by hiding it in cupcakes? I'm not even sure if its possible to bake meat into cupcakes. I mean, beef wellington or eggrolls is one thing, but cupcakes? What an absolutely terrible way to prepare meat.

  298. gloglablyn1 says:

    Well since I was a big Dark Eldar fan back in the day (about a decade or so), and I liked the background of Urien Rakarth. Add to that the fact I recently took a university course specifically dealing with the Holocaust and life in the concentration camps with several texts involving "Nazi" doctors performing every kind of experiment imaginable, the story didn't affect me so badly. I do feel bad for my other, younger fellow bronies who may not have had this prior initiation into sick and twisted writing. I guess what bothers me is that the fictional characters are portrayed in this way. Oh well…

  299. Curtis says:

    Two things I wish to sayAs one gentlemen pointed out, how does one put horse meat in a cupcake without anyone noticing?and second, "All our horses are 100% horse-fed for that double-horse "juiced-in" goodness"

  300. rangergx9 says:

    I laughed at some parts… but I cringed in fear at most.

  301. Anonymous says:

    I can never look at this show the same way again I hope nopony should ever have to read that storyI wish they would see this comment and realize they have to turn back while they still can

  302. Ryder says:

    Andrew W.K. on Dr. WTF ending??? Now I have seen everything.PS: Kill Kat, you really need to improve your grammar.

  303. Dr. WTF says:

    @RyderFrankly, I'm surprised no one used him before me. And that he didn't voice Pinkie Pie's dad during the rock farm flashback.

  304. Anonymous says:

    I feel odd how I came to like Pinkie Pie a little more trough this.Guess I'm just used to this stuff,WELL THAT WAS A 15 MINUTES WELL SPENT. Kinda feel like making cupcakes now.

  305. Elah says:

    First time reading it. It's not as disturbing as I was expecting from the way everyone went on about it. Didn't help that the puns were horrible.As for the alternate endings, I think I liked Dr. WTF's the best (except the mild shipping at the end).

  306. Anonymous says:

    Ok, so I read the comments. I'm not the writer. It was . . .eh? I wrote one of the alternate endings, but I'm not going to tell you which one. Re-reading it, I think I can do better. Less gore-y, more crazy though. Anyway, commenters. Why are you flipping out? This is tame compared to some of the gore artists out of Japan or even some of the necrometal album covers. I'd love to post my end result here but let's face it, it'd be nastier by far than Cupcakes. Oh, and it'd star Fluttershy. Heh.Anyway, stop flipping out, it's barely a blip on the gore radar.

  307. Anonymous says:

    I really want to read this, but only out of how many poeple talk about it. It's the same feeling I got before watching 2 girls 1 cupSo, I didn't read it. Is that wrong? Yes? Well, Fuck you then.

  308. Anonymous says:

    Oops, accidentally read this while listening to the Eurobeat Evil Enchantress. Creepy as HELL.

  309. Anonymous says:

    People who freaked out over this obviously haven't read Agony In Pink.

  310. Foxer_Redfox says:

    I read it today…Meh, I saw and read worse things XD actually make references to real serial killers and some shitty anime serial killers

  311. ShoutingRyan says:

    …That's messed up. That's really messed up.And if she has a way to prevent unicorns from using their magic… THAT'S REALLY MESSED UP.

  312. Sanvitch says:

    Oh, this story was so awesome.

  313. Anonymous says:

    The above image is more than enough of a reason for me not to look…

  314. PinkiePieFan says:

    woahh I just read PARTS of it, like, when she kills Rainbow, describing the room, AppleBloom, and, wellll Im surprised I LOVE Pinkie Pie still. but.. I admit, I feel, different. Not scared, but.. like.. I donno. haha

  315. PinkiePieFan says:

    OH my gooshhh Pinkie Pie ripped the cutie mark off my OC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! amazing.(I made my OC before this story. what a coincidence) Its the tree in her outfit. Nice outfit Pinkie Pie,

  316. Anonymous says:

    Well Kill Kat, I must say you are excellent at creating suspense and visual images to accompany it.I now feel the urge to vomit and cry, but that is my fault for reading it.Well done.

  317. Anonymous says:

    Okay, seriously, What the fuck did I just read….'Grimdark as fuck' is not a bluff…

  318. Anonymous says:

    @Anonymousneither i'm disturbed. there is no such a thing as a disturbing story. stories can't be disturbing.

  319. Anonymous says:

    The new alternate ending needs to be burned.

  320. Well… after I Spit on your Grave this was a walk in the park. Also the errors the author made made me laugh(sometimes I'm a grammartroll). Anyway was enough for one reading, and it didn't ruin anything cus come on it's simply a story, a really f*cked up story but still… Also some rule 34 pics are like dog's ears(saying in Hungary meaning something is really easy) compared to this.

  321. Dempsey23 says:

    Ok, so the story is fucked up, but I really liked the alternate end that Minalkra wrote. Love the Celestia is evil angle. Any chance of it being expanded? I don't mind grimdark, and it is nice to read something other than ship fics but it's maybe a little too far off track?

  322. Anonymous says:

    This story needs to be posted here just so people can get all the 'cupcakes' references that get made :P

  323. Anonymous says:

    This makes me want to slaughter pinkie pie in the worst way possible.

  324. Anonymous says:

    Higurashi meets MLP?

  325. Read/ Watched worse. If you thought this was bad, Don't even think about watching Higurashi

  326. Anonymous says:

    haven't had the shit scared out of me by reading something like this since "suicide squidward"

  327. Anonymous says:

    Really guy? No, bad Fan Fiction stereotype. 1 Star.

  328. Anonymous says:

    I'm afraid of cupcakes now

  329. Anonymous says:

    Does anyone know where the person who wrote that lives? I'd like to have a lil' chat with them…

  330. Anonymous says:

    One day I'll find you Kill Kat, and when I do, I'm gonna chop your head off with the trunk of your parent's car. The world is smaller than you think…

  331. Anonymous says:

    My god, there are some things that are not supposed to be written.It is odd, however that I spent that entire time thinking about how it was still medically possible to save Dash…

  332. Anonymous says:

    is it messed up that there's an ad for cupcake wrappers on my computer?

  333. Anonymous says:

    The one by Lucas. A giant "wat"?

  334. Lee says:

    I'm pretty sure everyone is exaggerating. No one can be this disturbed by a fanfiction so riddled with cliches and poor dialogue. C'mon, Bronies. If a fifteen-year-old girl can read this and yawn, I expect a little more from the grown men here.

  335. Anonymous says:

    Honestly, it wasn't that bad.

  336. Anonymous says:

    I pooped a little…

  337. Anonymous says:

    niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice…Good guro is good, and i love pinkie pie

  338. Anonymous says:

    niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice…Good guro is good, and i love pinkie pie

  339. Anonymous says:

    I've seen the worst gore, animal abuse, human torture, rape, balls cutting, and all kinds of paraphilias, and I have to say this made me cry like anything before.Plus, Rainbow Dash was my favourite pony.

  340. Anonymous says:

    Its weird…I wanted it to end…but now…I want to see moar o.e

  341. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousWell, That was mentally scarring. What an excellent choice for the first MLP fanfic I ever read.Curiosity + internet = OMFG the HORROR

  342. Anonymous says:

    Didn't actually find this quite as disgusting as I thought… maaybe if it was illustrated? xD

  343. Krystal says:

    This story is disturbing on so many levels…yet ironically..as a writer it spawned several story ideas of a similar aspect in my mind….>.>

  344. Krystal says:

    @LeeYou would be suprsised….for those who watch the TV show it can be very disturbing to see a loveable character go Hannibal lector….>.>For me this was VERy disturbing but as i said ironically as a writer it spawned serveral story ideas in my mind of a similar aspect…my imagination is gonna be the death of me..>.<

  345. Anonymous says:

    [GRIMDARK AS FUCK] is an understatement

  346. Echoed Wails says:

    I only came back to see Cartoonhottie's alt. ending. It was as cool as I thought it would be. Hitchcock's works need more ponies.

  347. Tarvoc says:

    The most disturbing thing on this page is the alternative ending written by Lucas. So the horrible suffering and death of a clone and the obvious mental illness of it's torturer don't really matter as long as friendship is preserved? Now that's really a sick twist to the show's own message…

  348. LoLZorzs says:

    Can't wait for another ''Memorable Attention Whore'' Story such as this one

  349. Mr. Brony says:

    WoW this is really old…February?! and it's even older than that?Hah back when everyone was listening to Giggle at the Ghosty and when the fandom was barely arising when the innocence of the show was still fresh

  350. Anonymous says:

    THE HORROR!! MAKE IT STOP! PLZ!Other than the drama I almost threw up while reading this one managed to hold it though, also "thanks" to my imagination I saw everything in my head, every disturbing detail word after word and my mind blew up at the part with the adrenaline injection to keep the subject concious. This story is soooo sick!!! ME WANTZ SEQUAL!!

  351. Anonymous says:

    So…I remember reading a version of this with more of a story built into Apple Bloom's cupcake making. What happened to that?

  352. Anonymous says:

    I loved it! But i was dissapointed not as scary as everyone told me it would be.

  353. I can deal with shit like this. I read "Day of the Barney" back in high school. And this is pretty weak sauce by comparison.The thing is, stuff like Barney deserves this kind of treatment because it's so aggressively sappy and shallow; the characters and setting barely deserve recognition as such, and they're free to be injected with subversive mischief like horrorshow fanfic. It's good for a belly laugh.Old-school MLP was more or less the same kind of thing; this would have worked in that context. But FiM is way too advanced beyond that level. It's rich on its own merits, with characters that are too well developed by now for something this outlandish to even pretend to ring true. We know what Pinkie Pie is really like. We know how Rainbow Dash would really react. This ain't it, no matter what silly writer tricks you pull.My innocence died when I read Day of the Barney; but FiM has brought it back to life. And a story like this doesn't stand a chance against it.

  354. Anonymous says:

    I love horror movies and creepypastas are the shit. I'm going in, and I will refuse to read the alternative ending. Here we go…

  355. Anonymous says:

    Are you people serious? That was NOT scary. You guys must have weak stomachs are something. You're gonna have to do A LOT worse to actually get a response from me. Hell I might write one myself.And we all know there's no way to horrify the reader than to turn everyone's favorite, shy, quiet, and animal-loving pony into a cold-blooded killer >:) *Puts on Mustache, Top Hat, and Cape*EVIL SPIKE LAUGH MUHAHAHAHAHA

  356. Anonymous says:

    Holy shit that was the most twisted, fucked up thing I've ever written. I'm gonna put the finishing touches on it, then see what happens.

  357. Sand Josieph says:

    Hehe…I wasn't surprised when a lot of people actually followed the link from my soundscape to the story. What surprised me, however, was that my video was most popular with girls 13-17.Yeah…wasn't expecting that…

  358. Anonymous says:

    Anypony have any idea how the Remix by Futret has anything to do with Cupcakes?

  359. Anonymous says:

    Can never be unread.

  360. Anonymous says:

    >opens original>sees grammar and spellingNOPE.>closes document

  361. Anonymous says:

    Yeah the Alterante ending by Cartoonhotty really made me feel better about all of this.

  362. Anonymous says:

    Fallout Equestria can be more violent than this.However Fallout Equestria is worth your time.

  363. Anonymous says:

    I'll probably be gutted myself for this comment but in some twisted way I kind of enjoyed it, reading RD being cut up.

  364. Anonymous says:

    Ruin Pinkie Pie? No. This story made Pinkie Pie for me.Surprised this is actually the most grimdark story there is, actually. I've read worse (just not in this fandom).

  365. Anonymous says:

    How… did I just read that and simultaneously produce an accurate cinema in my head complete with screams and disemboweling; as well as feeling the disgust in my own throat as I read on.

  366. Anonymous says:

    would you mind if i made a sequal to this? i have a good idea and would like to write it down, and i would like to know if its of by you to post it here on equestris daily.i would apreciate it if you left me a response with an answer. thank's. : )

  367. Anonymous says:

    @Anonymous You are insane for reading this as a first fan fic.Never read this.

  368. Anonymous says:

    This will really corrupt little girls tv ne pony (or more) at a time.

  369. Neoglitch says:

    Well, all I can say is:If you can stand watching "Happy Tree Friends", you will find that fic pretty amusing :DAlso… too many endings and too little time u.uThanks for sharing! :3

  370. Eddy says:

    There's a reason that this fic is so legendary. It's imagery is so exact and horrifying that at the end of it I was literally feeling a sort of nauseous faint coming on. I've read and seen quite a few gory things before but this somehow managed to effect me in a really serious way.I didn't look at Pinkie the same for a while. Especially for those eyes when they stare past the forth wall in a few episodes. They're haunting.

  371. Anonymous says:

    Why didn't I read the signs?Oh why oh why did I have to read it?

  372. Reading the [GRIMDARK AS FUCK] tag: lol! Oh-ho Sethistio, you're so funny some times. I mean, really, how bad could it be?Reading "Cupcakes": Ah…uh…why…eeee… *curls into ball and weeps for several hours*And I haven't even finished the original yet.

  373. Yahooeny says:

    Just read it for the first time…God guys, really? This is terrible.Just because this Pinkie has the same mannerisms as the Canon!Pinkie doesn't mean she's in character. And Rainbow Dash probably would've saved herself if she was COMPLETELY OUT OF CHARACTER.I got like, zero pain from this. Maybe it's because I've seen worse. Or maybe, it's because it just doesn't fit the characters. Pinkie probably would've said outright she was making cupcakes. She probably would've also been singing something. I could go on and on about this thing but… yeah it sucks. The RPing from a month back was more disturbing than this.

  374. Yahooeny says:

    Oh, and Pacce's alt ending doesn't make it any better!

  375. jaayro says:

    Just read it… My reaction?WHY

  376. Candystripe says:

    What the hell, I can take it. *clicks*._.*reads*O__Oe___.*keeps reading* @—@ x0x ;; *finishes* Verdict: It's depraved, it's sick, it's twisted, it's fucked up, it's horrific, it's all the appallingly gory things you've heard about it…AND YET…somehow I don't regret having read it. 'Twas quite interesting in its own disturbed way, and repeated readings sorta dull the initial shock…it's like, Sweeney Pie, except a hell of a lot crueler and more messed up.

  377. Anonymous says:

    Interesting read, for some reason I could see Pinkie Pie doing something like this >.>

  378. Anonymous says:

    Good Celestia, I only read the original, and Pinkie Pie was my favorite pony.Thing is, Pinkie Pie is still my favorite pony, now just to a different part of me, the part of me that enjoys kicking puppies and burning baby dolls. The part of me that I hope would never be associated with My Little Pony.I knew I should listened to my brony pals and not have read this. This IS why we can't have nice things.

  379. Anonymous says:

    Good Celestia, I only read the original, and Pinkie Pie was my favorite pony.Thing is, Pinkie Pie is still my favorite pony, now just to a different part of me, the part of me that enjoys kicking puppies and burning baby dolls. The part of me that I hope would never be associated with My Little Pony.I knew I should listened to my brony pals and not have read this. This IS why we can't have nice things.

  380. Anonymous says:

    Why do people always react like this? I thought it was cute how much she liked getting to spend such precious time with he friend.

  381. Anonymous says:

    Why do people always react like this? I thought it was cute how much she liked getting to spend such precious time with he friend.

  382. NekoLLX says:

    @Sethistoi actually do have coding knowledge, it's actually my profession.

  383. NekoLLX says:

    @Sethistoi actually do have coding knowledge, it's actually my profession.

  384. Anonymous says:

    I really liked the ending with the Princess. It should be continued.

  385. Anonymous says:

    I really liked the ending with the Princess. It should be continued.

  386. wonrei5 says:

    @AnonymousWow this story was amazing! I hope you make one with the other characters too!

  387. wonrei5 says:

    @AnonymousWow this story was amazing! I hope you make one with the other characters too!

  388. Anonymous says:

    LMAO this isn't even scary or anything. It's poorly written garbage and is incredibly OOC. How can anyone be scared of this? I didn't even cringe once.

  389. Anonymous says:

    LMAO this isn't even scary or anything. It's poorly written garbage and is incredibly OOC. How can anyone be scared of this? I didn't even cringe once.

  390. Anonymous says:

    MLP prevents people from suicide, this story encourages them for it.Everypony that says "BAWWW WHAT LITTLE WUSSIES!! THIS ISN'T BAD!!"either were too scared to concentrate on the story, or they've read it months ago, got over it and came back to play tough.

  391. Anonymous says:

    MLP prevents people from suicide, this story encourages them for it.Everypony that says "BAWWW WHAT LITTLE WUSSIES!! THIS ISN'T BAD!!"either were too scared to concentrate on the story, or they've read it months ago, got over it and came back to play tough.

  392. Tarvoc says:

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  393. Tarvoc says:

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  394. Tarvoc says:

    WeirdKevland27 has done a Cupcakes/Dexter crossover named Muffins, with Derpy Hooves as the stand-in for Dexter, and uploaded it on Deviant Art. It has a maturity filter though. Anyway, here is the link:http://weirdkevand27.deviantart.com/#/d3gdfdo

  395. Tarvoc says:

    WeirdKevland27 has done a Cupcakes/Dexter crossover named Muffins, with Derpy Hooves as the stand-in for Dexter, and uploaded it on Deviant Art. It has a maturity filter though. Anyway, here is the link:http://weirdkevand27.deviantart.com/#/d3gdfdo

  396. J4SH3R says:

    LOVE IT. gives tme that feeling when watching Saw or Hostel.

  397. J4SH3R says:

    LOVE IT. gives tme that feeling when watching Saw or Hostel.

  398. @http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/02/story-cupcakes.html?showComment=1307044642732#c983153863054583462 Aw thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it!

  399. @http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/02/story-cupcakes.html?showComment=1307044642732#c983153863054583462 Aw thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it!

  400. …Well. That was some oh-so-very-wrong, demented fun right there. *.* —> _._

  401. …Well. That was some oh-so-very-wrong, demented fun right there. *.* —> _._

  402. Anonymous says:

    @Anonymous read the first alternate ending. it makes the world very slightly brighter

  403. Anonymous says:

    @Anonymous read the first alternate ending. it makes the world very slightly brighter

  404. Anonymous says:

    Not nearly as bad as people make it out to be. :/

  405. Anonymous says:

    Not nearly as bad as people make it out to be. :/

  406. Anonymous says:

    I-IM GOING TO READ IT *SOB*IM SCARED ALREADY.

  407. Anonymous says:

    I-IM GOING TO READ IT *SOB*IM SCARED ALREADY.

  408. Anonymous says:

    Jesus Christ.Jesus FUCKING Christ.What really got me were the organ puns.Fuck.

  409. Anonymous says:

    Jesus Christ.Jesus FUCKING Christ.What really got me were the organ puns.Fuck.

  410. Anonymous says:

    That's it? That's "cupcakes"?!? I mean, I've read better…but I've read much worse. In fact, it's kinda laughable. all I can say is "Needs More Twilight Sparkle." XD

  411. Anonymous says:

    That's it? That's "cupcakes"?!? I mean, I've read better…but I've read much worse. In fact, it's kinda laughable. all I can say is "Needs More Twilight Sparkle." XD

  412. Kirby Dash says:

    Holy Chocolates… Rainbow Dash is my favorite and main pony pegasus of all time…no wonder my friend (who's a Pinkie Pie idolizer) told me not to read this…cuz it'll change my opinion of Pinkie Pie forever…

  413. Kirby Dash says:

    Holy Chocolates… Rainbow Dash is my favorite and main pony pegasus of all time…no wonder my friend (who's a Pinkie Pie idolizer) told me not to read this…cuz it'll change my opinion of Pinkie Pie forever…

  414. Anonymous says:

    i heard this song on doctor who. it fits pretty well for cupcakes too….the rhyme was unintentional.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OFKUnfwBPTU

  415. Anonymous says:

    i heard this song on doctor who. it fits pretty well for cupcakes too….the rhyme was unintentional.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OFKUnfwBPTU

  416. Anonymous says:

    that was fuuuuuunny! lol:) i loooobes u pinkeypie!!!1

  417. Anonymous says:

    that was fuuuuuunny! lol:) i loooobes u pinkeypie!!!1

  418. Anonymous says:

    Lawl guys it's not that bad, gruesome yes but it's not the real MLP.

  419. Anonymous says:

    Lawl guys it's not that bad, gruesome yes but it's not the real MLP.

  420. Anonymous says:

    Pinkie said every pony has a # on them. Does that include herself? Now that would be an interesting read.

  421. Anonymous says:

    Pinkie said every pony has a # on them. Does that include herself? Now that would be an interesting read.

  422. Chuckles says:

    Y'know, the reason why tons of people are disturbed by this story is because it's the first gory pony story. If I sat down and actually tried, I could write an even more disturbing one, but it wouldn't have the same impact because people already read this. Some people would probably think I was just taking ideas from it.

  423. Chuckles says:

    Y'know, the reason why tons of people are disturbed by this story is because it's the first gory pony story. If I sat down and actually tried, I could write an even more disturbing one, but it wouldn't have the same impact because people already read this. Some people would probably think I was just taking ideas from it.

  424. Roxor says:

    To everyone who was complaining about how disturbing this is: Grow up! This isn't disturbing, it's funny. More specifically, it's funny in the same sort of over-the-top morbid fashion as Happy Tree Friends.Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if the author's premise for this was "Happy Tree Friends meets My Little Pony". If that was the goal, they succeeded.Now, onto the subject of the endings.I have no problems with the original ending, although some of the alternate ones are quite good or present interesting ideas.The "All A Dream" ending does seem like the closest way an episode based on the story would play out.The "Twilight finds out" one is satisfying in the way the villain gets a Karmic Death.The "film set" one is probably the most original of the alternate endings.The "Fluttershy as a budding horror author" one is probably my favourite of the alternate endings, although I think the second half wasn't really necessary and could easily be left out. I'm not sure why, but the idea of Fluttershy writing horror actually works in some sort of strange way. Maybe it's from seeing her Sanity Slippage at the Gala?

  425. Roxor says:

    To everyone who was complaining about how disturbing this is: Grow up! This isn't disturbing, it's funny. More specifically, it's funny in the same sort of over-the-top morbid fashion as Happy Tree Friends.Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if the author's premise for this was "Happy Tree Friends meets My Little Pony". If that was the goal, they succeeded.Now, onto the subject of the endings.I have no problems with the original ending, although some of the alternate ones are quite good or present interesting ideas.The "All A Dream" ending does seem like the closest way an episode based on the story would play out.The "Twilight finds out" one is satisfying in the way the villain gets a Karmic Death.The "film set" one is probably the most original of the alternate endings.The "Fluttershy as a budding horror author" one is probably my favourite of the alternate endings, although I think the second half wasn't really necessary and could easily be left out. I'm not sure why, but the idea of Fluttershy writing horror actually works in some sort of strange way. Maybe it's from seeing her Sanity Slippage at the Gala?

  426. Anonymous says:

    I don't see what the big Twilight let's-flame-until-death-because-I-hate-it-so-much is; I like it. It'd make me crap my pants if it was with actors, yes, but since I was born in animation, I've been able to visualize and tolerate almost everything that could happen. That, and I'm not afraid of anything.I see no need for criticism unless it's constructive and/or someone asked for your opinion.

  427. Anonymous says:

    I don't see what the big Twilight let's-flame-until-death-because-I-hate-it-so-much is; I like it. It'd make me crap my pants if it was with actors, yes, but since I was born in animation, I've been able to visualize and tolerate almost everything that could happen. That, and I'm not afraid of anything.I see no need for criticism unless it's constructive and/or someone asked for your opinion.

  428. RainbowSass says:

    I KNEW IT.Only somepony with an evil side the size of Russia could be so perpetually peppy and cheerful!!! .0.

  429. RainbowSass says:

    I KNEW IT.Only somepony with an evil side the size of Russia could be so perpetually peppy and cheerful!!! .0.

  430. Anonymous says:

    The creepy part is I'm not creeped out by this.

  431. Anonymous says:

    The creepy part is I'm not creeped out by this.

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  436. Grimwing says:

    I kind of wish I had listened to the warnings. But somehow I'm not scarred for life. I think it was the alternate ending by Pacce that really made it better. I can't thank him/her enough.

  437. Grimwing says:

    I kind of wish I had listened to the warnings. But somehow I'm not scarred for life. I think it was the alternate ending by Pacce that really made it better. I can't thank him/her enough.

  438. Anonymous says:

    A lot of people say that the worst part of this story is that Pinkie Pie is really Pinkie Pie, plus a serial killer way of thinking. I think that the worst part is that Rainbow Dash is really Rainbow Dash, and she is being ripped apart and killed.

  439. Anonymous says:

    A lot of people say that the worst part of this story is that Pinkie Pie is really Pinkie Pie, plus a serial killer way of thinking. I think that the worst part is that Rainbow Dash is really Rainbow Dash, and she is being ripped apart and killed.

  440. Anonymous says:

    I'll block this out of my memory. Never eat a cupcake to be reminded of this. Isn't that bad.FOREVER

  441. Anonymous says:

    I'll block this out of my memory. Never eat a cupcake to be reminded of this. Isn't that bad.FOREVER

  442. Lordlyhour says:

    I do not understand why this is considered so bad. Its fairly poorly written, fails to make me feel even slightly creeped out and seems to just be written for shock value's sake. Rather like most modern horrors Less ARGH! its scary than ARGH! something unexpected happened. The writer's heart was not in it. B+ mark at most-Lordlyhour

  443. Lordlyhour says:

    I do not understand why this is considered so bad. Its fairly poorly written, fails to make me feel even slightly creeped out and seems to just be written for shock value's sake. Rather like most modern horrors Less ARGH! its scary than ARGH! something unexpected happened. The writer's heart was not in it. B+ mark at most-Lordlyhour

  444. Ten Mihara says:

    Cupcakes: Taste the Rainbow!

  445. Ten Mihara says:

    Cupcakes: Taste the Rainbow!

  446. Anonymous says:

    The story is pretty much just shock value movie stuff, things like Saw or Hostel. At least the second version (only one I read) paces well as a good story structure. Content is still kind of so-so.Alternate endings. Cartoon Hottie had the best one of all, it felt true to the story and the show, plus little nod to Alfred Hitchcock in there made me smile. Minalkra gets second place for making up a good ending that fit within the story and gave it some sort of meaning. The rest didn't really strike me.

  447. Anonymous says:

    The story is pretty much just shock value movie stuff, things like Saw or Hostel. At least the second version (only one I read) paces well as a good story structure. Content is still kind of so-so.Alternate endings. Cartoon Hottie had the best one of all, it felt true to the story and the show, plus little nod to Alfred Hitchcock in there made me smile. Minalkra gets second place for making up a good ending that fit within the story and gave it some sort of meaning. The rest didn't really strike me.

  448. Anonymous says:

    Oh yeah, almost forgot in my little analysis of this "so-so" story, those jokes she was making with the organ puns were cracking me up. I don't care how dark it is, that was pretty clever.

  449. Anonymous says:

    Oh yeah, almost forgot in my little analysis of this "so-so" story, those jokes she was making with the organ puns were cracking me up. I don't care how dark it is, that was pretty clever.

  450. Anonymous says:

    Honestly, I laughed my ass off a bit. Yes, it was nasty, but it was all one big joke to me.

  451. Anonymous says:

    Honestly, I laughed my ass off a bit. Yes, it was nasty, but it was all one big joke to me.

  452. Anonymous says:

    I can't say I'm impressed by this.It's almost like something got lost along the way and it ended up being too overdone to be taken seriously. It doesn't have the cringe-inducing factor I was expecting. Huh.

  453. Anonymous says:

    I can't say I'm impressed by this.It's almost like something got lost along the way and it ended up being too overdone to be taken seriously. It doesn't have the cringe-inducing factor I was expecting. Huh.

  454. Anonymous says:

    Messed up. But at least I know what the dramas were all about now.

  455. Anonymous says:

    Messed up. But at least I know what the dramas were all about now.

  456. Harakou says:

    I've been trying to just get this over with, but every time I open it up I just can't bring myself to read it.

  457. Harakou says:

    I've been trying to just get this over with, but every time I open it up I just can't bring myself to read it.

  458. I see no problems with this. Really. I mean it's bad in a sense that she's going around killing. But that's the problem with the story. It doesn't pull me in as much as it would need to in order to creep me out. I have no clue why she's killing and I'm not sure Pinkie knows either. Reading all the alternate endings still didn't do much for me either. Most of them either ended happily, random, or alluded to but are still one-offs. I was really expecting much worse.

  459. I see no problems with this. Really. I mean it's bad in a sense that she's going around killing. But that's the problem with the story. It doesn't pull me in as much as it would need to in order to creep me out. I have no clue why she's killing and I'm not sure Pinkie knows either. Reading all the alternate endings still didn't do much for me either. Most of them either ended happily, random, or alluded to but are still one-offs. I was really expecting much worse.

  460. Anonymous says:

    Its quite fun to read with this playing when Rainbow Dash wakes up. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uYxfI2Hj7_0&feature=related

  461. Anonymous says:

    Its quite fun to read with this playing when Rainbow Dash wakes up. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uYxfI2Hj7_0&feature=related

  462. mesha says:

    I was thinking "What's next? what's next?" while reading it, guess fanfics can be fun too.

  463. mesha says:

    I was thinking "What's next? what's next?" while reading it, guess fanfics can be fun too.

  464. Anonymous says:

    When I first started reading this I was "This isn't as bad as I've read before." But as I read on, the realization that this was a part of the universe of My Little Pony slowly but surely shattered my very soul.

  465. Anonymous says:

    When I first started reading this I was "This isn't as bad as I've read before." But as I read on, the realization that this was a part of the universe of My Little Pony slowly but surely shattered my very soul.

  466. Nulono says:

    Gah, is that Times New Roman? Why not use a sensibly sans-serif font, like Arial?

  467. Nulono says:

    Gah, is that Times New Roman? Why not use a sensibly sans-serif font, like Arial?

  468. Anonymous says:

    Dr. WTF's ending is hilarious.

  469. Anonymous says:

    Dr. WTF's ending is hilarious.

  470. Anonymous says:

    I love this story so much!

  471. Anonymous says:

    I love this story so much!

  472. wolf1234link says:

    The most disturbing thing to me was the fact that I felt no emotions except some slight nausea. I have to say: Read some fucking Stephen king books or H. P. Lovecraft books this shit ain't scary compared to Stuff by Stephen king! All in all i still won't look at pinkie the same way though I'll probably admire her more cause that shit was hawt. i read # 2 and muffins neither of them that bad

  473. wolf1234link says:

    The most disturbing thing to me was the fact that I felt no emotions except some slight nausea. I have to say: Read some fucking Stephen king books or H. P. Lovecraft books this shit ain't scary compared to Stuff by Stephen king! All in all i still won't look at pinkie the same way though I'll probably admire her more cause that shit was hawt. i read # 2 and muffins neither of them that bad

  474. Anonymous says:

    Ugh… PinkiePie was ruined by this piece of crap.Not to be a troll or attacked by the waaaammmbulance, but i'd appreciate it if this story was banned. Please, there is no need for it.

  475. Anonymous says:

    This… just creeped me out.

  476. Anonymous says:

    This… just creeped me out.

  477. Anonymous says:

    roflmaoshe wetter herself twice… wow >.<

  478. Anonymous says:

    roflmaoshe wetter herself twice… wow >.<

  479. Anonymous says:

    What happened to the story including Apple Bloom?!

  480. Anonymous says:

    What happened to the story including Apple Bloom?!

  481. Anonymous says:

    nice take on the hannible lector storyit like a pony version of silence of the lambs

  482. Anonymous says:

    nice take on the hannible lector storyit like a pony version of silence of the lambs

  483. Anonymous says:

    Too much Happy Tree Friends in this single submission. Most Was taken from Flippy goring out others.

  484. Anonymous says:

    Too much Happy Tree Friends in this single submission. Most Was taken from Flippy goring out others.

  485. It was good, even if messed up and disturbing, well written, and delivered to its genre. The first character I see in the Second season of FiM had better be Rainbow Dash or i am going to flip the fuck out. But still, I kind of enjoyed it in a sick, twisted way.

  486. It was good, even if messed up and disturbing, well written, and delivered to its genre. The first character I see in the Second season of FiM had better be Rainbow Dash or i am going to flip the fuck out. But still, I kind of enjoyed it in a sick, twisted way.

  487. Neon says:

    Whoa. Didn't see that one coming. I'll tell yah, never looking at Pinkie Pie the same way EVER again. Yet again, this makes her 10x more awesome.Well…20% cooler rather I say.

  488. Neon says:

    Whoa. Didn't see that one coming. I'll tell yah, never looking at Pinkie Pie the same way EVER again. Yet again, this makes her 10x more awesome.Well…20% cooler rather I say.

  489. Anonymous says:

    to all the people who read this and became scared of this:YOU IDIOTS!it warned you and yet you read on!you could have turned back and yet you read on taking in every little detail of gore!so if you havent read this and your reading this comment FINAL WARNING!

  490. Anonymous says:

    to all the people who read this and became scared of this:YOU IDIOTS!it warned you and yet you read on!you could have turned back and yet you read on taking in every little detail of gore!so if you havent read this and your reading this comment FINAL WARNING!

  491. Anonymous says:

    I found the thing fairly uninteresting. The language was that of an 8 year old, and judging by their poor lexicon and lack of proper understanding in fields such as sentence structure, rhetorical devices and most of all grammar, I'd have to say that the author probably does not excel in english.

  492. Anonymous says:

    I found the thing fairly uninteresting. The language was that of an 8 year old, and judging by their poor lexicon and lack of proper understanding in fields such as sentence structure, rhetorical devices and most of all grammar, I'd have to say that the author probably does not excel in english.

  493. Edinpony says:

    @NulonoWhen I grabbed the text from the original Google doc to edit I put in Word 2010, which set it to the default Calibri font. However, when I uploaded it to Google Docs, the whole thing converted to Times New Roman for no apparent reason, and I didn't notice until much later.

  494. Edinpony says:

    @NulonoWhen I grabbed the text from the original Google doc to edit I put in Word 2010, which set it to the default Calibri font. However, when I uploaded it to Google Docs, the whole thing converted to Times New Roman for no apparent reason, and I didn't notice until much later.

  495. Anonymous says:

    I have to admit. I must be demented and/or screwed in the head, but I may have been the only one who THOROUGHLY enjoyed this! As a matter of fact, THIS is the story that got me hooked on FiM, and set Pinkie Pie as my Gold Standard pony! Sure, I love her fun-loving, energetic party-throwing side, but there's something about her sick, twisted, pony-eating side that I just ADORE! I'm not evil-hearted in the least, but this fic is one of my favorites and it never fails to deliver chills down my spine and smiles to my face!

  496. Anonymous says:

    I have to admit. I must be demented and/or screwed in the head, but I may have been the only one who THOROUGHLY enjoyed this! As a matter of fact, THIS is the story that got me hooked on FiM, and set Pinkie Pie as my Gold Standard pony! Sure, I love her fun-loving, energetic party-throwing side, but there's something about her sick, twisted, pony-eating side that I just ADORE! I'm not evil-hearted in the least, but this fic is one of my favorites and it never fails to deliver chills down my spine and smiles to my face!

  497. Anonymous says:

    I didn't like how more than grammer was changed in 2.0 (for example the apple bloom scene was cut). also hated some of the alternet endings.

  498. Anonymous says:

    I didn't like how more than grammer was changed in 2.0 (for example the apple bloom scene was cut). also hated some of the alternet endings.

  499. Anonymous says:

    by comment's i tough it would be worst

  500. Anonymous says:

    So, after hearing so much about it, I finally decided to read Cupcakes. I'm actually trembling a little, which is very unheard of for me, as I don't scare easily. Moreover, I do feel as though I could vomit. I nearly did several times whilst reading. This story is ridiculously horrifying in every sense of the word. I can assure I will have nightmares, because the author made a point to be so eloquent and precise in their articulation that even though I didn't see any actual images, the scenes of Dash's demise will haunt me for a very long time. Having read the story, I feel the best way to describe my current state is "delightfully terrified." This is easily the most gruesome thing I've ever read, pony or no.

  501. Anonymous says:

    So, after hearing so much about it, I finally decided to read Cupcakes. I'm actually trembling a little, which is very unheard of for me, as I don't scare easily. Moreover, I do feel as though I could vomit. I nearly did several times whilst reading. This story is ridiculously horrifying in every sense of the word. I can assure I will have nightmares, because the author made a point to be so eloquent and precise in their articulation that even though I didn't see any actual images, the scenes of Dash's demise will haunt me for a very long time. Having read the story, I feel the best way to describe my current state is "delightfully terrified." This is easily the most gruesome thing I've ever read, pony or no.

  502. Edinpony says:

    @AnonymousWhen I first read Cupcakes, it was in the form of a series of screenshots posted on 4chan of what I assumed was the original post, and the screenshots did not include the Applebloom ending. Either it wasn't part of Sergent Sprinkle's original story or whoever posted those screenshots removed it themselves. Whatever the case, when I saw that ending on Evil Darkass's upload here I just treated it as yet another alternate ending, and since I thought it was a somewhat jarring transition that detracted from the impact of the main Rainbow Dash story anyway I left it out of the edited version.Beyond that I tried to stay as close to the original as possible; I fixed a large number of spelling and grammar issues and made a small number of additions to some of the descriptive sections to try to help paint a clearer picture in the reader's mind of exactly what was happening for maximum effect. I tried to make my version the editing Sergent Sprinkles never got around to without changing the structure, dialog, and story at all.At any rate, I'm sorry you didn't like my edits. Since most people tend to read either version once and swear never to touch the story again I haven't got much feedback on the differences, but I hope I have been able to improve most people's Cupcakes reading experience without altering the impact of the story.

  503. Edinpony says:

    @AnonymousWhen I first read Cupcakes, it was in the form of a series of screenshots posted on 4chan of what I assumed was the original post, and the screenshots did not include the Applebloom ending. Either it wasn't part of Sergent Sprinkle's original story or whoever posted those screenshots removed it themselves. Whatever the case, when I saw that ending on Evil Darkass's upload here I just treated it as yet another alternate ending, and since I thought it was a somewhat jarring transition that detracted from the impact of the main Rainbow Dash story anyway I left it out of the edited version.Beyond that I tried to stay as close to the original as possible; I fixed a large number of spelling and grammar issues and made a small number of additions to some of the descriptive sections to try to help paint a clearer picture in the reader's mind of exactly what was happening for maximum effect. I tried to make my version the editing Sergent Sprinkles never got around to without changing the structure, dialog, and story at all.At any rate, I'm sorry you didn't like my edits. Since most people tend to read either version once and swear never to touch the story again I haven't got much feedback on the differences, but I hope I have been able to improve most people's Cupcakes reading experience without altering the impact of the story.

  504. Anonymous says:

    Dude, get help. Seriously get help.

  505. Anonymous says:

    Dude, get help. Seriously get help.

  506. exakr says:

    All I can say is…Whoever wrote this must be thrown into a mental asylum immediately.

  507. exakr says:

    All I can say is…Whoever wrote this must be thrown into a mental asylum immediately.

  508. Anonymous says:

    I fapped while reading and eating raw pork chopLIKEABOSS.JPG

  509. Anonymous says:

    I fapped while reading and eating raw pork chopLIKEABOSS.JPG

  510. Ben says:

    Err, that was… I have no words for that. I was waiting the entire time for the Pony Bureau of Investigation to break the door in and shoot Pinkie in the face with a shotgun… No such thing happened… :(

  511. Ben says:

    Err, that was… I have no words for that. I was waiting the entire time for the Pony Bureau of Investigation to break the door in and shoot Pinkie in the face with a shotgun… No such thing happened… :(

  512. Emily Lorenz says:

    I shall have nightmares… ;n;

  513. Emily Lorenz says:

    I shall have nightmares… ;n;

  514. T'was a fun read. Each ending, the side story and the sequel. We need somepony to carry this on with an escaped Pinkie Pie

  515. T'was a fun read. Each ending, the side story and the sequel. We need somepony to carry this on with an escaped Pinkie Pie

  516. Anonymous says:

    I am very entertained. Could have used more detail though. I laughed.

  517. Anonymous says:

    I am very entertained. Could have used more detail though. I laughed.

  518. Anonymous says:

    Oh god… this shit is just… horrible. How can anyone stand this… i think i'm going to puke now

  519. Anonymous says:

    Oh god… this shit is just… horrible. How can anyone stand this… i think i'm going to puke now

  520. Oh god, what have I just done.

  521. Oh god, what have I just done.

  522. Anonymous says:

    I though this story was disgusting. Im just happy it didnt ruin Pinkie Pie for me.

  523. Anonymous says:

    I though this story was disgusting. Im just happy it didnt ruin Pinkie Pie for me.

  524. This is great!! Do you mind if I post it on my blog? 100% credit to you of course.

  525. This is great!! Do you mind if I post it on my blog? 100% credit to you of course.

  526. Anonymous says:

    I guarantee if you were to use fluttershy instead of rainbow dash it would be 20% more horrible. (actually like over 9000%)

  527. Anonymous says:

    I guarantee if you were to use fluttershy instead of rainbow dash it would be 20% more horrible. (actually like over 9000%)

  528. Anonymous says:

    So why is pinkie a mass murderer?

  529. Anonymous says:

    So why is pinkie a mass murderer?

  530. Anonymous says:

    How can people read the alternative ending and then suddenly get healed? It's like mum and dad telling you as a kid that Santa isn't real, and when you start crying they quickly tell you it's a joke or make up a story to correct their gruesome mistake. I read all alternative endings and not one helped me in the slightest way.They are weak after thoughts to something that has done too much damage.Took me days to recover for I've sworn to turn my back on MLP forever. And I only just joined FFS.

  531. Anonymous says:

    How can people read the alternative ending and then suddenly get healed? It's like mum and dad telling you as a kid that Santa isn't real, and when you start crying they quickly tell you it's a joke or make up a story to correct their gruesome mistake. I read all alternative endings and not one helped me in the slightest way.They are weak after thoughts to something that has done too much damage.Took me days to recover for I've sworn to turn my back on MLP forever. And I only just joined FFS.

  532. Anonymous says:

    I'm I the only one who thinks that in the picture of Pinkie she just took her grandma's quilt and said "Fuck it I'm gonna sew some stuffed toy wings and a gay pride collar on this so I can ware it around." And that face it doesn't look like an I'M GONNA KILL YOU! face. But an I'M GONNA RAPE YOU! face. Well to me it dose anyways.

  533. Anonymous says:

    I'm I the only one who thinks that in the picture of Pinkie she just took her grandma's quilt and said "Fuck it I'm gonna sew some stuffed toy wings and a gay pride collar on this so I can ware it around." And that face it doesn't look like an I'M GONNA KILL YOU! face. But an I'M GONNA RAPE YOU! face. Well to me it dose anyways.

  534. Anonymous says:

    My life is over for me….I will never eat Cupcakes or watch Pinkie Pie or listen to Pinkie Pie's Cupcake song WITHOUT THROWING UP EVER AGAIN!

  535. Anonymous says:

    My life is over for me….I will never eat Cupcakes or watch Pinkie Pie or listen to Pinkie Pie's Cupcake song WITHOUT THROWING UP EVER AGAIN!

  536. Well it did make my stomach churn a little it was a little overly hyped…Im a more recent brony and this almost ruined it all for me…almost…so who wants some cupcakes?

  537. Well it did make my stomach churn a little it was a little overly hyped…Im a more recent brony and this almost ruined it all for me…almost…so who wants some cupcakes?

  538. Casket Dan says:

    Not usually a pony that goes for this…but I liked it. I felt the characterization spot on for Pinkie, though slacked a fair bit for Dash. Now I finally understand where "Full Cupcakes" has come from, and now I can sleep easy at night.I love you internet. I love you brutal obscenity and your shock value. I love you ponies and your unfathomable cuteness and adorableness even in the face of shrieking mortal agony. I love you, Sergeant Sprinkles: World's Greatest Party Clown, for penning this. I love the last bit, too, with Applebloom.*brohoof*

  539. Casket Dan says:

    Not usually a pony that goes for this…but I liked it. I felt the characterization spot on for Pinkie, though slacked a fair bit for Dash. Now I finally understand where "Full Cupcakes" has come from, and now I can sleep easy at night.I love you internet. I love you brutal obscenity and your shock value. I love you ponies and your unfathomable cuteness and adorableness even in the face of shrieking mortal agony. I love you, Sergeant Sprinkles: World's Greatest Party Clown, for penning this. I love the last bit, too, with Applebloom.*brohoof*

  540. Cupcakes 2. Even more awesome.

  541. Cupcakes 2. Even more awesome.

  542. Anonymous says:

    My heart actually ached when Pinkie Pie was tormenting Rainbow Dash.-Retch-

  543. Anonymous says:

    My heart actually ached when Pinkie Pie was tormenting Rainbow Dash.-Retch-

  544. Anonymous says:

    What the tuck did I just read? Sorry for the bad words that I use but what the hell is this shit? I know people that make jokes about this kind of stuff but this was fucking messed up in so many ways. There are no words on earth that can say how screwed up this is. Now I'm going to go hide in my room and cry my self into a state of emptiness. I never want to read anything like this ever again. And muffins is going to make me crap my self if its any thing like this.

  545. Anonymous says:

    What the tuck did I just read? Sorry for the bad words that I use but what the hell is this shit? I know people that make jokes about this kind of stuff but this was fucking messed up in so many ways. There are no words on earth that can say how screwed up this is. Now I'm going to go hide in my room and cry my self into a state of emptiness. I never want to read anything like this ever again. And muffins is going to make me crap my self if its any thing like this.

  546. Anonymous says:

    Am I the only one that thought it was kinda hilarious?Like a bad horror movie.

  547. Anonymous says:

    Am I the only one that thought it was kinda hilarious?Like a bad horror movie.

  548. This fic was nuttier than candy bar shit, I'll give you that.

  549. This fic was nuttier than candy bar shit, I'll give you that.

  550. Anonymous says:

    *shivers terribly* I'm shivering like AppleJack in the Zecora episode now.

  551. Anonymous says:

    *shivers terribly* I'm shivering like AppleJack in the Zecora episode now.

  552. rangergx9 says:

    That was awesome….. :D

  553. Anonymous says:

    As disturbing and disgusting as that was, it wasn't written badly, which is something I would expect of this type of story. It actually was written quite well, a little short if you ask me.

  554. Kilala says:

    Chocovul7:So THAT'S the Cupcakes story foals were telling me about! Wow, this suuuure takes the cake on the "GRINDARK AS FUCK" part. I kinda saw something like this coming a mile away though, through all that cute enthusiasm I did see a psychotic side to Pinkie the entire time.Pretty fitting for her to sound like her usual self while she does such gruesome work to ol' Dashy's demise, with the silly puns and light scolding and whatnot. It almost took my mind of the lost of appetite for any treats after a while…almost. Oh, and the ending was JUST the cherry on top! (Unfortunately I was too lasy to read the alternates, but this is bookmarked so screw it!)Pretty sick read, interesting but mostly sick. Chao!

  555. Anonymous says:

    Wow just finished it and yeah that was F**king wrong on so many levels. Yet I was still intrigued by it man, such a crazy story. Now we know not to mess with Pinkie Pie and of all ponies Apple Bloom.

  556. Tabbz says:

    Whoever wrote this is severely disturbed. The fact that they had these images in their head just makes me afraid for anyone who lives around them. Seriously. This is in the Ed Gein category of Fuckedness.

  557. Anonymous says:

    Needs a video to go with it.And it needs to be fluttershy that gets slaughtered. That would be SO much disturbing.It also needs to have WAY more torture in it. How about putting Rainbow's intestines around a giant spool, winding them up, and lighting them on fire still connected to her stomach as Fluttershy watches them burn. Now THAT would be seriously bad. I was also disappointed that that she did not light her mane/tail on fire. That would have been cool.Once again, it TOTALLY should have been Fluttershy who got killed. Her personality would make it all that more innocent and fun to voilate.

  558. Anonymous says:

    i think im going to be sick…

  559. Olawd when I read this… Just…It was great… gruesome… I loved it!

  560. tylor.toby says:

    it's not so bad the second time reading it. But damn, that was "something".

  561. Anonymous says:

    And now we know what happens when Ponies play with a Lament Configuration (the puzzle box from Hellraiser).

  562. Klutzybear says:

    I don't know about anyone else, but when I was getting started in this "My Little Pony" thing. I was searching through some old fanfics, generally enjoying myself and laughing at the interesting ideas that people made up.But through it all, my favorite character on the show was (and still is) Pinkie Pie. She was funny, random, and always laughing. She brought a smile to my face, just like she was born to do. Then I kept hearing about "Cupcakes" and how horriable it was and how it destroyed peoples image of Pinkie Pie FOR-EVERRRR!!!So I finally decided to pony-the-fuck-up and went for it.It all started off okay, and I just smiled expecting nothing important. . . .Then shit hit the fan. I had to turn on the lights just to keep reading through it. I unconciously had my hand over my mouth and forced myself to read right to the VERY end. Where it all ended on a sour note.For the next four days, my image of Pinkie Pie was "shattered" and I found myself relunctantly pulling away from her and even cringing when I went back to see her on youtube. That's how disturbingly bad this story got to me. But as much as I hated it, it was written quite wonderfully. I couldn't help but curse the writer for this thing and wondered why they didn't put that effort into making a happier or friendlier story? Who would ever imagine making one of the happiest, nicest characters on the show, as a complete psycho-path? Someone with problems, that's who. Still. . . After the fourth day, I went back to try to get over my fear by going through nicer fanfics that I liked. But I was surprised when I discovered the ALT. endings to Cupcakes. I think THESE were the main reason why I generally got over my initial rejection to Pinkie Pie, especially the "excuse" one that I won't spoil. Though. . . One of them does kinda come from left-field and leves me confused. Anyways. I've rambled on enough. The only thing I've learned from this is that CUPCAKES has earned its title as a LEGENDARY fanfic. Especially if it can leave an impression like that on me.

  563. Poker Face says:

    I loved this. C: Like seriously, Pinkie Pie makes everything happy. XD

  564. Anonymous says:

    I'll admit it.I was scared as fuck before I even started reading due to all that I heard about it.Then,for whatever reason,I started imagining that Pinkie Pie's voice was replaced by Heath Ledger's Joker.Whether it was because I was reading this after literally having stayed up for an entire night,up till 8 or so AM,or some other profound reason,that action actually made this entire story laughable.Still though,I do admit that was some pretty insane gore,but I managed to use how mortifying it was to steel myself when I read future tales such as this one.

  565. Anonymous says:

    @hikuroyou pussy… -_-this was amazing!!

  566. Anonymous says:

    Bwhahaha!! This is so stupid it's funny!

  567. Anonymous says:

    First time of reading: Poor dash *shedding some tears*Second time: Aah! What a therapeutic experience after spending three years in school with all those terrible people who left me alone and ignored me nearly all the time! Nobody defended me against the bullies.I really recommend this for the people who have suffered injustice. Imagine yourself as Pinkie Pie and your enemies (bullies, traitors…) as RD.

  568. Typhus_7 says:

    I read this and then decided to show this to a friend of mine who dislikes My Little Pony and he had this to say:"well, i must say, it was excellently writtenpretty good horror story actually"I've gotta agree with him. Reminds me of Sweeney Todd.

  569. Anonymous says:

    one of my friends calls me pinkie piei got him to read thisi asked him if he wanted to make cupcakes

  570. is is just me or has anyone noticed that in the pic she has derpy's wings

  571. Anonymous says:

    Curse all you people who post everywhere not to read this fanfic, it's like constantly reminding people of the big red button in front of them that they shouldn't push. The movie ending made it worth the read though, it's a bit too gory for me as is (Ok, waaay too gory).

  572. Anonymous says:

    Тупой рассказ!

  573. Anonymous says:

    And this is why I love Pinkie Pie :3Anyone want a cupcake?

  574. Anonymous says:

    Few comments:1. This is a GREAT read for everyone who is sick of annoying Rainbow Dash fans.2. The Rainbow Dash fans who rage over this are almost as funny as fail trolls. It's a fanfic. Get over it.3. I love how everyone is asking "What the fuck did I just read?" and saying it sucks (Probably because annoying Rainbow Dash fans). No one forced you to read it; you should've stopped after the first bloody moment.4. I agree with what someone else said; this is even better if you imagine yourself as Pinkie Pie and someone who you hate as Rainbow Dash.5. Great fanfiction! Very gory and different. I like it :3

  575. Anonymous says:

    I laughed. Does that make me a bad person? I truthfully don't see what the big deal is about. I've spent just as much time as the next guy watching the show/reading fanfics etc, and this isn't really bad. Hmm :\

  576. Anonymous says:

    @setheso really??? im 9 YEARS OLD and i read this fanfic and it was soo not scary really, i was expecting more like pinkie pie EATING rainbow dash really THAT is a scary thought

  577. Anonymous says:

    I think this just made Pinkie Pie 20% cooler now that i read this. No but seriously this didnt really get to me i mean even with the gore, splayed out pony bits, etc… But even with all of that i thought this was great it kinda made me happy sorta. But if you look this kinda reminds me of Hannibal Lecter and a few others. No im not a metal head or anything like that im just…how you say not to happy all the time but optimistic there we go that'll work. Oh you should really read this with soem really scary/creepy music it might help ;3

  578. Anonymous says:

    So, I haven't read it, but I came here from TV Tropes so I know enough about it to say this. I don't think I could do this justice, but I thought I might toss it out there to see if another bronie might give this idea a spin. An alternate ending where the Pinkie Pie of this story is a split personality of the real Pinkie Pie, possibly as the result of a curse instead of being actually crazy (Though I guess you can change that if you want). Pinkie Pie never remembers anything about these "parties" or the events leading up to one and has been sorta in denial over the gaps in her memory and other indications that something is seriously wrong until Gilda's "disappearance" forces her to realize she can't ignore it anymore. She goes to Twilight Sparkle for help, but Twilight figures it out too late to prevent Dash from being Pony-napped and has to rush to the rescue.I just figure it'd be more interesting like this than if she really was just crazy with no explanation, plus it gives a chance for an ending where it's not just a dream, but Dash is saved AND Pinkie is saved from herself, though it's not a totally happy ending since there's still the fallout of it all to deal with. What do you guys think?

  579. Dawn says:

    I have to say that this is my favorite fiction of all time! It gave me and continues to give me nightmares, made Pinkie 20% cooler and also made me watch MLP:FiM in the first place.Fun fact: the costume Pinkie Pie is wearing is amazing! you can't see its awesomeness as long as Pinkie stands on all four. Imagine her standing on her rear hooves, what do you see?

  580. colin23567 says:

    someone hold me >.>not Pinkamena

  581. Anonymous says:

    This is now a permanent emotional scar I'll never forget… damn you, Pinky… damn you!!

  582. Anonymous says:

    Well that wasn't really so bad, but now I'm feeling oddly hungry…

  583. Fenix says:

    So I read through most of it. I was disturbed by it, but that's only because I enjoy the characters. My body was having none of it though. I felt physically ill with light-headedness, light nausea and whited-out vision. I didn't even realize it was happening when I was reading it, I just suddenly felt awful. Even though I read 'Grimdark' stories all the time, I think what did it was the pointless gore, and being able to feel what Rainbow Dash felt. It wasn't that long of a feeling, and it hasn't ruined Pinkie Pie's character for me.The grammar and some wording of what I read had much to be desired, but I could feel what was happening to Rainbow Dash from the description. That in itself probably makes up for most of the other mistakes. I'm sure the rest of it is fine, but I can't finish it, though I did skim the rest. I must have missed the explanation on why Pinkie was doing this though.There's a reason that this is so legendary in this fandom. It's a good thing I already know the characters so well, or else this may have influenced my perception of the characters.It was alright. It won't stay with me throughout my day, but I know where the limit is and how much I can stomach. 4/5 stars for shock value alone.

  584. Anonymous says:

    you know, compared to all the bullshit horror movies most people watch and eat up, this was NOT very gory. i mean, most horror movies shit these days that you people watch are WORSE than this. all the sex and guts and blood everywhere. at least THIS is amazingly written. (and has a storyline, may i add?)anyway, great fanfiction. <3

  585. Anonymous says:

    It's not really that bad. Then again, words don't really affect me.

  586. Lady Luna says:

    Not really scary or bad or anything. Just !@#$ing GROSS

  587. I really wanted to hate this story, but I just couldn't. It's more fucked up than anything I've ever read before, but it's soooo well done.

  588. Anonymous says:

    This isn't really that bad. Then again; you're looking at the person who's read Mai-chan's daily life and schoolgirl in concrete.

  589. Blur says:

    Not going to read.

  590. Fenix says:

    @FenixSo after work I decided to go with my morbid curiosity and finish the story. Honestly, I laughed. The whole thing was pretty ridiculous, and I was able to breeze through it once the shock value was gone. Is it grimdark? Yes. Is it a good grimdark story? No. It's just a gore fic, but I guess that's what the author wanted. Who am I to complain.I don't consider my body's visceral reaction to be my final call. Mentally I was fine throughout, so I believe I have beaten Cupcakes, so to say.Interesting interpretation though. I laughed quite hard when Applebloom showed up. Ah, kids.

  591. Anonymous says:

    To be honest, it really wasn't that bad. For some reason I was expecting pictures (which pretty much kept me from reading this for a while).

  592. MrSevens says:

    I for one owe my "brony" status to "Cupcakes". I used to be one of the haters. When I heard there was a fanfic of ponies getting brutally murdered, I thought it would be entertaining. when I was finished I started to read another fanfic, then another. and It pretty much went uphill from there.

  593. TenchiFreak5 says:

    The alternate ending written by milesprower06 was really good, and I would say that it probably should have been given its own page like Rocket to Insanity was. Its really more of a sequel than anything else.

  594. Anonymous says:

    why is it when it comes to kid shows plus violence and gore make it one of the most horrifying things you can ever read or watch on the internet? Some people actually nightmares of reading it. "grimdark" as fuck, hell yeah. And now I enjoy it thanks guys, I'm an official brony

  595. Anonymous says:

    @AnonymousFOR SICK MINDS TO ENJOY<3or those who really dont care. like me. xD

  596. Ace2401 says:

    @TenchiFreak5I tried to get Seth to do just that, but he wouldn't do it. You should ask him yourself though. Maybe if more people bug him about it he will.

  597. Anonymous says:

    i read the goddamn thing, i listened to the musical and i laughed. i don't hate rainbow dash, but the irony of her crying was hilarious…..

  598. Anonymous says:

    mabye, the sequel will see the return of pinkie whit the revenge in her mind, (obviously, killing fluttershy is the revenge) and mabye twilight will have to make a decision between saving fluttershy or killing pinkie, just like a movie, whit the rain! i'm a genious!

  599. Anonymous says:

    Well considering the picture is of pinkie pie wearing an outfit made of pony parts i can guess what this fanfic would be about……. Fucking freaks

  600. Luke says:

    This is a review for the revised version of the original story. Even though this type of plot is quite common, it is still enjoyable. Keeping Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash in character throughout the story certainly helps and overshadows several criticisms I would have otherwise had if this were about a group of characters I had only known for fifty pages or so. This story is by no means original, yet there is indeed something about it that is quite intriguing. I wish it was on fanfiction.net so I could add it to my favorites. I guess I will simply keep it on my E-Reader of choice instead so that I may read it again when the mood strikes since this story is indeed worth another read. Good work.

  601. kittystripes says:

    cupcakes was horrifying… but after reading it, the fan sequel actually wasn't bad. it was fairly interesting to read.oh god, does that make me a bad person?

  602. kittystripes says:

    er, cupcakes 2 rather

  603. Anonymous says:

    Aside from making me frown inside, I wasn't too moved by much of this.At the same time, this is probably the one time I'm thankful for having been exposed to the many horrific and terrible things the internet hides in its darkest corners.

  604. Anonymous says:

    @RarrasdasI wasn't scared at all >.<, actually, it was kinda odd…

  605. Anonymous says:

    That wasn't even bad. I giggled the whole time.

  606. OH GODOH GODOH GOD THE HORROReven though there needs to be a cupcakes 3

  607. Anonymous says:

    Lucas' ending is broke.

  608. Anonymous says:

    Yep, that was pretty brutal. I'm not easily impressed by gore, but torture's a tough one. Especially torture by a formerly trusted good friend. ESPECIALLY a former friend who's an adorable pony.

  609. FlashAj325 says:

    My brain is full of… What's worse than f*ck?Not really.I just skimmed the gory parts.

  610. Anonymous says:

    I have watched open heart surgeries and organ removals on television and they didn't phase me one bit. This story deeply disturbed and saddened me. Rainbow Dash is my favorite character; I love her and I can relate to her in the show. The person who wrote this must have serious depression or some other mental disorder, because I cannot think of any person who would dare to right something as horrible and horrifying as this. The story is an absolute monstrosity. I had to stop reading and just skim over the most gory parts. I beg all of you never to lay eyes on this story. And if you do and you come out of it crying and shaking, I'll be there with a big, heaping I TOLD YOU SO.

  611. Anonymous says:

    I don't get it, this shit is forced as fuck and isn't even a quarter as disturbing as people say.What the fuck is wrong with you.It's just a shitty bad written fanfic, why do you take it seriously at all?Fuck, if I'd imagine it, I mean, even I could write a stupid fanfic, where, let's say Big Mac rapes the Cutie Mark Crusaders, bet this would cause the same amount of drama.I expect an explanation for this and why it is so infamous, I seriously don't get it.

  612. Anonymous says:

    you see, dash did it wrong. If she laughed, her fears would have dissapeared and she'd be safe

  613. Anonymous says:

    Oh god im going to get hated for this, but i actually thought it was kinda funny. especially with the "blank flank" bit at the end.

  614. Zillapony101 says:

    This is my first time reading this well….it was scary and scary as hell. I almost cried on the 1st cupcake one,but on the 1st squeal I cried and cried,because Rarity was one my favorite ponies and killed me inside that she died like that

  615. Floofy Hoof says:

    I don't know why I forced myself to read this all the way to the end. Tears were streaming down my cheeks the entire time. After I finished, I had to throw up. I had nightmares for two nights afterward.I really wish I had headed the warnings.

  616. Anonymous says:

    OH GOD WHY DID I READ ALL OF THEM O_O

  617. Anonymous says:

    Oh come on what the hell is that thing

  618. Hannah says:

    I read the story cupcakes. And that's it? I don't see what the fuss is about? Sure it's gory and dark, but it around Saw levels, and I LOVE the Saw series (but I only watched the first one, keep meaning to watch the other ones.) But I gotta give credit, it's creative.

  619. Anonymous says:

    So if I read through this and at the end the best comment to sumarize how I felt that I could come up with was "lol" does that make me a bad person?

  620. bloomberg says:

    Good celestia…… :(And pinkie, you were one of my favorites……

  621. Craigyas says:

    meh, I still love pinky pie.

  622. Anonymous says:

    i almost pissed my self, poor rainbow dash

  623. I just finished reading it….I don't get it.

  624. Anonymous says:

    I honestly don't see what's so bad about it, myself. Then again, it takes a LOT to creep me out. So. Though, now every time I hear Pinkie's Cupcake song.. I can't help but think of this.

  625. Anonymous says:

    Meh, I've seen worse.

  626. Actually, if you picture the music from Meet the Medic in the background, it makes this almost parody-esque.Pinkie Pie: "Anyvay, zhat is how I lozt my medikal lysense. Heh."Rainbow Dash: "…"

  627. Anonymous says:

    alternate ending by pacce made everything better

  628. Anonymous says:

    right next to the picture of pinkie pie is an ad for a diet with a picture of a cupcake and it says " does your 2011 diet taste like this?"

  629. vree says:

    That wasn't too bad. People are doing all kind of crossovers and genre-twists with FiM now, so a gore horror take isn't that far-fetched. Just how many people went to watch movies like "Saw" even though they usually sucked, right? I feel a lot more revolted when people derail the characters completely, with no resemblence to the show whatsoever, than someone putting a twist like this on them.

  630. MushroomMan says:

    I for one lol'd at the "Hacksaw" line

  631. Anonymous says:

    I'm not really sure why everypony's friggin out about this. Sure, it's gory, but it's not life-scarring. The organ puns were hilarious, by the way. It's sorta like the Water temple in Ocarina of time, it's all hype about how terrible it is, but the actual thing is pretty puny.

  632. Anonymous says:

    Call me crazy, but I love this fic. Best fanfic ever written.

  633. This was actually not all that bad. Do not get me wrong, it's horrible and i hate it, but it did not ruin any characters for me, neither have i stopped loving cupcakes.

  634. 1LTdaniels says:

    Ok just finished reading, with silent hill music on the background, sure quite graphic (thank you vivid imagination), but I still prefer a more Silent Hill kind of terror focused on the atmosphere and mental stress that this Saw kind of terror focused on the (physical) pain.Other than that, those organs puns really made me laugh my flack of, but a little story or character development would have be good, anyway it might not be the greatest piece of literature by itself but it’s such a huge part of the MLP fan-base that everyponi should read it, if only to get the references, so make sure everyponi you know read it. :)

  635. Matrilwood says:

    I loved every minuet of this. I'll pass on the movie but still…It's not that bad (Extremely mild compared to some other stuff I've read), but for something aimed at Bronies I can see why it's infamous.

  636. Anonymous says:

    Dear Pinkie Pool,WHY YOU BE SO GORY?

  637. Anonymous says:

    Well. Could be worse. Pinkie could have killed my FAVORITE pony :D…hey wait. CURSE YOU, PINKIE ;-;

  638. Anonymous says:

    I was thinking for the LONGEST time that this would be a horrifying story… but to be honest, it's NOTHING how I expected. I was thinking something more along the lines of her killing ALL her friends, and to add onto that, I was actually thinking she'd kill alot of people(/or even pets) in Pony Ville. Not just one simple charater. Don't get me wrong, though, Rainbow Dash is my favorite pony, but it would have made the story better if she killed more. And people; STOP FREAKING OUT. Ugh. You're making a big deal over something so stupid! Don't read it if you're not pony enough. I mean… look at the tag! It's [GIMDARK AS ****]. I mean REALLY. This is a good story and all, but I honestly don't see why everyone is so buzzy about it. It's like a horror movie in a book. Same thing. Just using words… and ponies. If you think about, most horror movies are WORSE!! The story isn't bland or boring, though. I was on the edge of my chair the whole time. It was amusing, in a sense. Now, may I also add: I love the getup Pinkie Pie is wearing. It makes things more… mysterious. I also like the tone. Pinkie acts like all innocent about everything. I really liked it… and sorry for acting like a story critic. Just felt like voicing my opionion ^^.

  639. Anonymous says:

    Good Idea- reading pony fan fiction.Bad Idea- reading this one while eating dinner.

  640. Anonymous says:

    I always knew Pinkie was a freak.

  641. Anonymous says:

    You sick fucking bastard, I love Rainbow Dash and look what you did to her.. :'( Look what you fucking did….. Why couldn't it have been Applejack.. :'( why… fuck you… you've killed my heart

  642. Anonymous says:

    Wait, are there any new alternate endings?Theres something on the tvtropes page saying something about a 2part story where pinkie pie gets captured and before her execution, she tells her backstory :3i cant find it D:

  643. Anonymous says:

    Thumbs up if you came here because of knowyourmeme… … … oh wait…

  644. Anonymous says:

    I was horribly disturbed at first, but now I think it's FUN WTF is wrong with me lol

  645. Anonymous says:

    *cries silently in corner*

  646. Anonymous says:

    I am going to find Pinkie Pie and beat every speck of happiness out of her with a 2×4 wrapped in barbed wire and fishhooks. NOT MY DASHIE YOU FIEND! :c

  647. LiteSpeed says:

    This gives a whole new meaning to "Taste the rainbow"

  648. Anonymous says:

    I literally cried when i read this and i can never watch MLP again now

  649. Anonymous says:

    Objectively, this is quite a good story. While there are grammatical errors here and there, it is ultimately very well written, both in terms of structure and language. The characters are also decently in-character, at least, as far as the characters can be considered in-character within the context.It's almost darkly comical – It very much seems inspired by the story of Sweeney Todd, and the humour very much lends itself to the genre of black comedy.Sadly, that is where my praise must end. Subjectively, this is one of the most vile things I have ever read – In the context of fictional subjects, it may very well be the worst. This story is funny in the same way that a Holocaust joke told to a survivor is funny: Typically, one may be able to find such a morbid joke funny, but given the circumstances, it's simply cruel.I really don't have anything more to say – The story is simply unnecassary, distasteful, disgusting, horrifying, vile, an abomination against the very concept of morality, and I didn't like it very much at all.

  650. Kawaii Pony says:

    I read it just yesterday, and I gotta say, its did nearly ruin Pinkie Pie for me – however, I looked on my tumblr, and that my pinkie love back! :)Now then, work through the alternates! :)

  651. Sarita says:

    I finally read this to see what the fuss was about.Halfway through, "Equestria Girls" popped up on my iTunes and I nearly had a heart attack.

  652. Anonymous says:

    I have taken a liking to the alternative ending by milesprower06. While sad, it is still a happier ending which also leads to more character development and some interesting turns.

  653. neji790 says:

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  654. Anonymous says:

    This needs to be locked in the darkest chamber in the lowest layer of hell.

  655. Anonymous says:

    i like this how i like Saw.disturbs me, but still somehow keeps me readingthis story is the most famous MLP fanfic, its kinda legend between bronies (and pegasisters)

  656. 7heSama says:

    …Oh god… you know that morbid curiousity that accompanies fics like this? Yeah, it got the better of me… than I found out it was Rainbow Dash…I will regret this…

  657. 7heSama says:

    Well, that was terrible and pointless.

  658. Mustanx says:

    It wasn't as horrible as I expected. Sure, there were some parts that made shiver of disgust, but there wasn't really something that made me think of the story the rest of the day, not being able to eat and have horrible nightmares.

  659. Dr.Unknown says:

    loved it i lold when pinkie cracked in some jokes golden

  660. Dr.Unknown says:

    oh and i would love to read more of this hope there be more.

  661. bwcoyoten says:

    So I read this to see what all the fuss was about. In general, the story was just gore for gore's sake. The organ puns were bad, which is too bad, because better gags might have made it tolerable.The original ending was, frankly, even more pointless than the story itself. Pacce's alternate ending was a cop-out, but a sweet one. But milesprower06's alternate ending… That was very well done.

  662. BronyPony says:

    Idk why,but i cant get enough of this story

  663. Anonymous says:

    I can't believe I managed to miss a whole page of this! I've been wondering where the whole Apple Bloom thing came from!

  664. Anonymous says:

    It's been five months since the last comment…but Whatevs dude Imma write one anyway. Freedom of speech and all that jazz yo!Oh, BTW this review/comment/thing is gonna contains spoilers. So SPOILER ALERT!!!!!!! For all those who don't want to be spoiled before they read, or you are just not interested in reading I’d recommend to skip it.As others have said, this Fic runs on the shock value of violence/gore for its own sake. And yes, there is little, if anything, that you can take out of this one. I mean, it's not impossible, it's just that to do so you will have to go borderline "Overthiking It" and squint REAL HARD to see anything beyond the senseless slaughter.That being said, it certainly isn't a bad fic…..YEAH I SAID IT! It isn't bad, it just isn’t trying to teach you anything or send a message, and the author is obviously knows it; what else can you call the…lulzy ending with Apple Bloom? I for one write it off as that the author was completely aware of what type of fic it was. This is not a deep, thought provoking fic, but that's alright, because not all fics need to be that way and it still can be entertaining. NOT enjoyable mind you, but entertaining.As for the OOC-ness atmosphere this fic carries…well, what exactly were you expecting people? The whole premise of this thing makes it that everyone involved in this is auto OOC before the first sentence was even written =/ On that note, Rainbow Dash is definitively in character all the way till Pinkie starts the whole thing. Pinki is….imho Pinkie is as IC as you can make her if she really was a mad serial killer.Pinkie Pie though, is the best thing about this fic…and by best I again mean the most entertaining. Her dialogue is…brilliant imho. She's is THE most disturbing thing in the fic. I'm almost tempted to say she is the ONLY disturbing thing, but the graphic description of the whole thing has just enough edge to mark it was disturbing too, not as much as her whole attitude towards the murder though. I liked Pinkie in this one. Hell, I loved all her lines.The “GRIMMDARK AS FUCK” tag is well deserved as this is not a fic for everyone; though, the infamy that follows this fic overhypes it; I don’t think THIS is the most disturbing Pony fic ever made, and if it is then it’s surprisingly tame. I found AKIRA (the movie) far more disturbing than this…but maybe that’s because it was illustrated. It surprised me to be that /b/tards of all people had such a big reaction to this, maybe their imagination is so much above mine that they picture the stuff in their minds in such a way that made it far more disturbing and graphic than what my mind told me it was. I’m also unsure about the whole “It will ruin Pinkie Pie forever” since she was my fave before reading this and she’s STILL is.Anyway, neat read. Interesting representation of Pinkie Pie, the original one has (imo) a lulzy as hell ending with Apple Bloom. And if anything, it would test how much you hate Gilda, Silver Spoon and Diomond Tiara

  665. Anonymous says:

    I'm glad I couldn't picture them as ponies in my head. Pinkie pie was replaced by a nice hannibal lecter kind of guy, while rainbow dash was played by that one guy, of that one movie.It doesn't matter that much, but at least it means I don't associate it with MLP

  666. Anonymous says:

    The end by Lucas is nonexistent.

  667. Harakou says:

    So after all the hype and infamy surrounding this fic, I finally decided to read it. And… I don't see the big deal. Sure it's gory, but it's so overblown and outrageous that it's impossible to take seriously.In fact, I actually thought that this was funny. I was chuckling the whole way, and when she started cracking organ puns I just lost it.

  668. Rain Leaf says:

    No….. not Rarity. I stopped half way. I am going to let ignorance finish out the rest of the story for me.

  669. Anonymous says:

    I…actually found this hilarious. I'm sorry, but how can I NOT like Pinkie Pie going completely disturbing/crazy? XD

  670. Anonymous says:

    Is Pinkie wearing cutie marks, unicorn horns, and pegasus wings…?

  671. Anonymous says:

    This story made me sad inside…I like to think of Pinkie as a pony version of me, because we got the same random personality… BUT RIGHT NOW I FEEL LIKE DIANNE PINKAMINA PIE…

  672. 'Cause I really always knew that my little prankWould be cruel, that's why I got a heater for your flankSeriously, this is totally "A Little Piece of Heaven" with ponies :D

  673. Anonymous says:

    ok i havent read it yet… but from the comments it seems pretty terrible… but i kinda want to read it… any advice???

  674. @AnonymousIt's not bad, it's just gruesome. And even if after reading it you realize it was too much for you, go to youtube and watch the HD trailer for Cupcakes: The Movie. I don't know why, but that video just fixes everything sickening about this story.

  675. Anonymous says:

    This story is messed up, creepy, sad, full of gore etc. But, I thank Pacce and Cartoonhottie2009 for alternate happy endings. You guys rock! Woohoo! Cheers and thousand yays for you ;)

  676. Sapfyre says:

    i am going to be sick, good writing though

  677. Pecan Pie says:

    1——– alcohol helps2——– the puns were good3——– the work inspired good alternate endings where the writers met a challenge and wrote good followups, I especially liked SirenScythe's alt ending because it A) allowed the reader to transition from horror/disgust into sadness and empathy and then into happy YES I SAID IT THE ALT ENDED MADE IT ALL HAPPY AND B) made cupcakes a worthwhile read which it would not have been

  678. KirbyMST3K says:

    You know, as awful as that was, it was VERY well written… i was back and forth between liking it and hating it, turns out, GREAT fic.

  679. Anonymous says:

    Cupcakes, so sweet and tasty ♪Cupcakes, don't be too hasty ♪#Cupcakes, cupcakes cupcakes cupcakes… *sob*

  680. Anonymous says:

    That made me want to cry and be sick. My eyes are tearing up. D:

  681. Anonymous says:

    ugh..when i was reading this, my arms and legs felt like jelly, and my GUT just felt…ugh…scariest thing i have read in a while..

  682. While this story is very disturbing and bloody, I have to say it's not any worse than an episode of Happy Tree Friends.As a Brony, I must say that this fanfic DID give me a second impression on Pinkie Pie, but it didn't ruin the series for me in the slightest. In fact, it made the series even better!Like I said, even though it is really bloody, it is a VERY well written piece, and it inspired me to write a sequel to James Corok's Cupcakes sequel: Le Peteit Four.However, I will put a twist on it… *Evil Laugh*

  683. Anonymous says:

    Wasn't disturbing really, I've seen/heard worse, sorta reminds of happy tree friendsAlso you don't just chop them up, you isolate them in an abandons hospital with flickering or broken lights and toy with their mental state, eventually you can't turn them against each other and they'll cut each other up for you.Also the hospital is because I love irony. ~ Suomy Nona ~

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